Ultimate Elementum v2 [Sign-up & discussion]

Tsukianei said:
Say virgil, if I made a new bio to use as Darkness, how would that work out?
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Try it out and I'll have a look. Seeing as we're not exactly far into the RP, I'm not opposed to the idea. Just give it some due consideration before applying though, because I won't be so generous as the RP goes on. =P

Espada said:
I see, I need to RP villains more often. :hmmm:
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Seeing as, by definition, your character could be considered that of a minor one, you could always try for a second - to test the waters with villainy. You wouldn't have to be part of the Gallacarian army, but I'd be alright with you controlling two characters if you like.

No harm in trying, right?
 
Apologies for the double-post.

So guys, I was thinking. Turel having an army at his disposal, and Cornithia... well, not, I'm thinking of retracting the idea that Cornithia has lost its army by the start, and there's a pretty good portion of it left. For all intents and purposes, I think it could very well make things more interesting this time around, especially for the likes of Vikki serving as a tactician.

Thoughts?
 
By all means, do whatever you want to make it interesting. You can make it just that the Corinthian army is battered like hell and outnumbered.
 
Or whatever you wish, anyway, you're the GM. I wouldn't mind a continued war anyway, and that gives our resident tactician, I suppose :), something to strategise about? Helps to get our Elementals together, if anything else.
 
I'm supporting the idea. But, I was also hoping to use a pre-made bio for the Dark element, so if I can get a clue as to how comes to be, I can choose a better fitting one...seen as everyone has already been given powers, I'm unsure how he could be given his :hmmm:
 
right now my internet is having issues to the point that i'm using my phone to post.

right now i wont be on till it comes back

EDIT: Internet's back...now where was I...:hmmm:

Oh yes, I don't mind the Cornithian Army playing the role of a battered and scattered army. In fact, it reminds me of a few video games I've played before. (and yes, a few of which does involve Ace Combat for those who know me that well.)

If anything, I might need to look up on a few strategies myself.
 
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Sounds like a good idea to me. Like you say, Seraphyna will then be forced to become the tactician she was training to be and it gives the Elements a force to work alongside.

Perhaps parts of the units used in battles have survived and the Elements can find these and bring them together? The Cornithian Army are bound to be feeling demoralized, so if the elements were to gather them together and restore their faith that if they work hard and don't let despair take them over, they can win, their morale would be lifted etc etc..

That sounded so cheesy... >_>
 
Yeah. Who knows about the plot twists that we can plan as the role play progresses? Guess this is the real fun about role playing. Expect the unexpected given the right circumstances.
 
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Name: Waltz Noctis

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Alignment: Unknown

Element: /

Physical Appearance: Waltz has a long hair, black like a night that shine in the light. He has black eyes that gives mysterious look to other people. Mystery and calm can be seen in his eyes, but even something that you can be afraid of. He has black earring on his left ear that makes him good looking. He is wearing a white mask that protects half of his face, only his right side of the face. His wearing a black shining armor that protects his body. Armguards that looks like are made from the dragon's claws that shining in the dark. It has claws where the fingers are. On his chest is a pierced armor. It looks like that he was pierced in battle, it's sized is a size of sword's edge. He is wearing a black shining legguards that protects his legs from the attacks. On his feet he is wearing black boots that shine like they are made from black crystals. He looks magnificent and when he is standing in the light, his armor is shining like it's made from the shining black crystals.

Preference in Clothing: Waltz prefers armor that can protect him from the many attacks. He thinks about every other type of protective outifts nothing more than sure death, but in armor he sees protection.

Physical Abilities: Strength – He is very strong. He is average muscled but he has the strenght to lift a giant Broadsword with only one arm. When he is angry his strenght increase as he can wield a giant broad sword without too much trouble.Speed – He is really fast and can dodge many attacks. His attacks aren't so fast but he can runs fast so he with speed he have the advantage before the strenght.Vitality – He can takes attacks because of his tough armor. Shining crystals are protecting the armor in the first place, so if his shining crystals are being destroyed, he won't be able to take many attacks. Magic can increase the damage of his shining crystals.Stamina- He has a lot of energy and he can runs a lot. He can last in the battle for some time without getting too much tired. After some time of running and fighting he will get tired. He can run for several minutes in his top speed and then he will get tired and his attacks will get weaker.

