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Bleach: The End of Everything
!!THIS IS NOT A ROLEPLAY!!

Ok, I’m planning on writing a verrrrrrrrry long Bleach fic. It’s going to be as though the Manga and Anime characters never existed. It will be very loosely based around the actual events of Bleach but modified because the character interactions and such will be entirely different. So the question is, would you like to see yourself portrayed in my Bleach Fiction?

It’s pretty simple. You fill out the information form at the bottom and either PM it to me or post it here. I’ll then either expand what you have written (correct things that don’t fit or go into more detail) or ask you to do so. I’m doing it this way so that I should hopefully be able to write your character the way you want it to be written.

However, please bear in mind that you are giving me creative freedom. I might not always go with what you wish depending on the situation. I’ll try and stick to the personalities and such as closely as possible, but there will be times when it just isn’t always going to be exactly how you’d want it.

I’m going to use this thread not only for character ideas, but also for story arc ideas, where you guys will be able to give me situations you’d like to see your character in, the other characters you’d like yours to hang with, etc.

The chapters will not always involve your character. Some chapters might have only one or two characters, whereas others may involve several. So if your character doesn’t appear in the latest chapter, please don’t think I’ve forgotten about them. They just wouldn’t have fitted in with the chapter, that’s all.

Ok, so I’ve given links to what each race is and other stuff in the template. Please bear in mind that things like Rank and such will not be for you to decide (hence not being in the template) Your character will be given the rank I decide to put them in.

So without further ado, here’s the template. =)

[The links WILL lead to spoilers. So click at your own risk really. >.>]

Name: (The name you want yourself to have. Bear in mind I refuse to call a character by something like Wooley67. If your username is passable as a name, fine. If not, make one up please. We’ll find a way to fit your username in as a nickname)

Nicknames: (Other names your character may be called)

Age: Your Age Physically (please include mentally for spiritual characters such as Shinigami, Vizard, Hollow and Arrancar)

Race: Human (the average human. Might be aware of spiritual beings but houses no powers), Advent Human (Humans who have special powers), Shinigami, Vizard, Hollow, Arrancar, Quincy or Bount

Powers: Ok here is where it gets a bit tricky.
Human: Spiritually aware or not
Advent Human: Describe the power you have. A few examples from the series are Orihime and Chad
Shinigami: A zanpakutou, Describe what it looks like in its normal state, Shikai and Bankai. (though please, bear in mind that only certain characters will have the Bankai from the start in the story) Along with this, give any special skills you get from entering Shikai or Bankai as well as the release phrases. Examples of Zanpakutou descriptions are here, here and here. Zanpakutou Shikai releases click here. Zanpakutou Bankai releases click here.
If you wish your character to have one of the Zanpakutou from the characters in the series, you can find the list here.
Hollow: Similar to the advent human, but much darker in nature
Vizard: Shinigami zanpakutou but with the enhancements of the hollow mask.
Arrancar: Resurrection. Click here for a description and here for a release example. As with the Shinigami, if you wish to take one of the Resurrections from the series, simply state that here. List.
Quincy: Quincy bow description. See here for description of Ishida’s bow and here for it’s release. You will get the other quincy abilities automatically.
Bounto: Your doll. Click here for a basic description and here for an example of release. (not the best video to show it ><)

Type: Are you more of a Kidou based character, a strong character, more reliant on speed etc.

Personality: Possibly the most important part as it is this which I will use to keep your character as you wanted it. The more detail you give here, the easier I’ll be able to stick to character.

Height: You might not see this as necessary. But it makes it easier for me to determine whether a character would have to look up to talk to a character, or look down. I don’t want to make someone talk downwards to someone who might actually turn out to be taller

Physical Description: You can provide a picture here. If you do, please state any modifications you want doing to the image and I’ll recolour. I’ll recolour any Shinigami/Arrancar to fit the uniforms they wear. I can also recolour hair and eyes etc. Even skin if necessary. If you don’t have an image, give a description and I’ll try and find one that fits.

If you don't want to fill all this out, leave the sections you don't want to write blank. However, in doing so, you'll be allowing me to write in those sections myself. I WILL get final confirmation from you on your character if you want to do it this way, just to make sure you are happy with the way I am going to portray you. Once a character is ready to be added to the story, they will be placed in the Bleach: The End of Everything Character Thread. This thread serves the sole purpose of showing characters that are in the story.


This thread is for character discussion and story discussion. =]
 
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Name: Makoto Kei

Nicknames:
Shinji

Age:
19

Race:
Shinigami

Powers:
Senbonzakura


Type:
A strong character depends on speed most of the time.

