[SU/D] - Spirit Shards (New)
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I'd assume it'd mean she'd pick the best profiles of the lot and accept those, and if there were two of equally good quality she couldn't decide between, she'd pick the one that was posted first. First in gets priority, but they have to be of an acceptable standard.
The Freeshooter
No. II Xigbar
T_T... hmmmmmm
Name: Ryu Matsuri
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Home Planet: Umbra
Home Town: Vircon Village
Race: Human
Appearance:
Ryu's attire is one of simplicity. He wears a white sleeveless judo Ki with a black belt tied around his waist. The black belt has the length and half the strength of a whip. His shins has leg warmers which is also padded and metal plated. But it does not have the metal spikes on them. The warmers with metal plating is worn under the judo ki pants. Standing at 6'1, Ryu has brown hair and light brown eyes while his slightly tan muscle skin shows signs of strength as well as minor scratches and cuts that healed naturally.
Personality: Ryu is an optimistic. He is always looking on the brighter side of any situation and is always striving to perform his best. While he is laid back and cheerful, when is he alone, Ryu's demeanor flips 180 degrees from laid back and cheerful to somber and somewhat tense since he does not want to be alone.
First Impressions: Anyone that sees Ryu can easily say that he is nuts due to his choice of weapons (i.e none at all) thinking that the gloves are just for visual appeal. Another first reaction to his appearance is that Ryu is laid back and at ease.
Speciality:
Battle ability: Push punch/Kick: While they may look like regular punches and kicks, the real effect is after the hit lands, Ryu can follow through the attack to knock an enemy back and gain some breathing space.
Battle ability: The famed O.I.P. It's full name is the One Inch Punch. As the name suggest, it is a punch from an inch that is done to delivery internal damage equal to a full on punch to an opponent and it also knocks them down. It is hard to avoid due to the extreme close proximity of the attack.
Battle ability: Ki usage. The harsh training in hand to hand combat born from experience and training gave birth to Ki. In the bare form, Ki just glows around the user and adds no benefits apart from visual awe and to some extend, force of presence. Ryu managed to salvage it into two forms of fighting which is explained. While he can interchange between the two, Ryu can't use both forms at once.
Ki Melee: In this form, the glow shrinks until it form fits the user. It enhances the attack and defense of the user to the point that the max damage the user can possibly do is create a small crater similar to a sledgehammer swing.
Ki Range: In this form, the glow shrinks until it form fits around the hands. In this form, Ryu is able to sent the Ki as a beam. The beams itself is linear and disperse if it either hits the enemy or misses them.
Weapons: He wears gloves with metal plating on the top of his hands. The metal plating has several small spikes on them. His legs has leg warmers with metal plating on them which is hidden by his Ki pants legging.
Armour: Ryu wear no armor as it would hinder his fighting style.
Skills: The harsh training that Ryu does forces him to learn First Aid. Ryu can also live off of the land by hunting, locating edible plants and fresh water.
History: Ryu was born in the village of Vicron. The village is renowned for having great armed fighters. While a normal boy up to age 5, a custom grew where the boys choose their weapon that interest them the most. Many of the boys chose the conventional weaponry like swords, axes, lances and the such. Ryu found them to be cumbersome. It was then that he had an idea. 'If we can train with weapons, why can't we train the body to act as a weapon?'
That one comment turned into Ryu's source of ridicule as everyone laughed at the boy who wanted to fight with his hands. Ryu went with that fighting style. One old man saw Ryu's determination and decided to help him out by handing him a pair of gloves and leg warmers that had metal plated on him as well as a Judo Ki. Under the old man's guidance, Ryu's training into unarmed combat went off without a hitch.
Six years after his training started at age 11, the old man that Ryu came to trust died. Ryu was devastated over his death. Without anyone to guide him, Ryu withdrew from the village into the forest nearby where many people fear to enter. It was there that Ryu trained in unarmed combat to the point that he was extremely proficient in it. By other standards, he was considered a master in his fighting style.
Six years later, at age 17, Ryu returned to Vircon. By then, many people has forgotten all about him as they held their annual Free for all tournament. Ryu decided to enter while most of the combatant laughed at his choice of fighting. Ryu ignored them as he prepared to fight them. Needless to say, Ryu demolished everyone to the village's awe.
The beaten combatants did not take this easily as they surrounded Ryu to kill him. Noticing the thirst for blood, Ryu decided to stop holding back. The fruits of his training went on full display as he unleashed his mastery of unarmed combat and Ki overwhelmed them. It was then that one of the adults asked if he was the boy that wanted to fight unarmed 12 years back. Ryu nodded as he left the arena.
Seeing no reason to stay in the village, Ryu heard news of the Festival of the Gods. With only that as his destination, Ryu left the village and started to make his way to the Shrine where the Festival of the Gods were to take place.
Character Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAcmO8YKws0&feature=related
Battle Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=54uTJDHAkPY
Other: Ryu loves cats and will give food to them. If he could get away with it, Ryu will take the cats with him.
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Home Planet: Umbra
Home Town: Vircon Village
Race: Human
Appearance:
Ryu's attire is one of simplicity. He wears a white sleeveless judo Ki with a black belt tied around his waist. The black belt has the length and half the strength of a whip. His shins has leg warmers which is also padded and metal plated. But it does not have the metal spikes on them. The warmers with metal plating is worn under the judo ki pants. Standing at 6'1, Ryu has brown hair and light brown eyes while his slightly tan muscle skin shows signs of strength as well as minor scratches and cuts that healed naturally.
Personality: Ryu is an optimistic. He is always looking on the brighter side of any situation and is always striving to perform his best. While he is laid back and cheerful, when is he alone, Ryu's demeanor flips 180 degrees from laid back and cheerful to somber and somewhat tense since he does not want to be alone.
First Impressions: Anyone that sees Ryu can easily say that he is nuts due to his choice of weapons (i.e none at all) thinking that the gloves are just for visual appeal. Another first reaction to his appearance is that Ryu is laid back and at ease.
Speciality:
Battle ability: Push punch/Kick: While they may look like regular punches and kicks, the real effect is after the hit lands, Ryu can follow through the attack to knock an enemy back and gain some breathing space.
Battle ability: The famed O.I.P. It's full name is the One Inch Punch. As the name suggest, it is a punch from an inch that is done to delivery internal damage equal to a full on punch to an opponent and it also knocks them down. It is hard to avoid due to the extreme close proximity of the attack.
Battle ability: Ki usage. The harsh training in hand to hand combat born from experience and training gave birth to Ki. In the bare form, Ki just glows around the user and adds no benefits apart from visual awe and to some extend, force of presence. Ryu managed to salvage it into two forms of fighting which is explained. While he can interchange between the two, Ryu can't use both forms at once.
Ki Melee: In this form, the glow shrinks until it form fits the user. It enhances the attack and defense of the user to the point that the max damage the user can possibly do is create a small crater similar to a sledgehammer swing.
