[SU/D] Corinith

Just a heads up for some things that i noticed.

For Sapphire, she cant have cybernetic arms and augments on her arms. She must have an organic arm for the arms augment.

As for her apartment, 22nd floor is actually kinda ini the mist, which is essentially the slums. the mist reaches around 600 feet which is about 40-50 floors. Since your characters seem rather high up the social ladder, id think theyd be living well above that level.
 
Tipsynaruto said:
For Sapphire, she cant have cybernetic arms and augments on her arms. She must have an organic arm for the arms augment.
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They aren't on her arms, they're in her hands...and I neglected to mention that it was just her arms, not her hands, that were mostly cyberized. I'll edit that so that there is a distinction.

Tipsynaruto said:
As for her apartment, 22nd floor is actually kinda ini the mist, which is essentially the slums. the mist reaches around 600 feet which is about 40-50 floors. Since your characters seem rather high up the social ladder, id think theyd be living well above that level.
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I have no concept of height whatsoever...:ffs:
 
oooh... so only parts of her arm are cybernetic huh... i thought it was like my character where she had her entire arm replaced with a prosthesis
 
Tipsynaruto said:
oooh... so only parts of her arm are cybernetic huh... i thought it was like my character where she had her entire arm replaced with a prosthesis
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She cyberized parts of her arms for similar reasons, yet she's had to keep parts organic so that she can use the augments in her hands. She could create a mechanical device to create the nanites instead, but it'd overheat - the only reason she doesn't burn her hands off and melt her arms is because of her bodysuit, so exposed machinery would probably explode - and its doubtful that the nanites would have a link to her if she didn't create them directly...which would make them much harder to control, etc.

I should have been more specific, so sorry for any misunderstandings, and thanks for pointing it out :lew:
 
Welcome back to the darkside, Martel. :ryan: They're all accepted, of course. Like I said before, I couldn't find anything wrong, which made me very happy. Of course, I could have just missed something... :ahmed:

But I don't think I did. :hmmm:

Anywho, welcome to the RP. :ryan:

Now we wait for Raye, who is unfortunately really busy with college stuffs. Hopefully she'll have it up soon, but she is working on it. :gasp:
 
Excuse me my dear friend Ringo Star, when will we start this RP? I am quite keen and you are teasing me by not starting it :(
 
When Raye finishes her bio I'll start it. Raye's had a shit week, though. However, I have it on good authority that she'll be done soon. :grin:

So, it will be started very soon. I do apologize for the wait, though. :gasp:
 
Woot! And i think i gound a good battle music for my Robot XD. On another note, i just replayed portal and realised that using GLADoS as an example for my robot's voice wasnt the smartest move. Ill be editting it soon.

EDIT: OMFG! I cant believe the second half of my post was for another rp =.=
 
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