Personality:
Very quite and he barely talk, he points out what he wants to say in simple words and then shut up, he's also smart and merciless. (Is that good? o_O)

Height:
5'8"

Physical Description:
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Forget the sword he's carrying, imagine a Katana :gasp:

 
T'is Fine. I can build on him when I get back from College. I'll have the Shinigami General Captain and Arrancar Leader at least done by tonight. :awesome:

Solid, I look forward to seeing what you come up with. :D
 
Il fill out what I can, kinda confusing :gasp:

Name: Lilly

Nicknames: Lilly or GTFO

Age: 21

Race: make me evil pl0x

Strenght: speed/very agile an' shizz
Weakness:not the most powerful of fighters but is super quick and can cut you to ribbons before you even notice she's there



Personality: Talks quite alot, comes across as cheerful, bubbly. But can be rash impulsive - has a vicious temper. Although once focused on something zones everything out and concentrates fully on her objective; even if that's just to make an omlette :awesome:

Height: 5ft 4''

Physical Description: small, very slight in build, waiste lenght black hair, green eyes - leave the rest up to you :wacky: Do I get weapons? If I do I d like 2 short knife thingymabobs that live inside my boots or some shit, that'd be cool :awesome: ooh ooh ooooh hair should so like look pink in the light, I want her to have metallic hair :gasp:
 
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Actually my first try ever to describe myself :) Hope it will turn out good! It's nothing fantastic but at least it is similar to myself :)

Name: Ryoko Kuroshiro ( As bleach is japanese, it would be weird to use my own name)

Nicknames: Ryo

Age: Physically 17, mentally unknown but certainly over 200.( He doesn't age in his mental form as fast as other shinigamis do).

Race: Shinigami

Powers:
Zanpaktou: Aiden - A black colored sharp and glowing katana with medium length.
Shikai - His single katana turns in to two katanas which are longer and even sharper. It gives him a boost in speed and power. Also the blades will be very sharp and with the help of reiatsu it has no problem to cut trough everything.
Bankai - His bankai is something rare and fascinating, something that only few could match. It makes a totally identical copy of him who still thinks with his own head while sharing the senses with the right Ryoko. They both will wear the shikai and will have extreme boost in speed and reiatsu.

The first would fit me more but the second rocks more :D So your choice which shikai/bankai you choose. You don't have to tell it yet, reveal it in the Fic to hold a surprise :D

Shikai - His black shikai disappears and the weather changes dramatically. It gets wet and cold around in a radius depending on Ryoko's own power. It starts raining and a powerful, almost blinding thick mist fills everything around the battleground. Ryoko will then turn similar to a shadow of mist and face his enemies hidden. He will do surprise attacks and stay hidden from his enemy. ( It makes very hard for even experienced warriors to spot Ryoko and makes sensing him impossible for weaker enemies)

Bankai - Ryoko and his enemies will be dragged in to a world of mist. The mist there is impossible to be wiped away.(It is even thicker than the mist of Shikai's and Ryoko there is even harder to be felt. Seeing him there with your own eyes is probably impossible. Also the mist will exhaust you there and make it hard to breath).

Type: Basically a hybrid but his zanpaktou boosts mostly his speed and reiatsu. So a fast swordman with decent magical capabilities ( Rarely uses normal kidous, rather like a sword art master combining his attacks with reiatsu and who uses kidou/hadou tricks to save himself). / If the second bankai than he will be same without shikai/bankai but his shikai will change his style quite a lot. He will start luring and hunting his enemies and will use different mist attacks while being undercover.

Personality: He is a very difficult and mysterious character. For most of the time he looks like a quiet man who deals with his own business. Like a lone wolf yet he does like to hang out with few of his friends, mostly nobles or captains. He is calm and cold, maybe even a bit maniacal and his fantastic mind on the level of a genius might make him quite dangerous. Sometimes he is selfish and arrogant, especially against the lower family or class shinigamis. He also tends to not trust anyone besides his own hands. He may betray everyone when he finds it to fit with his morals but it must be stated he follows his morals always. And when his morals go hand on hand with the rules of Seiretei, he might be the most loyal man. He also enjoys freedom and peace.

Height: 1m 84 cm

Physical Description: He is quite thin and has very white skin. He has a well built body and has shiny blue eyes, yet they seem cold most of the time. He has medium length or rather short messy blond hair and a straight nose. His face seems somewhat positive for most of the time tho his look is cold and calm.

History: Your choice but I would like him to be from a noble family ... maybe a head or something else high :) Your choice tho ...
 