Ki Range: In this form, the glow shrinks until it form fits around the hands. In this form, Ryu is able to sent the Ki as a beam. The beams itself is linear and disperse if it either hits the enemy or misses them.
Weapons: He wears gloves with metal plating on the top of his hands. The metal plating has several small spikes on them. His legs has leg warmers with metal plating on them which is hidden by his Ki pants legging.
Armour: Ryu wear no armor as it would hinder his fighting style.
Skills: The harsh training that Ryu does forces him to learn First Aid. Ryu can also live off of the land by hunting, locating edible plants and fresh water.
History: Ryu was born in the village of Vicron. The village is renowned for having great armed fighters. While a normal boy up to age 5, a custom grew where the boys choose their weapon that interest them the most. Many of the boys chose the conventional weaponry like swords, axes, lances and the such. Ryu found them to be cumbersome. It was then that he had an idea. 'If we can train with weapons, why can't we train the body to act as a weapon?'
That one comment turned into Ryu's source of ridicule as everyone laughed at the boy who wanted to fight with his hands. Ryu went with that fighting style. One old man saw Ryu's determination and decided to help him out by handing him a pair of gloves and leg warmers that had metal plated on him as well as a Judo Ki. Under the old man's guidance, Ryu's training into unarmed combat went off without a hitch.
Six years after his training started at age 11, the old man that Ryu came to trust died. Ryu was devastated over his death. Without anyone to guide him, Ryu withdrew from the village into the forest nearby where many people fear to enter. It was there that Ryu trained in unarmed combat to the point that he was extremely proficient in it. By other standards, he was considered a master in his fighting style.
Six years later, at age 17, Ryu returned to Vircon. By then, many people has forgotten all about him as they held their annual Free for all tournament. Ryu decided to enter while most of the combatant laughed at his choice of fighting. Ryu ignored them as he prepared to fight them. Needless to say, Ryu demolished everyone to the village's awe.
The beaten combatants did not take this easily as they surrounded Ryu to kill him. Noticing the thirst for blood, Ryu decided to stop holding back. The fruits of his training went on full display as he unleashed his mastery of unarmed combat and Ki overwhelmed them. It was then that one of the adults asked if he was the boy that wanted to fight unarmed 12 years back. Ryu nodded as he left the arena.
Seeing no reason to stay in the village, Ryu heard news of the Festival of the Gods. With only that as his destination, Ryu left the village and started to make his way to the Shrine where the Festival of the Gods were to take place.
Character Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RAcmO8YKws0&feature=related
Battle Theme: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=54uTJDHAkPY
Other: Ryu loves cats and will give food to them. If he could get away with it, Ryu will take the cats with him.
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ok this is where I make people mad at me. Lmfao but I did warn people that it would be first in first serve.I just want to clarify that the Interest check thread was not for holding your place in the RP, if you wanted a specific space held for you, you should have come and spoken to me like the others did. An interest check (I thought) was to express interest so the person creating the RP knew that there would be some interest lmfao.
Secondly @Gavin, I actually did not think it was clear that you were asking to hold your place in the RP...to me it sounded like you were quitting :S
@Bathoin, Although your character is written out well he unfortunately does not really fit the theme of Umbra, it's meant to be a dark and evil place, people are very rarely optimistic, they think about war, they're thieves and criminals and corrupt, etc. So I'm going to have to NOT ACCEPT your bio
Now.
@Exocræt has asked me personally for the female on Umbra and I've accepted.
@Vircon
@Sexy Beast and
Noblesse Oblige
You guys get first go at creating your bios for Umbra (they'll have to be male seeing as Ringo has the female). If I don't accept any of their bio's then someone else can have a go at taking the spot.
I think it's fair seeing as all these people asked me for a spot and made it clear and they all asked relatively early on.
I am sorry, sorry, sorry to any one who really wanted to join, I don't meant to sound like a bitch but meh....sometimes ya gotta!
Oh yeah and Tipsy, you're accepted
she sounds so cute!
Actually Squid, if you look back to the post, you will see that I put in an edit a little after 2 AM my time reserving a spot in Umbra a good six hours before anyone else put in a reservation in the thread for Umbra.
I don't see how anyone can misconstrue my saying that I'll be using an idea I had in reserve for this RP being me quitting.
Sorry if I seem rude but...what kind of language was that?
That, my dear Kevin, would be Hymnos (or a poor attempt at it in any case). It is a made up language for the game Ar Tonelico. For a good example of what it should sound like, listen to my character's theme song. That is Hymnos. This is to be the official Cheytan Language that Cheytans use along with the national Relucesco language.
I think Lucia and Meo will get on swimmingly, they have a few things in common
I'd imagine so, but Lucia seems a lot more level headed so im looking forward to how these comrades in the same boat would interact
Oh yeah and Tipsy, you're accepted
Huzzah! She's in! Btw, i forgot to add this into the bio (but its nothing too important), but Hymnos is the Cheytan Language along with whatever is spoken in Relucesco. Hymnos sounds like EXEC Cosmoflips, my character theme song (By Kokia. I really like her songs) and is sung or chanted rather than spoken. She wouldnt be using it besides a few words here and there, but i just wanted to let you know.
Indeed, matured Lucia for once shall be interesting. I can see them being quite supportive and sisterly since they have a weakness in common. And at least Lucia will be more relaxed around her, since she can't use magic.
shall be interesting. I can see them being quite supportive and sisterly since they have a weakness in common. And at least Lucia will be more relaxed around her, since she can't use magic.
more like i can imagine Meo going nuts about to charge someone and lucia holding her back by the scruff of her neck, legs and arm flailing around
I've already got the picture of my character picked out, and I'll be making her race up as well.
I'm really looking forward to this. She's going to be adorable.
I'm really looking forward to this. She's going to be adorable.
Hahaha, that could be half cute, half funny least Lucia's grip is harder to escape from than any of the other characters xD
least Lucia's grip is harder to escape from than any of the other characters xD
@Meteora,
Please proof read through your bio and just fix those mistakes and just be mindful of them when writing out posts. I believe in giving the newbie a go so I'll accept you once you're done with proof reading and editing your bio
I've re-edited my Characters bio, changed the wording and tenses of the said mistakes in question.
Ladies, and Gentlemen my bio:
Name:
Wilhelm "Loewe" von Fehrenbach
Age:
24
Gender:
Male
Homeworld:
Umbra
Hometown:
Colligo
Race:
Pheonician
Race Description:
a race of humanoid beings with golden angel wings. They live mainly in the forests and mountains and a few do venture out and uncommonly has contact with humanity. Pheonicians can reincarnate if they die naturally, (ie natural causes or sickness), but not so the case if they die unnaturally (ie physical death/battle). They have an average lifespan of 150 years. They also have the ability to hide their wings to make themselves look entirely human. Other physical features include rounded ears and varying nose shapes and sizes like humans do. Pheonicians have circular eyes, but their natural eye colors are of tremendous range, making it somewhat easier to pick out Pheonicians from humans.
