Theme: Music
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* Entrants are not allowed to vote for their own entries.
* Voting will end in 6 days. (Sorry guys, tad shorter this week.)
* Feedback is greatly appreciated, and highly encouraged.



The slightly rough background makes the entire piece feel a little like a painting. The colours are soft, too, like watercolours. The softness of the background works very well with the render; had the background been more vibrant, the right hand side could have distracted from the main point of focus. My only real qualm is the text, which is a little hard.
It doesn't feel like part of the piece, though the placement and size are good. A more rounded font may have worked better.
I love the overall composition of thie piece. The vectors are stylish - somehow, they suggest the girl is surrounded in music! - and the colours are well balanced. The lighting effects work well to blend the render in without washing out the effects. I'm not 100% sure about the smudging, particularly that around the girl's hair, as it creates a messiness which doesn't quite fit in with the rest of the piece. The text is fantastic.
I've always been fond of light text with a stroke. ^.^ 