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Name: Shamus Raylandiu

Nicknames: Darkrul

Age: Physical: 25 Mental: mid 50's
Race: Hollow
Powers: Hollow:

Type: Average Fighter, Jack of all trades, master of none xD

Personality: Typically Calm and Reasonable natured, but can be brash and unforgiving if angered, quite talkative and loyal to whatever cause he may be following, Regards honesty an important thing and hates lies. Can be a little bit dippy at times though and come out with the wrong comment at inapropriate times.

Height: 5ft 10

Physical Description:
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Obviously different style of clothing though, probably a red suit rather than a black one and darker hair xD
 
RUKIA'S ZANPAKUTO IS MINE!!! I'll come back and fill out the character thingy when I get back from getting ready for work :gasp:
 
Name: Go for Riku. :wacky:
Nicknames: No idea, I'm shit at this part, if you can slip The Sephiroth Gene in there, though...?

Age: 17...both my age and Riku's age.

Race: Whatever would look best wrapped around Kelly. :wacky:

Powers: Can I have the power to seduce any women I want? Or is it not that kind of fic? xD Go for anything, if not.

Type: I prefer offense at all times.

Personality: Whatever fits for you. :neomon:

Height: Nice and tall, say 6'4" or something.

Physical Description:
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The wings are even a nice touch, I think I want to sprout them at some point. :wacky:
 
Me and dave can totally match :awesome:

Black hair obviously, but other than that, she's pretty nifty

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Wings = air secks :awesome:
 
Name: Virgil Gabriel Cray
Nicknames: Voice of Despair
Age: 19
Race:Advent Human
Powers:
After being diagnosed to be mentally unstable, Virgil spent many of his years in solitude deciphering the meaning of his existence. It was during such times were he discovered his latent talent, a hidden capability to move objects with the power of his mind. Months after, he kept most of his time mastering his technique beginning with small objects such as spoons and then moving with larger and heavier objects coming to the point of being able to lift several objects at once. He also developed other powers such as creating an illusion which would make others view him as another person and mind reading. Of course, his victim must be severely weakened in order for Virgil to penetrate into his or her mind. By doing so, he is able to force "false" memories into his victims and make deceive them, making them committing things they would never do such as betraying a friend or committing suicide. Virgil's most powerful weapon and source of strength is Fear. He can sense the fear in his victims almost as if he could see the aura emanated from the soul. By doing so a grim satisfaction goes through his spine and fills him with satisfaction, almost as if he had a lust for Despair, ergo, his name being the "The Voice of Despair".

Also what fuels him the most is the darkest emotions of his enemies such as sorrow, hatred, lust, malice, desception, and vengeance. As long as his foes can't master their full fears, Virgil will remain feeding on them having an endless source of energy. This is quite of an issue when facing someone who can sink his eyes deep into the very core of your hearts to rip away the most bitter and painful of your memories. As another fact, by reading your heart he can somehow mimic some of your abilities to a certain extent yet not use them accurately for it would take him time to master these new powers (of course, this ability requires him to render his foe completely immobile in order to observ and analize his victims.
Type: Swordsman Psychic
Personality:
A man bitter to the very end, Virgil despises the very world that breathed life into his lungs for all the countless years of endless tortures, abandonment, sorrow and pain. He feels such an animosity towards all beings so great that he wishes everything to be reduced to zero, including himself. Vicious and ruthless, Virgil will not stop until achieving his darkest dreams. With an unstable set of emotions, Virgil can be as joyful and cheerful when fulfilling his vengeance or be seen as completely quiet and lonesome, sorrowful almost mourning his irredemeable state.

Physical Description:
Virgil is a strong built man who heights 6' 3" and weights 220 pounds. He has small jet black eyes with silver eyebrows and wears his dark brown hair at shoulder length and combed straight back. He has toned muscles although his attire hides much of these traits making him seem to have an average build. His ears are small and his nose is sharp and pointy.

Virgil wears a large black coat which is at the length of his calves, with long sleves that cover most of his black leather gloves. Underneath his coat he wears a black collar shirt with distinctive dragons at both sides of his chest with a cross on the very middle of his shirt. He also wears brown pants and black leather ringed boots with a metallic sole. On his left glove he also wears a steel gauntlet which slightly can resemblance a dragon's claw. Virgil also has several black belts (4 in total) wrapped around his waits which has c
ross shaped dagger sheathed and attached to the belts (18 daggers per belt). Each dagger is identical to the other (being 12 inches full length), having black handguards and red leather wrapped around the hilt and a pummel made of an spherical ruby gemstone. Virgil also has two swords sheathed and attached to his back with sturdy belts. The swords are identical to the daggers, although on a larger scale. The swords are almost 3 and 6 inches long and are very sharp.