Appearance:
-Eyes: Wilhelm's irises are of a golden yellow color, a common color among the Pheonician race. With thin eyebrows and a well rounded pupils, they give the look of a normal human being.
-Hair: Wilhelm has long flowing blonde hair on his head. He has a few bangs on the side of his head with most of the hair falling down to the bottom of his neck and to his upper back, where his wings are.
-Skin: Wilhelm's skin tone is pale, like many of the other Umbran citizens due to the lack of sunlight. Despite this, he still retains his youthful appearance despite the pale skin.
-Body Type:
-Height: 5'3"
-Weight: 135 lbs, mostly muscle however skinny for his age.
-Attire: Wilhelm wears a red raincoat with white and silver trim extending from the arms and front of the jacket, there is a grey design on the end of both sleeves that look like arrows. All of these are made with cotton and is useful for warmth in the higher altitudes in the night skies over Umbra.
-Accessories: Wilhelm wears a long chain with a pendulum like top at the end around his neck. The pendulum has an emblem of an astehtic black butterfly with wings extended.
-Other: Wilhelm has white feathered angel wings which span a full 6 feet from wingtip to wingtip.
Personality:
Specialty:
Weapons:
Skills:
History:
Character Theme:
Battle Theme:
Name:
Wilhelm "Loewe" von Fehrenbach
Age:
24
Gender:
Male
Homeworld:
Umbra
Hometown:
Colligo
Race:
Pheonician
Race Description:
a race of humanoid beings with golden angel wings. They live mainly in the forests and mountains and a few do venture out and uncommonly has contact with humanity. Pheonicians can reincarnate if they die naturally, (ie natural causes or sickness), but not so the case if they die unnaturally (ie physical death/battle). They have an average lifespan of 150 years. They also have the ability to hide their wings to make themselves look entirely human. Other physical features include rounded ears and varying nose shapes and sizes like humans do. Pheonicians have circular eyes, but their natural eye colors are of tremendous range, making it somewhat easier to pick out Pheonicians from humans.
Appearance:
-Eyes: Wilhelm's irises are of a golden yellow color, a common color among the Pheonician race. With thin eyebrows and a well rounded pupils, they give the look of a normal human being.
-Hair: Wilhelm has long flowing blonde hair on his head. He has a few bangs on the side of his head with most of the hair falling down to the bottom of his neck and to his upper back, where his wings are.
-Skin: Wilhelm's skin tone is pale, like many of the other Umbran citizens due to the lack of sunlight. Despite this, he still retains his youthful appearance despite the pale skin.
-Body Type:
-Height: 5'3"
-Weight: 135 lbs, mostly muscle however skinny for his age.
-Attire: Wilhelm wears a red raincoat with white and silver trim extending from the arms and front of the jacket, there is a grey design on the end of both sleeves that look like arrows. All of these are made with cotton and is useful for warmth in the higher altitudes in the night skies over Umbra.
-Accessories: Wilhelm wears a long chain with a pendulum like top at the end around his neck. The pendulum has an emblem of an astehtic black butterfly with wings extended.
-Other: Wilhelm has white feathered angel wings which span a full 6 feet from wingtip to wingtip.
Personality:
Specialty:
Weapons:
Skills:
History:
Character Theme:
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Umbra Character Biography - Unfinished.
Name: Loki Tryan
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Home Planet: Umbra
Home Town: Punio
Race: "Mistake" - A Mistake is the name given to those born from the tree of life with defects. Essentially like being born mutated. This happens when the DNA in the egg sacks get muddled while growing in the tree. Mistakes are usually premature or are born very late. They are often born with Monster DNA making them feral and untrustworthy and a liability to the people around them. Most are also born brain dead but there are cases of intelligent Mistakes being born. Once a month the Lord Haynus sends his men to the Tree of Life to destroy any Mistakes that have been born, they are unneeded and are an embarrassment to the Umbrians . However sometimes they miss a few.
Appearance:
Loki's personality is mostly typical of a Mistake. He is brash, not thinking before he acts and is very aggressive. He thinks he is stronger than he actually is and will often run into a fight without any planning no matter how tough it will be. This gets him and his companions into a lot of unnecessary trouble that could have been avoided if he could think like a normal person. He just loves to fight, he can't really control it as it's literally built into his DNA.
He is very jealous of people who are 'normal' and is rather hostile towards them, he'll call them names and insult their abilities. He'll act like he's better than anyone even though he knows he's not, but Loki especially hates women more than anything else, there's no place for women on Umbra. Acerbus didn't create them for a reason, therefore they shouldn't even exist in his eyes. He's made many women cry before with the things he has said to them.
Relationships have never crossed his mind and he's never found himself in love or attracted to anyone before, most of the time all he thinks about is the next fight or who to insult next but, when alone he's a little more quiet and civil. Although he doesn't look it, Loki actually does think about things. He'll often mull over his existence, over the planet, wonder why Acerbus would have created such imperfect beings, deep things like that. Sometimes he even has kind moments if he doesn't mind the person he's with, but these moments are very rare and his version of kind is to insult them a little less.
Loki is not a very smart guy which is why he tends to keep his mouth shut in times of serious discussion. He'd rather keep his opinions to himself in those cases, but if he doesn't agree with what someone is saying he'll most likely insult them. He does not care for personal Hygiene and will go for days without a shower, things like that just aren't important to him. He doesn't find an interest in the same things as other people, he has no family or real friends, he has nothing he holds dear to him and thus he has not really developed any kind of feelings of attachment and doesn't really know how to care.
He is also eager to impress people and can easily be fooled into doing stupid things. If someone were to bet that he couldn't do something, he would instantly do it just to prove them wrong. Many pranks have been played on him due to this aspect of his personality, some have been life threatening but each time he's managed to get out of the situation alive.
First Impressions:
When meeting Loki, people are either scared of him because of the way he looks or they think he is a tool. The people who think he is a tool are pretty much right on the money. Not many will try to get to know him or hold a conversation with him and it's no wonder with the way he acts. Being a Mistake is the lowest form on Umbra, worse than dirt and peoples opinions of him reflect that greatly especially because he does nothing to change their opinions on his kind.
Speciality:
Loki is a fighter pure and simple. He knows no magic of any kind, it's not even possible for him to learn magic. Instead he relies on his speed and strength to get him through a battle.
He has a high pain thresh hold and is fearless in battle making his fighting style rather sloppy yet somehow affective. He is constantly getting hit by the enemy but that doesn't seem to stop him from soldiering on. He could be near death and would still try and fight. It's a wonder why he hasn't lost any limbs yet.
He is quite weak to elemental magic however and it only take a few hits from an elemental before he's pretty much out of the fight.
Weapons:
Loki's main weapon are two twin swords. He's not named them as he doesn't feel that it's really of any importance to name an inadament object. He wears them straight down his back so he can easily pull them from their sheath when needed. The entire sword is made of steel but the handle is wrapped in leather to make it comfortable in his hands. There is a curved piece of steel that comes off the handle which is razor sharp and can be used in very close combat.