Preferred Weapon (And general description of starting weapon): He is wielding a giant Broad Sword that can pierce anything. Handle is made from black shining crystals. Sword's edge is made from the blacks crystals as well. Sword is looking mysterious as it has some mysterious power. Waltz gathering energy from the battles in order to unleash it's hidden power. Waltz is calling a sword Deathbringer. It's 5 to 6 feet long, with a single-edged, enormously wide blade.His second weapon is a spear, made from dark crystals to that cannot broken. Spear is long and has a long range. Spear's edge is sharp and can pierce almost everything. Waltz carrying it in one arm but when he is carrying it with two arms, spear's power became even more powerful and it became even more faster and harder to dodge it. Waltz is calling a spear Odin's Anger. It can pierce almost every armor, but armors made from white shining crystals he cannot pierce.

Personality: Waltz is calm and mysterious. He is not a man that you can trust. Of his mysterious personality, many people are afraid of him. Sometimes he is arrogant, he don't care for anything or anyone. He hasn't got any friends, he is always alone. He is a lone wolf. He is searching for his goals without anyone's help or aid. He don't trusts anyone and he always ignoring people around him. His goals are always are unknown to everyone and he always doing everything secretly. Around friends Waltz doesn't talk much. He is quiet and calm, ignoring everybody else. When Waltz is alone he is quiet and calm, a mysterious person. He will stand in everybody's way evn if he knows that he cannot win. He doesn't care for the size or might of his opponent. He only cares to win. If someone do someting to him, but apologise after that he will be angry, but had calm look on his face. He will just pass by. He will never kill innocent persons, he will kill only those that stands in his way or the ones that insulted him. He fights without mercy, so all those who oppose him doesn't get any mercy. He doesn't have any mercy to the bandits and the like. He is trying to not kill aperson that attacks him if he knows him. If he kill him in self defence that means that he didn't have any other option.

History: Little is known about Waltz, only it's known that he was once a royal knight from kingdom that was destroyed. The rumors says that he betrayed his lord and that he killed him and hundred of imperial guards that were protecting his lord. He defeated them all by himself. After he dissapeared his kingdom was destroyed. No one knows why he defeated his own lord. Some says that he has a powers of an angels and that he wish to destroy the world.
 
So uh, hey, are you new to roleplaying at all? Just curious.


Final MomentX said:
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Name: Waltz Noctis

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Alignment: Unknown

Element: /

Physical Appearance: Waltz has a long hair, black like a night that shine in the light. He has black eyes that gives mysterious look to other people. Mystery and calm can be seen in his eyes, but even something that you can be afraid of. He has black earring on his left ear that makes him good looking. He is wearing a white mask that protects half of his face, only his right side of the face. His wearing a black shining armor that protects his body. Armguards that looks like are made from the dragon's claws that shining in the dark. It has claws where the fingers are. On his chest is a pierced armor. It looks like that he was pierced in battle, it's sized is a size of sword's edge. He is wearing a black shining legguards that protects his legs from the attacks. On his feet he is wearing black boots that shine like they are made from black crystals. He looks magnificent and when he is standing in the light, his armor is shining like it's made from the shining black crystals.

Preference in Clothing: Waltz prefers armor that can protect him from the many attacks. He thinks about every other type of protective outifts nothing more than sure death, but in armor he sees protection.

Physical Abilities: Strength – He is very strong. He is average muscled but he has the strenght to lift a giant Broadsword with only one arm. When he is angry his strenght increase as he can wield a giant broad sword without too much trouble.Speed – He is really fast and can dodge many attacks. His attacks aren't so fast but he can runs fast so he with speed he have the advantage before the strenght.Vitality – He can takes attacks because of his tough armor. Shining crystals are protecting the armor in the first place, so if his shining crystals are being destroyed, he won't be able to take many attacks. Magic can increase the damage of his shining crystals.Stamina- He has a lot of energy and he can runs a lot. He can last in the battle for some time without getting too much tired. After some time of running and fighting he will get tired. He can run for several minutes in his top speed and then he will get tired and his attacks will get weaker.