OOC: I made this on a rush, and added no more since I hardly know anything about Bleach ;)
 
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Name: Marshy

Nicknames: Sex Panther

Age: 20

Race: Human :-)

Powers: Up to you dear :wacky: (can persuade wimminz into bed easily? :wacky:)

Personality: He is an outgoing character that likes to be noticed and has the nature to parttttttttty! Hes nice to most but if you really push him over the edge you will regret it-- he has a mean temper.

Height: 5ft 8"

Physical Description: green eyes, blonde hair, not very tall but very built muscularly. Has a few scars over his face, one across his eye which makes it hard for him to open it all the way. The other is on his chin. Hes a very handsome fellow. His hair style is messy and the length is not much longer then his middle finger.
 
Name: Gilliam (Don’t know why, but I like that name)
Nicknames: Faze

Age: 34

Race: Advent human

Powers:
He has the powers to open “portals” into a separate dimension or link them together in a stream of portals. A-A.. B-B.. etc

Simpler put, it is the same power that Nova, the modified soul, has.

Type:
He relies on speed and his power.

Personality: Gilliam is a generally nice person, though depending on the situation he can be a real arse.
He likes to relax when he does not have anything to do, and even when he does have anything to do he manages to find a way to do it so that it is the least stressful. He never, ever, gets stressed, instead he takes things as they come.
Though he is a logical person, indirectly thinking ahead, he often just jumps into things with the mind frame 'what happens, happens'.
If someone needs help, he is no stranger to helping them, as long as it does not involve too much work, for example: Moving a lot of stuff: he would most likely try to avoid, helping soemone that is being mugged; he would strike the mugger down, seeinga lost child on the street; he would do waht he could even taking them in temporarily.
In the manor of a fight, he will try to avoid it at first, but if this fails he will hold his side and aim for victory, using his skills and abilities alongside his speed, to his advantage. Though he might also take it too far, instead of just fighting, he will aim for weak and critical spots, often killing his opponent in he procedure. Being a 'clever' person, he can often be seen using his environments to his advantage in a fight, as well as outside a fight.
In the company of friends he likes to laugh and generally hang out, and of they are threatened in some way, be it verbally or physically, he would do his share in defending them either via words or force.
He enjoys things that are enjoyable, both in taste and feeling, and hates arrogant people as well as people that have no common sense.

Weapon: He carries a pair of metal Tonfas.
When not in battle, they are fastened in a holster-like thing at his hips.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tonfa


Height: 184 cm ~ 6ft

Physical Description:
WITH the red thing. (It can be used as a rope, or something like that if needed)
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Other: If he looses his hat, he will fanatically try to get it back, he can be without it, but never out of an arms reach of it.


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I left a lot for you as a writer to fuck around with.
Yes, there is some hint of detail there, but for the sake of any storyline it might be best not to go over detailed.
Is this ok, or do you need more?
 
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Oh my, queer angel is queer :wacky:

Name: Phoenix

Nicknames: n/a

Age:
19 Physically. 500 mentally.

Race:
Shinigami

Powers: Shinigami:
Tobiume

Type: Extremely proficient at Kidou, but also adept at fighting with a katana, and relatively quick too.

Personality:
My character died by being murdered, as someone was jealous of his Kidou skills. They murdered him by drugging him, and then drowning him. As such, my character is usually stoic and quiet, preferring to be a quiet observer and choosing to rarely battle, despite being more than qualified to do so. My character finds it hard to trust people, and gets extremely nervous around new people and is very suspicious. However, when someone earns his trust he is their most loyal companion and will eliminate all threats to his friends. He has a phobia of rivers and other deep bodies of water, and tries his hardest to be a pacifist. It is rare that he enters battle but when he does...

Height:
6 foot. Real height is real.

Physical Description:

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Except with purple eyes, instead of red, and jet black hair instead of white. xD And make his clothes Black/Red instead of white/brown. xD

I think I did everything right xD Vikki helped me on MSN =D
 
Excellent guys. :P For those of you wanting me to fill things in/expand, I'll pm what I get down once it's done and we can talk about any adjustments you want making. Mandi, Rukia's Zanpakuto is yours. I'll add it to the list ready. =D

Thanks guys. ^^ Need to get more people :awesome:
 
Ok here goes my try.


Name: Adri Shakasaki(no clue why)

Age: 19 physically and 300 mentally.