In dire situations or when wanting to be insulting Loki will use his claws or teeth as a weapon, he's been known to scratch a man's eyes out or bite their nose off. But it's rare that he does these things.
Armour:
Loki does not wear any armour and prefers to fight in his usual attire. He likes to feel comfortable when fighting and feels armour would just weigh him down. Being a fearless fighter he also doesn't seem to care if he gets hurt in battle therefore there really is no point in wearing any.
Skills:
Fearlessness: Being fearless although mostly stupid can actually come in handy. If there is a dangerous obstacle in the way that no one wants to tackle you can be sure that Loki will happily volunteer to do it as he does not grasp the idea of fear.
Acrobatic: He's rather flexible and acrobatic. He can fit into tight spots, do fancy flips, land on his feet from great heights, scale walls with just just his bare hands with ease, etc.
History:
Loki emerged from his seed 29 years ago, breaking free from the leathery pouch he'd called home for 9 months. He was born a Mistake. A being with mixed DNA. He'd been lucky having been born a week after the Lord Haynus ordered his sweep of the soil around the tree of life, destroying any child born with disfigurements or any child brain dead. They were not welcome in Umbra, they made the planet look weak and imperfect.
He lay in the soil for two days, watching the other infants get plucked by wandering travellers. Some were picked to be raised as knights, some for people who just wanted a child to raise...there were many reasons why people picked up babies from the tree but Loki didn't seem to be of any interest to them until the second night. An older gentleman named Buck spotted the boy with sharp fangs and claws. For some reason this intrigued him. Buck raised the baby in his Eternus home as his own, naming him Loki after his own father but he never really raised Loki with love, instead he was distant towards the boy, told him to embrace his feral side, taught him not to trust and not to love.
On Loki's 11th birthday his adopted father took him to 'a friends house' in Punio, one of the larger cities in umbra. Buck told him to wait in the hall, and then he and the friend who was named Chis moved another room. The boy was curious and his rebellious nature lead him to peek through the opening in the door. What he saw was Chis placing a large sack of Gold into Buck's hands. He didn't understand what it meant until it was time to leave and Buck told him he was to live with Chis now.
The Mistake didn't cry and he didn't really show any kind of emotion...he wasn't taught to get emotional over things like this but deep down in the pit of his stomach he felt complete sadness and betrayal but he swore that this would be the last time he'd let anyone make him feel like that and he build a wall in his mind.
The next few years of his life he was trained by Chis with a bunch of other boys, he was the only Mistake of the lot but he swore some of them were more feral than he was. Chis was the leader of a bounty hunters group called the Tryan's. Each boy in the group would take the name as their last name, branding them. He would train the boys and then send them out on missions. Most would be to slay a certain creature or capture someone dead or alive and then he'd collect the reward.
The training was harsh, the boys would be punished with lashings or they'd be starved for a week if they stepped out of line. They were taught to feel no emotion other than hate and anger. Being fearless and ferocious was a must. The Tyran's were a group to be feared after all.
Loki fit in rather well here and eventually he passed his training at 18 years old and was sent on his first mission. It was to kill an Ancient Oxen who'd mauled an entire family. The mission was tough, it was just him and two other males. The boys found the Oxen and immediately engaged it in battle. The Oxen proved to be too powerful and killed the boys Loki was with. This didn't really bother him, he hadn't been fond of the boys but they did manage to wound the creature, cutting it's limb almost off. As the monster tried to regain it's balance the Mistake rushed forwards using his twin swords to slice it's head cleanly off. He took a tooth as a souvenir and brought the head back for Chis.
Since then Loki has been one of Chis's prized fighters, racking in almost 50% of the reward income. Unfortunately his reckless behaviour has kept him from advancing in ranks as almost every mission he's been in he's gotten someone killed or badly inured.
However Loki grew bored of this life and had a solo mission of his own to take care of. He decided that this year he would leave the Tyran's and seek out Buck, the man who abandoned him. He planned to teach the man a lesson for what he'd done all those years ago. So Loki set off on his travels to Eternus, not even realising he'd be arriving in the middle of the Festival of Acerbus.
Character Theme:
Battle Theme:
Name: Loki Tryan
Age: 29
Gender: Male
Home Planet: Umbra
Home Town: Punio
Race: "Mistake" - A Mistake is the name given to those born from the tree of life with defects. Essentially like being born mutated. This happens when the DNA in the egg sacks get muddled while growing in the tree. Mistakes are usually premature or are born very late. They are often born with Monster DNA making them feral and untrustworthy and a liability to the people around them. Most are also born brain dead but there are cases of intelligent Mistakes being born. Once a month the Lord Haynus sends his men to the Tree of Life to destroy any Mistakes that have been born, they are unneeded and are an embarrassment to the Umbrians . However sometimes they miss a few.
Appearance:
Eyes: Loki's Iris's are pure white which is very rare even amongst Mistakes, his pupils are small and round and gives his eyes a psychotic look. They sit within sinister shaped sockets which don't help the look at all. His eyebrows are pale, thin and inwardly pointed and his eyelashes are short but thick. Also white in colour. He has a frown crease between his eyebrows almost permanently.
Hair: White and shaggy, his hair spikes off in all directions at the top but eventually falls neatly around his face, before jutting out towards the bottom again. He does not take care of his hair and hardly ever washes it. People often comment behind his back that it's a little dirty looking.
Skin: Having never seen the light of day, Loki's skin is so pale it's see-through. It is covered in scars and cuts from the fights he's been in. His skin is also rather dirty from the lack of showering.
Body Type: Strong and muscular, Loki's body is well toned and gives the impression that he works out a lot, he isn't overly bulky however as his body is naturally lean, it does mean that he's also built for speed.
Height: Six foot one, there is nothing particularly special about his height.
Weight: 70kg. His weight is mostly his muscles and height. He does not have any fat on his body.
Clothing: Loki is usually dressed in leather, He wears a black leather body suit, with blue trim. It's open along his stomach revealing his abs and bellybutton but covers his chest and top half of his arms. The collar is a wide-buckled circular head-hole which sits very loosely around his shoulders. Over this he wears baggy black cotton pants held up by a thick leather belt with a small inbuilt pouch. The pants are then tucked into high boots, laces usually left open. He has thick, leather fingerless gloves on both hands with a gold buckle at the opening.
Accessories: Around his neck he wears a long chain with a polished Ancient Oxen's tooth attached to it, something he collected from one of his missions.
Other: Besides the strange eyes, the only other way you'd be able to tell he was a Mistake (other than his personality) was by looking at his teeth and fingernails. His teeth are pointed and jagged, they're incredibly sharp. His finger nails are black in colour and are long and strong. They grow to a certain point rather quickly no matter how many times he cuts them. His finger tips are also a blackish colour.