Preferred Weapon (And general description of starting weapon): He is wielding a giant Broad Sword that can pierce anything. Handle is made from black shining crystals. Sword's edge is made from the blacks crystals as well. Sword is looking mysterious as it has some mysterious power. Waltz gathering energy from the battles in order to unleash it's hidden power. Waltz is calling a sword Deathbringer. It's 5 to 6 feet long, with a single-edged, enormously wide blade.His second weapon is a spear, made from dark crystals to that cannot broken. Spear is long and has a long range. Spear's edge is sharp and can pierce almost everything. Waltz carrying it in one arm but when he is carrying it with two arms, spear's power became even more powerful and it became even more faster and harder to dodge it. Waltz is calling a spear Odin's Anger. It can pierce almost every armor, but armors made from white shining crystals he cannot pierce.

Personality: Waltz is calm and mysterious. He is not a man that you can trust. Of his mysterious personality, many people are afraid of him. Sometimes he is arrogant, he don't care for anything or anyone. He hasn't got any friends, he is always alone. He is a lone wolf. He is searching for his goals without anyone's help or aid. He don't trusts anyone and he always ignoring people around him. His goals are always are unknown to everyone and he always doing everything secretly. Around friends Waltz doesn't talk much. He is quiet and calm, ignoring everybody else. When Waltz is alone he is quiet and calm, a mysterious person. He will stand in everybody's way evn if he knows that he cannot win. He doesn't care for the size or might of his opponent. He only cares to win. If someone do someting to him, but apologise after that he will be angry, but had calm look on his face. He will just pass by. He will never kill innocent persons, he will kill only those that stands in his way or the ones that insulted him. He fights without mercy, so all those who oppose him doesn't get any mercy. He doesn't have any mercy to the bandits and the like. He is trying to not kill aperson that attacks him if he knows him. If he kill him in self defence that means that he didn't have any other option.

History: Little is known about Waltz, only it's known that he was once a royal knight from kingdom that was destroyed. The rumors says that he betrayed his lord and that he killed him and hundred of imperial guards that were protecting his lord. He defeated them all by himself. After he dissapeared his kingdom was destroyed. No one knows why he defeated his own lord. Some says that he has a powers of an angels and that he wish to destroy the world.
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It seems to me in the first instance (apologies if I'm wrong here), that not a great deal of attention was applied when making this bio. I'm not one to set minimum requirements for participants, but I do expect a level of standard - something which, honestly, I don't feel is being met here. No offence intended!

There are a number of things I'm weary of in particular. Firstly this supposedly destroyed kingdom - is there a name? Are you going to expand on that?
Secondly, if he were to wear armour "to protect against many attacks", surely he would not be able to run fast? I'm ok with the strength increasing when angry because of the logical trail to adrenaline, but wielding a giant broadsword with one hand is a bit much for my tastes.
Thirdly, I've no idea what these shining crystals are. Can you elaborate?



Sorry if I've come across as a little harsh here - but I'm going to have to refuse this particular entry. :( Thanks for applying though.
 
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Tsukianei said:
I'm supporting the idea. But, I was also hoping to use a pre-made bio for the Dark element, so if I can get a clue as to how comes to be, I can choose a better fitting one...seen as everyone has already been given powers, I'm unsure how he could be given his :hmmm:
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Oops. :britt:

If your pre-made bio matches what I've posted as my criteria, post away and I'll scan it over. As for how he'd be given his powers, I'd regard it as a past tense and just edit my post saying who gets what element and why. If you want to edit your first post to reflect the change of circumstance, by all means, or simply request it be deleted and start over. We'll continue naturally from that point as if you were on-time.
 
There are a number of things I'm weary of in particular. Firstly this supposedly destroyed kingdom - is there a name? Keeping in mind that this is still the world of FFIX.
Secondly, if he were to wear armour "to protect against many attacks", surely he would not be able to run fast? I'm ok with the strength increasing when angry because of the logical trail to adrenaline, but wielding a giant broadsword with one hand is a bit much for my tastes.
Thirdly, I've no idea what these shining crystals are. Can you elaborate? Again, this is still FFIX as we know it.
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uh Saix, since when did Ultimate Elementum move to Gaia???
 
Yeah, actually, he was referring to a post made by FinalMomentX in page 9. Apparently, his character is a reference to that Black Waltz boss or something. Used quite a number of keywords relating to Gaia that should be further elaborated upon since this isn't a world of FFIX.
 
Derp derp.

I was hopping between RPs when making that post, so me asking anyone to expand on FFIX was a complete brainfart on my part and I do apologise. =[
 
Lmfao Virgil. XDDD Oh I does adores you. -smoosh;- Silly sod.


Is it me to post again yet? I don't wanna leave people waiting for weeks like I did before. ;_;
 
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