Race: Shinigami.

Height: 6'3

Personality: Adri is a really nice shinigami he likes hanging out with friends. Some people find him evil looking even the captains. He really likes hanging out with girls. Yeah so hes a ladys man and basically cares for nothing else. He thinks he is the strongest shinigami out there but truly he might not be. He is loyal to all of the shinigami.

Powers: Well all up to you Vikki. Plz make him really strong if you can.

Physical description

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Something like that but with Mettalic silver hair and The katana needs to be gold. Golden eyes plz. Oh and put his clothes gold and silver plz. Or just make him look like a shinigami alot.

Plz Make him really good at Kido. Oh I guess Im done well I guess I tried Vikki.
 
Name: Kyelinn (pronounced Keye-linn)

Nicknames: Kyelie or Kye

Age: 18

Race: Shinigami

Powers: Sode no Shirayuki


Type: She can be rather swift at the best of times and quite hard-hitting, a good balance of both speed and power.

Personality: Kyelinn is a very kind young woman. Though she can be shy when meeting new people, it doesn't take long to quickly warm up to them if she likes them. She can feel good or bad vibes coming from a person, so she's not exactly quick to trust people either. She can be sensitive at times or small, silly things might make her emotional and if she gets angry, you'd best watch out because the girl has a temper and will let you know it...or have it, whichever she's in the mood to do. Kyelinn will fight and stand up for what she believes in. She's very stubborn and rarely backs down from anything.

Height: 5'3

Physical Description:
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Of course she doesn't wear those jammies :P she wears what any normal shinigami would wear. xD
 
Name: Rene Skylar

Nickname: Sky

Age: 17 (Mental Age: 117)

Race: Shinigami

Powers:

- Zanpaktou: Rene’s Zanpaktou is known as Toukon Ryuu (Fighting Spirit Dragon), when it is in it’s regular way it is a simple long sword. It is roughly one meter long and incredibly sharp. The hilt is dressed in a dark cloth and has had no modifications made to it. He wears it across the back of his waist

- Zanpaktou (Shikai Form): When Rene calls forth the Shikai of his Zanpaktou he would utter the words Deru, Toukon Ryuu (Come Forth, Fighting Spirit Dragon) instead of shouting them. The blade appears to made of a silver metal instead of the dull metallic colour a regular blade has. The Blade thickens to twice it’s regular width .

- Shikai Abilities: Junsui Toukon only has one ability, it is known as Toukon Attack. After shouting this out, the blade begins to shimmer with a pale white colour, the strength of the blade increases exponentially and is capable of sending out a wave of pure white energy, much like Ichigo’s Zangetsu except it is much smaller but more concentrated.

Zanpaktou Bankai: Rene’s Bankai is known as Junsui Toukon Ryuu, (Pure Fighting Spirit Dragon) After shouting this, Rene’s body and the areas surrounding him by one metre becomes radiant white. After several moments, the energy surrounding him begins to condense and Rene is no logner able to be seen as the white covers his entire body. After several more moments, the light explodes and Rene’s new form is shown. His blade becomes a broadsword made of a shimmering white metal and white wings seem to have sprouted from his back. His clothes become a sort of white combat suit, he wears a plain, bright white jacket over a simple white shirt. His bottoms become baggy white trousers which are tucked into his plain white boots. He is able to fly using his wings and so is able to perform aerial attacks as well as ground attacks and also attains a shield of pure white with the symbol of his squad on.

- Bankai Abilities:

Toukon Attack: Like his Shikai, Rene is also able to use Toukon Attack, however it is much more larger but retains the concentration of the Shikai ability.


Ryuu Wave: Using his shield arm, Rene sends out a 180 degree wave of pure white energy, inflicting massive amounts of damage on anything it hits, however it can be dodged if fast enough due to the fact that the wave does not go above or below the height of Rene’s arm when the attack is sent out.

Type: Rene is almost a completely swordsmans, however he is quite agile and capable of using low level Kidou.

Personality: Rene is a rather brash man, he is known to be loud, obnoxious, cocky and rarely ever does any work. However when the situation is dire he is very serious but still retains some of the cockiness, especially in battles. He is very nice to those he is close to and will help those who need help, however it is easy to annoy him and when he is annoyed he can have a vicious tongue. He will always throw himself into dangerous situations, regardless of any injury he may take.

Height: 5”11

Physical Description: Rene has very dark, brown, medium-length, spiky hair. He has a Caucasian complexion and dark blue eyes. He is quite handsome and is very physically fit.
 
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