Personality: Hair: White and shaggy, his hair spikes off in all directions at the top but eventually falls neatly around his face, before jutting out towards the bottom again. He does not take care of his hair and hardly ever washes it. People often comment behind his back that it's a little dirty looking.
Skin: Having never seen the light of day, Loki's skin is so pale it's see-through. It is covered in scars and cuts from the fights he's been in. His skin is also rather dirty from the lack of showering.
Body Type: Strong and muscular, Loki's body is well toned and gives the impression that he works out a lot, he isn't overly bulky however as his body is naturally lean, it does mean that he's also built for speed.
Height: Six foot one, there is nothing particularly special about his height.
Weight: 70kg. His weight is mostly his muscles and height. He does not have any fat on his body.
Clothing: Loki is usually dressed in leather, He wears a black leather body suit, with blue trim. It's open along his stomach revealing his abs and bellybutton but covers his chest and top half of his arms. The collar is a wide-buckled circular head-hole which sits very loosely around his shoulders. Over this he wears baggy black cotton pants held up by a thick leather belt with a small inbuilt pouch. The pants are then tucked into high boots, laces usually left open. He has thick, leather fingerless gloves on both hands with a gold buckle at the opening.
Accessories: Around his neck he wears a long chain with a polished Ancient Oxen's tooth attached to it, something he collected from one of his missions.
Other: Besides the strange eyes, the only other way you'd be able to tell he was a Mistake (other than his personality) was by looking at his teeth and fingernails. His teeth are pointed and jagged, they're incredibly sharp. His finger nails are black in colour and are long and strong. They grow to a certain point rather quickly no matter how many times he cuts them. His finger tips are also a blackish colour.
Loki's personality is mostly typical of a Mistake. He is brash, not thinking before he acts and is very aggressive. He thinks he is stronger than he actually is and will often run into a fight without any planning no matter how tough it will be. This gets him and his companions into a lot of unnecessary trouble that could have been avoided if he could think like a normal person. He just loves to fight, he can't really control it as it's literally built into his DNA.
He is very jealous of people who are 'normal' and is rather hostile towards them, he'll call them names and insult their abilities. He'll act like he's better than anyone even though he knows he's not, but Loki especially hates women more than anything else, there's no place for women on Umbra. Acerbus didn't create them for a reason, therefore they shouldn't even exist in his eyes. He's made many women cry before with the things he has said to them.
Relationships have never crossed his mind and he's never found himself in love or attracted to anyone before, most of the time all he thinks about is the next fight or who to insult next but, when alone he's a little more quiet and civil. Although he doesn't look it, Loki actually does think about things. He'll often mull over his existence, over the planet, wonder why Acerbus would have created such imperfect beings, deep things like that. Sometimes he even has kind moments if he doesn't mind the person he's with, but these moments are very rare and his version of kind is to insult them a little less.
Loki is not a very smart guy which is why he tends to keep his mouth shut in times of serious discussion. He'd rather keep his opinions to himself in those cases, but if he doesn't agree with what someone is saying he'll most likely insult them. He does not care for personal Hygiene and will go for days without a shower, things like that just aren't important to him. He doesn't find an interest in the same things as other people, he has no family or real friends, he has nothing he holds dear to him and thus he has not really developed any kind of feelings of attachment and doesn't really know how to care.
He is also eager to impress people and can easily be fooled into doing stupid things. If someone were to bet that he couldn't do something, he would instantly do it just to prove them wrong. Many pranks have been played on him due to this aspect of his personality, some have been life threatening but each time he's managed to get out of the situation alive.
First Impressions:
When meeting Loki, people are either scared of him because of the way he looks or they think he is a tool. The people who think he is a tool are pretty much right on the money. Not many will try to get to know him or hold a conversation with him and it's no wonder with the way he acts. Being a Mistake is the lowest form on Umbra, worse than dirt and peoples opinions of him reflect that greatly especially because he does nothing to change their opinions on his kind.
Speciality:
Loki is a fighter pure and simple. He knows no magic of any kind, it's not even possible for him to learn magic. Instead he relies on his speed and strength to get him through a battle.
He has a high pain thresh hold and is fearless in battle making his fighting style rather sloppy yet somehow affective. He is constantly getting hit by the enemy but that doesn't seem to stop him from soldiering on. He could be near death and would still try and fight. It's a wonder why he hasn't lost any limbs yet.
He is quite weak to elemental magic however and it only take a few hits from an elemental before he's pretty much out of the fight.
Weapons:
Loki's main weapon are two twin swords. He's not named them as he doesn't feel that it's really of any importance to name an inadament object. He wears them straight down his back so he can easily pull them from their sheath when needed. The entire sword is made of steel but the handle is wrapped in leather to make it comfortable in his hands. There is a curved piece of steel that comes off the handle which is razor sharp and can be used in very close combat.
In dire situations or when wanting to be insulting Loki will use his claws or teeth as a weapon, he's been known to scratch a man's eyes out or bite their nose off. But it's rare that he does these things.
Armour:
Loki does not wear any armour and prefers to fight in his usual attire. He likes to feel comfortable when fighting and feels armour would just weigh him down. Being a fearless fighter he also doesn't seem to care if he gets hurt in battle therefore there really is no point in wearing any.
Skills:
Fearlessness: Being fearless although mostly stupid can actually come in handy. If there is a dangerous obstacle in the way that no one wants to tackle you can be sure that Loki will happily volunteer to do it as he does not grasp the idea of fear.
Acrobatic: He's rather flexible and acrobatic. He can fit into tight spots, do fancy flips, land on his feet from great heights, scale walls with just just his bare hands with ease, etc.
History:
Loki emerged from his seed 29 years ago, breaking free from the leathery pouch he'd called home for 9 months. He was born a Mistake. A being with mixed DNA. He'd been lucky having been born a week after the Lord Haynus ordered his sweep of the soil around the tree of life, destroying any child born with disfigurements or any child brain dead. They were not welcome in Umbra, they made the planet look weak and imperfect.
He lay in the soil for two days, watching the other infants get plucked by wandering travellers. Some were picked to be raised as knights, some for people who just wanted a child to raise...there were many reasons why people picked up babies from the tree but Loki didn't seem to be of any interest to them until the second night. An older gentleman named Buck spotted the boy with sharp fangs and claws. For some reason this intrigued him. Buck raised the baby in his Eternus home as his own, naming him Loki after his own father but he never really raised Loki with love, instead he was distant towards the boy, told him to embrace his feral side, taught him not to trust and not to love.
On Loki's 11th birthday his adopted father took him to 'a friends house' in Punio, one of the larger cities in umbra. Buck told him to wait in the hall, and then he and the friend who was named Chis moved another room. The boy was curious and his rebellious nature lead him to peek through the opening in the door. What he saw was Chis placing a large sack of Gold into Buck's hands. He didn't understand what it meant until it was time to leave and Buck told him he was to live with Chis now.
