Original [Information and Disscussion] Ballad of the Fallen

[Gaige]

Discussion for my story. If you have anything to say, say it here. Information will be posted shortly.

Credit where credits due. Thanks to Tia for coming up with the title.

Character bios will go up here shortly.

 

[Lebreau]

*cracks whip* Next chapter, you. And character bios, I wanna see them.

I liiiiiiiiiike it. Although... Tia.. what's happening to Tia? D=

I laughed at the bits with Velcro and Kelly... and the dress.

What's with the random blacking out and sudden headaches that every was getting...? Confusing.

*pokes for more*

 

[Sabriel]

Wow Diar, love the detail and effort put into this. Velcro xD

Keep it up and post more, Diar <3

 

[Noblesse Oblige]

Your writing was amazing

I only wish mine was as well.

 

[Subeinu]

Your babies, naow
Moving on...

I love your writing. You put alot of detail into it and the Kelly parts made me lol. Poor poor dress.
Awaiting the next chapter

 

[Amizon]

This is seriously the best story I've read in ages! You had everyone nailed in this chapter. The parts with Kelly and Velcro in particular had me laughing so hard. Vikki and Mandi kinda scare me, though. Please put more up soon!

 

[Diana]

Lol
It was really good. Made me laugh with Kelly's bits.
Majjooorrr good.
I cannot spell that word.
Brilliant. Loved it.

(can you tell i've been drinking?)

 

[Linnaete]

Better late than ever - I was going to post a response earlier. xD

Like I said in the SB, I've really enjoyed reading it. You've taken FFF members' names here and you've more or less nailed them as characters with similar personalities. The Kelly bit - sounds like an accurate depiction of her in the story.

A few tense parts are also there for good mix - Ami's and Damon's bit for example. It does darken it considerably. Keep going!

 

[Amizon]

Oho, now I like this chapter. It may be short, but it's detailed and precise. Nice of me to call it a cheesy name. That's me, all right! Bless Tia, she's hit her head too hard. And I love Jess being all demanding. I wonder who that was at the end? xD

Keep writing, Diar! I wanna know more soon.