The Mistake didn't cry and he didn't really show any kind of emotion...he wasn't taught to get emotional over things like this but deep down in the pit of his stomach he felt complete sadness and betrayal but he swore that this would be the last time he'd let anyone make him feel like that and he build a wall in his mind.
The next few years of his life he was trained by Chis with a bunch of other boys, he was the only Mistake of the lot but he swore some of them were more feral than he was. Chis was the leader of a bounty hunters group called the Tryan's. Each boy in the group would take the name as their last name, branding them. He would train the boys and then send them out on missions. Most would be to slay a certain creature or capture someone dead or alive and then he'd collect the reward.
The training was harsh, the boys would be punished with lashings or they'd be starved for a week if they stepped out of line. They were taught to feel no emotion other than hate and anger. Being fearless and ferocious was a must. The Tyran's were a group to be feared after all.
Loki fit in rather well here and eventually he passed his training at 18 years old and was sent on his first mission. It was to kill an Ancient Oxen who'd mauled an entire family. The mission was tough, it was just him and two other males. The boys found the Oxen and immediately engaged it in battle. The Oxen proved to be too powerful and killed the boys Loki was with. This didn't really bother him, he hadn't been fond of the boys but they did manage to wound the creature, cutting it's limb almost off. As the monster tried to regain it's balance the Mistake rushed forwards using his twin swords to slice it's head cleanly off. He took a tooth as a souvenir and brought the head back for Chis.
Since then Loki has been one of Chis's prized fighters, racking in almost 50% of the reward income. Unfortunately his reckless behaviour has kept him from advancing in ranks as almost every mission he's been in he's gotten someone killed or badly inured.
However Loki grew bored of this life and had a solo mission of his own to take care of. He decided that this year he would leave the Tyran's and seek out Buck, the man who abandoned him. He planned to teach the man a lesson for what he'd done all those years ago. So Loki set off on his travels to Eternus, not even realising he'd be arriving in the middle of the Festival of Acerbus.
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Name: Calden
Age: Looks to be the age of 31, but in fact is much older.
Gender: Male
Home Planet: Reclusco
Home Town: One of the very few towns that are unknown hidden amongst one of the forest.
Race: Expel Dragon Long ago while the world was still young, but after the two worlds became split there was a group of people that worshiped dragons. They lived secluded from the rest of the humans so they naturally lived in far hard to reach places. High up in mountains or in deep in forest, due to this after many years the people asked the dragons for a form of protection. The dragons listened and formed a sort of pact with the humans. This pact aloud them to borrow some of the dragons power thus making it their own. At first it was just enhanced physical strength and endurance, but after many years it soon led to becoming more dragon like themselves till it manifested itself inside of a transformation. The only stipulation the dragon's places upon the pact was they were to remain as they were, that is hidden from the rest of humans, and to tell no one of how they got their power. The final content of the pact was for them to live in harmony with nature as they been before the pact, since the only reason they asked for it was to help them survive against the many beast and challenges that always presented themselves to them.
Appearance: Calden stands at a height of seventy-four inches(6'2'') and weighs approx 175 lbs. He has a slim muscular build, with no heavy defined tones. Just enough tone to show muscle development. Located on his right mid arm his the mark of his tribe, the dragon skull. Located on the back of his left shoulder is a one inch narrow claw mark, this signifies the mark of his divine dragon powers. Has a circular shaped face with the pointed tip of his ears lining up with his eyes. His eyes are a pale dark blue hue, with his hair light brown in color coming down to the bottom of his neck. Its slightly short cut and sleek in look. Other then his unusual eye color,ears, and two tattoos Calden can pass himself looking like any other human.
Personality: A easy going yet serious person. He’s someone who kind of goes with the flow situation, making the best of what is given at the time. Does not like to get involved into unnecessary fights, unless he feels like there is someone who needs to be protected. Take example some someone picking on a homeless man or attacking a person when they are down. Honor is a very serious matter for him, he won’t handle any types of cowardly acts in a fight. When someone insults him he just brush’s it off and laughs with them about it. This tends to make some people made and try to pick some fights with him
First Impressions: When most people take a glance at him, he gives off an aura of someone you wouldn’t normally want to approach. However if were one to talk to him, they would find that he can be quite friendly. When people ask questions about him, he just usually gives them a name and says he’s a traveler. This is only because he believed people would fear him for being part dragon or try and kill him instead.
Speciality: Dragon warrior- A simple transformation where Calden grows about six inches and his skin starts to turn a dark green color. His hair grows down to the middle of his back and takes on a black color. His finger tips and toes also turn into claws with his fingers tips becoming five inch’s long and his toes seven. He also goes more muscularly defined. Takes about two minutes to complete transformation.
Energy dragon- This transformation starts off like the dragon warrior except this time his skin turns into a grayish color, his hair is now more of a light blue. Also now a point of wings appear on his back that are six feet long from the point in back to his wig tip. In this form he has access to chi based blast from his mouth, and the ability to breathe and use magic of fire, and light. This transformation also takes two minutes to complete. (Will learn later in the RP.)
Divine dragon- Similar to his first two transformations, though this time his skin turns a pure white, and his hair turns a snow white. His eyes disappear only to be replaced by a set of five green eyes that take on a v shaped pattern on his forehead. Also an additional two wings appear below his initial two from the energy dragon. This form he can use spirit based powers and the ice element as basis for attacks. ( Will learn later in the RP.)
Advance transformation- By expending the rest of his energy Calden can turn into a full dragon. This transformation does not require and upkeep as Calden enters a berserk like status, this transformation typically last for only three-five minutes.
Chi and spirit energy blast- The only two other types of attacks he has in his human form. He can use this in a variety of ways though.
Hands- By gathering his energy to his hands he focuses on creating a ball of either type of energy then by bringing the bottom two portions of his hands together he can launch an attack. Each blast takes away 1/20th of his total energy. This will leave him slightly drained. He also has a unique ability of gathering both energies chi and spirit into a different hand, by launching them together their destructive power is nearly doubled. How by doing this he uses nearly all his energy, just barely enough for him to stay conscious. It also exhaust him completely as for the next twenty minutes he is unable to do anything else.
Sword- Same principle as with his hands, he focus into his sword instead. The sword then takes a glow, white for chi and blue for spirit. He can then launch waves of the energy at his opponent. Each wave or strike takes 1/10th of his energy away. To invoke this skill he must expend 1/10th of his energy. Also when coated his sword strikes can do slightly more damage.
Hand mounted blades- Again like his sword he can coat his weapon in chi or spirit energy, while doing this he can inflict more damage on his opponent if they are unable to block and he hits an unprotected spot.
Focus- By entering a type of mediation he can begin to restore some of his lost energy. In order to keep focus he must not attack as he can only resort to dodging. If he would be hit in this state only 30% of the total energy he recovered would be restored instead. Restores 1/20th of his energy for every five minutes.
Acute Hearing- Because of his ears he can typically hear in a ten mile radius, within that ten miles however only four miles of this is truly effective. Meaning within those four miles can he depict what most of the sounds are. Such as someone walking or hearing a river, waterfall.
Heightened smell- Can easily smell and keep apart individual smells for up to two and half miles.
Extended Vision- Can see for a radius of thirty miles, this would only be if he is flying. Can easily depict people due to seeing in different colors he also sees their body heat. Though when standing his vision is confound to the landscape. So if he were standing in front of a forest of tress, he would only see about three miles ahead, though we would have to change the focus of his eyes to do so.
Weapons: Besides the claws he has from his dragon transformation, Calden uses only two other types of weapons. One of the weapons he uses is a five foot long katana. The blade itself is black in color from being made of a meteorite that crashed in his village before he was born, it is also only one inch thick. This give it extra sharpness so it is more damaging to an unprotected opponent. His next weapon is actually two, he used a pair of hand mounted blades. They are triangular in shape and made of silver. The blades them selves are six inch’s long from bottom to top and four inch’s wide from side to side.
Armour: The only type of armor Calden wears is a flexible silver chain mesh, covered by a silver vest. This allows it to grow to cover his body and torso, when he invokes his transformations. It is also specially enchanted to grow when he goes into a full dragon transformation. However under this circumstance the armor will only cover the front of his chest.
Skills: His magic is dependent on which dragon form he is in. Even then it is limited to a type of energy breath attack or a energy blast attack.
History: Calden was born on a special year, yet not even his parents who gave birth to him knew about this special moment. Calden was born in a special generation, in fact 10,000 years when the last person like him was born. Though it would take some time till his power awoken, and even then he himself would not know what it truly meant. The extra birthmark confused everyone of his people, there was no known records of anyone being born into their race with two birthmarks. As time when on so did Calden grow, and with it a increase in his powers. He expressed great control over his powers more so in anyone in his age group which was not much, only about 10 young ones. His power was even greater then some of the elders, this lead them to keep a close eye on Calden as he was growing up as they feared his being may now be a bad omen.
It was only when a few of his friends were playing in the forest a ways from town did his real powers emerge. One of the hunters managed to get a shoot of and kill one of his friends, the remaining of them three of his friends and himself were startled and began to run, though not before a bullet was fired at himself. At that instant time seemed to slow down and a primal urge built up inside Calden. Without even realizing it he had blacked out subconsciously assumed a pure white full dragon form, and while there he killed the three hunters. When he came to his friends were gone, and the hunters bodies were scattered about the forest and his mouth was red and caked with dried blood. Confused he went back to his village but was stunned to see the elders standing guard. He was shocked when they informed him of what happened, his friends or observed his brutality ran as he was tearing through the hunters, afraid he would somehow turn on them. The elders then hearing of this were afraid that he could not control his power, so waiting for his return to explain to him what happened, and the other decision to exile him from their village. Shocked and feeling betrayed Calden hung his head in shame and walked back into the forest. He now travels the world going from town to town doing what he can to get by, all while searching for a new place to call home.
Now on one of his days of aimless wandering he was walking through a graveyard. Honesty he didn't care as he was just going where his feet carried him. Though something strange happened he stumbled upon the hidden rift that connected the two worlds. Lost and being in a daze of mixed fear and amazement he began to run except this time he ended up on the Umbra side, due to his running he literally went flying into something a wall of some sorts. When he came to it looked like he was in some ruins of a sort, and he went around looking for an exit. This alone took him some time, when he finally exited he noticed something strange that the skies were dark. He felt as it were perfectly normal to see this but still it was something a little uneasy to see. When he tried to place it and figure out where he was all he could recall was who and what he was. He remembered nothing of where he was from. So now he sets off trying to find a village or town to see if he can gather any information.
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Age: Looks to be the age of 31, but in fact is much older.
Gender: Male
Home Planet: Reclusco
Home Town: One of the very few towns that are unknown hidden amongst one of the forest.
Race: Expel Dragon Long ago while the world was still young, but after the two worlds became split there was a group of people that worshiped dragons. They lived secluded from the rest of the humans so they naturally lived in far hard to reach places. High up in mountains or in deep in forest, due to this after many years the people asked the dragons for a form of protection. The dragons listened and formed a sort of pact with the humans. This pact aloud them to borrow some of the dragons power thus making it their own. At first it was just enhanced physical strength and endurance, but after many years it soon led to becoming more dragon like themselves till it manifested itself inside of a transformation. The only stipulation the dragon's places upon the pact was they were to remain as they were, that is hidden from the rest of humans, and to tell no one of how they got their power. The final content of the pact was for them to live in harmony with nature as they been before the pact, since the only reason they asked for it was to help them survive against the many beast and challenges that always presented themselves to them.
Appearance: Calden stands at a height of seventy-four inches(6'2'') and weighs approx 175 lbs. He has a slim muscular build, with no heavy defined tones. Just enough tone to show muscle development. Located on his right mid arm his the mark of his tribe, the dragon skull. Located on the back of his left shoulder is a one inch narrow claw mark, this signifies the mark of his divine dragon powers. Has a circular shaped face with the pointed tip of his ears lining up with his eyes. His eyes are a pale dark blue hue, with his hair light brown in color coming down to the bottom of his neck. Its slightly short cut and sleek in look. Other then his unusual eye color,ears, and two tattoos Calden can pass himself looking like any other human.
Personality: A easy going yet serious person. He’s someone who kind of goes with the flow situation, making the best of what is given at the time. Does not like to get involved into unnecessary fights, unless he feels like there is someone who needs to be protected. Take example some someone picking on a homeless man or attacking a person when they are down. Honor is a very serious matter for him, he won’t handle any types of cowardly acts in a fight. When someone insults him he just brush’s it off and laughs with them about it. This tends to make some people made and try to pick some fights with him
First Impressions: When most people take a glance at him, he gives off an aura of someone you wouldn’t normally want to approach. However if were one to talk to him, they would find that he can be quite friendly. When people ask questions about him, he just usually gives them a name and says he’s a traveler. This is only because he believed people would fear him for being part dragon or try and kill him instead.
Speciality: Dragon warrior- A simple transformation where Calden grows about six inches and his skin starts to turn a dark green color. His hair grows down to the middle of his back and takes on a black color. His finger tips and toes also turn into claws with his fingers tips becoming five inch’s long and his toes seven. He also goes more muscularly defined. Takes about two minutes to complete transformation.
Energy dragon- This transformation starts off like the dragon warrior except this time his skin turns into a grayish color, his hair is now more of a light blue. Also now a point of wings appear on his back that are six feet long from the point in back to his wig tip. In this form he has access to chi based blast from his mouth, and the ability to breathe and use magic of fire, and light. This transformation also takes two minutes to complete. (Will learn later in the RP.)
Divine dragon- Similar to his first two transformations, though this time his skin turns a pure white, and his hair turns a snow white. His eyes disappear only to be replaced by a set of five green eyes that take on a v shaped pattern on his forehead. Also an additional two wings appear below his initial two from the energy dragon. This form he can use spirit based powers and the ice element as basis for attacks. ( Will learn later in the RP.)
Advance transformation- By expending the rest of his energy Calden can turn into a full dragon. This transformation does not require and upkeep as Calden enters a berserk like status, this transformation typically last for only three-five minutes.
Chi and spirit energy blast- The only two other types of attacks he has in his human form. He can use this in a variety of ways though.
Hands- By gathering his energy to his hands he focuses on creating a ball of either type of energy then by bringing the bottom two portions of his hands together he can launch an attack. Each blast takes away 1/20th of his total energy. This will leave him slightly drained. He also has a unique ability of gathering both energies chi and spirit into a different hand, by launching them together their destructive power is nearly doubled. How by doing this he uses nearly all his energy, just barely enough for him to stay conscious. It also exhaust him completely as for the next twenty minutes he is unable to do anything else.
Sword- Same principle as with his hands, he focus into his sword instead. The sword then takes a glow, white for chi and blue for spirit. He can then launch waves of the energy at his opponent. Each wave or strike takes 1/10th of his energy away. To invoke this skill he must expend 1/10th of his energy. Also when coated his sword strikes can do slightly more damage.
Hand mounted blades- Again like his sword he can coat his weapon in chi or spirit energy, while doing this he can inflict more damage on his opponent if they are unable to block and he hits an unprotected spot.
Focus- By entering a type of mediation he can begin to restore some of his lost energy. In order to keep focus he must not attack as he can only resort to dodging. If he would be hit in this state only 30% of the total energy he recovered would be restored instead. Restores 1/20th of his energy for every five minutes.
Acute Hearing- Because of his ears he can typically hear in a ten mile radius, within that ten miles however only four miles of this is truly effective. Meaning within those four miles can he depict what most of the sounds are. Such as someone walking or hearing a river, waterfall.
Heightened smell- Can easily smell and keep apart individual smells for up to two and half miles.
Extended Vision- Can see for a radius of thirty miles, this would only be if he is flying. Can easily depict people due to seeing in different colors he also sees their body heat. Though when standing his vision is confound to the landscape. So if he were standing in front of a forest of tress, he would only see about three miles ahead, though we would have to change the focus of his eyes to do so.
Weapons: Besides the claws he has from his dragon transformation, Calden uses only two other types of weapons. One of the weapons he uses is a five foot long katana. The blade itself is black in color from being made of a meteorite that crashed in his village before he was born, it is also only one inch thick. This give it extra sharpness so it is more damaging to an unprotected opponent. His next weapon is actually two, he used a pair of hand mounted blades. They are triangular in shape and made of silver. The blades them selves are six inch’s long from bottom to top and four inch’s wide from side to side.
Armour: The only type of armor Calden wears is a flexible silver chain mesh, covered by a silver vest. This allows it to grow to cover his body and torso, when he invokes his transformations. It is also specially enchanted to grow when he goes into a full dragon transformation. However under this circumstance the armor will only cover the front of his chest.
Skills: His magic is dependent on which dragon form he is in. Even then it is limited to a type of energy breath attack or a energy blast attack.
History: Calden was born on a special year, yet not even his parents who gave birth to him knew about this special moment. Calden was born in a special generation, in fact 10,000 years when the last person like him was born. Though it would take some time till his power awoken, and even then he himself would not know what it truly meant. The extra birthmark confused everyone of his people, there was no known records of anyone being born into their race with two birthmarks. As time when on so did Calden grow, and with it a increase in his powers. He expressed great control over his powers more so in anyone in his age group which was not much, only about 10 young ones. His power was even greater then some of the elders, this lead them to keep a close eye on Calden as he was growing up as they feared his being may now be a bad omen.
It was only when a few of his friends were playing in the forest a ways from town did his real powers emerge. One of the hunters managed to get a shoot of and kill one of his friends, the remaining of them three of his friends and himself were startled and began to run, though not before a bullet was fired at himself. At that instant time seemed to slow down and a primal urge built up inside Calden. Without even realizing it he had blacked out subconsciously assumed a pure white full dragon form, and while there he killed the three hunters. When he came to his friends were gone, and the hunters bodies were scattered about the forest and his mouth was red and caked with dried blood. Confused he went back to his village but was stunned to see the elders standing guard. He was shocked when they informed him of what happened, his friends or observed his brutality ran as he was tearing through the hunters, afraid he would somehow turn on them. The elders then hearing of this were afraid that he could not control his power, so waiting for his return to explain to him what happened, and the other decision to exile him from their village. Shocked and feeling betrayed Calden hung his head in shame and walked back into the forest. He now travels the world going from town to town doing what he can to get by, all while searching for a new place to call home.
Now on one of his days of aimless wandering he was walking through a graveyard. Honesty he didn't care as he was just going where his feet carried him. Though something strange happened he stumbled upon the hidden rift that connected the two worlds. Lost and being in a daze of mixed fear and amazement he began to run except this time he ended up on the Umbra side, due to his running he literally went flying into something a wall of some sorts. When he came to it looked like he was in some ruins of a sort, and he went around looking for an exit. This alone took him some time, when he finally exited he noticed something strange that the skies were dark. He felt as it were perfectly normal to see this but still it was something a little uneasy to see. When he tried to place it and figure out where he was all he could recall was who and what he was. He remembered nothing of where he was from. So now he sets off trying to find a village or town to see if he can gather any information.
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Meteora, So I've accepted your bio and placed your character on the main page, could you do one thing for me though, can you tidy the Bio up just a little lmfao you seem to have accidentally posted it twice in your post 
Vircon, Right! So I've read through your bio and a couple of things to fix:
1. As discussed can you put a little detail under race about the Expel Dragons? It will be good to give us a little history on where they came from etc, doesn't have to be much, just a few sentences.
2. I'm also going to ask that you fix his Speciality a bit. Could you pick maybe one or two dragon forms for now, so he has some room to grow and learn later in the RP? I've asked people to pick two Elements only so could you also change it so he only knows two elements? He just seems a little broken is all. He can still be a unique and exceptional creature but just start the RP a little weaker please.
3. The stuff you put under other, I reckon should go under skills instead
4. And lastly can you put some spaces between your history just so it looks a little nicer (is being picky) haha
Once that's done I'll accept you into the RP
Vircon, Right! So I've read through your bio and a couple of things to fix:
1. As discussed can you put a little detail under race about the Expel Dragons? It will be good to give us a little history on where they came from etc, doesn't have to be much, just a few sentences.
2. I'm also going to ask that you fix his Speciality a bit. Could you pick maybe one or two dragon forms for now, so he has some room to grow and learn later in the RP? I've asked people to pick two Elements only so could you also change it so he only knows two elements? He just seems a little broken is all. He can still be a unique and exceptional creature but just start the RP a little weaker please.
3. The stuff you put under other, I reckon should go under skills instead
4. And lastly can you put some spaces between your history just so it looks a little nicer (is being picky) haha
Once that's done I'll accept you into the RP