uhoh... I edited this for your questioning 
I didn't plan to make a mistake like this 
Sorry for that.... edited it in a moment!
I didn't plan to make a mistake like this Sorry for that.... edited it in a moment!Amnesia ~Sign Up~
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Well, your character does fit hte level of information needed for the RP.
Though I require that you add another 500 words to the history.
HAHAHAHA; Im just fucking with ya.
Your character is approved, you may go post when you feel like it.
Am I right to assume that your char is a "medieval" timed char?
Though I require that you add another 500 words to the history.
HAHAHAHA; Im just fucking with ya.
Your character is approved, you may go post when you feel like it.
Am I right to assume that your char is a "medieval" timed char?
yeh, otherwise I would have a RPG, a tank and kinesis stuff =) Will post tomorrow as I'm behind PS3 atm andtyping here is painful ...
hey, I'm changing my Bio, and character weapon set. . . Here is the New Bio. . .
Name: Stephen Hownam
Nickname:black (explained below)
Age: 18
DOB: 14/12/ (18 years ago, not sure on current year)
Gender: Male
Race:Human
Personality: A regular teenager Stephen is often blunt in his usage of language and tends not to get along with other guys. He is often seen as vein or self-loving as his hair is slender uneven or un-styled. an aggressive fighter, will always fight to try and defend what is closest to him and what he feels he needs. With a short fuse, he often looses his temper for pathetic reasons and is unafraid to show how he is really feeling. he will tell peple directly what he thinks of them even if it isn't very nice. once given a task Stephen will not stop trying until the job is done or he is dead.
Appearence: standing at 6 feet tall Stephen has an Athletic build he is clean shaven with short brown hair that has blond highlights in it, he styles it depending on the day and/or his mood. he has a tattoo that Sits at the top of his back and takes up a large quantity of the space between his shoulders.
Clothes: Stephen normally wears a black DC Beanie that has a visor, with the Visor poitning backwards and slightly to the right, He wears a pair of Black G-star Jeans. most of the time he wears a black or a white FCUK T-shirt. With multiple patterns and Styles of T-shirt in his cupboards. His trainers are quite Often black DC's but has other pairs in his collection. often wears a Black Hoodie if he thinks he will be getting into trouble or breaking the rules. Always Carries His Swords With him, their Sheath sits on his back Most of the time. The Only time he doesn't have his swords on his back is when he is free running with his friends.
Weapons:'Master blade" : A fairly large Sword. the sword has two forms, the first is when it is being carried, the sword looks like a normal bladed sword, but when going into battle mode the sword opens up to look almost like two blades connected together. Looks like this. . .
'Cutting Edge': A sword that is around a meter in length, although it is only a single sided sword, the blade takes up all of one side and looks like a blade with a small segment cut out for the handle. Looks like this. . .
Stephen's sheath hangs on his shoulders and has multiple slots for multiple swords.
magic / Abilities:
Master swordsman: Stephen has immense skills with his swords, weather he is using them both or only one of them.
Falling Cleave: Stephen jumps into the air, or jumps off a raised platform and slashes Vertically downward hitting the Enemy powerfully and Occasionally Critically. Not really an ability but more of a sword Trick so it Only uses Stephen's Energy when he is falling from Great hights.
Multi-Slash: Stephen uses Both blades to Frantically Slash at the enemy Many times at high speeds, due to the pace of the attacks he Cannot use this Attack very often without Draining all of his energy.
Beam slash: stephen Strikes a powerful Downward slash Using Master Blade and unleashes a Blade like Beam at His foe, Being of little energy Drain Stephen Often uses this attack from range.
Shield of Swords: Stephen summons 6 Swords of Pure Holy energy To Guard him from Enemies, Stephen doesn't have Control of this Ability, His body does it when he is nearing Death or being severly beaten. Drains Most Of his energy, it tends to knock him unconscious for Short periods of time after use.
Backstory: Always Spending time with the same group of friends Stephen has become a leader to a small band of Free running youngsters who's ages range from 16-18. Stephen spends most of his time either out on the Streets practicing his Free running or at home with his mother during times of Curfew.
The group he spends most time with consists of four people, two boys and two girls, josh, Sarah, Jesse and himself make up the group who have become known as the four colours because of their attire. Stephen dresses in all black with a white mask when they are out doing their business, earning the nickname 'Black' Ricky in white with black mask earning him the nick name 'white' Jesse and Sarah are the same with Blue and red earning their nicknames Red and blue Respectively.
How is the Upgraded Bio Carbuncle?
Name: Stephen Hownam
Nickname:black (explained below)
Age: 18
DOB: 14/12/ (18 years ago, not sure on current year)
Gender: Male
Race:Human
Personality: A regular teenager Stephen is often blunt in his usage of language and tends not to get along with other guys. He is often seen as vein or self-loving as his hair is slender uneven or un-styled. an aggressive fighter, will always fight to try and defend what is closest to him and what he feels he needs. With a short fuse, he often looses his temper for pathetic reasons and is unafraid to show how he is really feeling. he will tell peple directly what he thinks of them even if it isn't very nice. once given a task Stephen will not stop trying until the job is done or he is dead.
Appearence: standing at 6 feet tall Stephen has an Athletic build he is clean shaven with short brown hair that has blond highlights in it, he styles it depending on the day and/or his mood. he has a tattoo that Sits at the top of his back and takes up a large quantity of the space between his shoulders.
Clothes: Stephen normally wears a black DC Beanie that has a visor, with the Visor poitning backwards and slightly to the right, He wears a pair of Black G-star Jeans. most of the time he wears a black or a white FCUK T-shirt. With multiple patterns and Styles of T-shirt in his cupboards. His trainers are quite Often black DC's but has other pairs in his collection. often wears a Black Hoodie if he thinks he will be getting into trouble or breaking the rules. Always Carries His Swords With him, their Sheath sits on his back Most of the time. The Only time he doesn't have his swords on his back is when he is free running with his friends.
Weapons:'Master blade" : A fairly large Sword. the sword has two forms, the first is when it is being carried, the sword looks like a normal bladed sword, but when going into battle mode the sword opens up to look almost like two blades connected together. Looks like this. . .
'Cutting Edge': A sword that is around a meter in length, although it is only a single sided sword, the blade takes up all of one side and looks like a blade with a small segment cut out for the handle. Looks like this. . .
Stephen's sheath hangs on his shoulders and has multiple slots for multiple swords.
magic / Abilities:
Master swordsman: Stephen has immense skills with his swords, weather he is using them both or only one of them.
Falling Cleave: Stephen jumps into the air, or jumps off a raised platform and slashes Vertically downward hitting the Enemy powerfully and Occasionally Critically. Not really an ability but more of a sword Trick so it Only uses Stephen's Energy when he is falling from Great hights.
Multi-Slash: Stephen uses Both blades to Frantically Slash at the enemy Many times at high speeds, due to the pace of the attacks he Cannot use this Attack very often without Draining all of his energy.
Beam slash: stephen Strikes a powerful Downward slash Using Master Blade and unleashes a Blade like Beam at His foe, Being of little energy Drain Stephen Often uses this attack from range.
Shield of Swords: Stephen summons 6 Swords of Pure Holy energy To Guard him from Enemies, Stephen doesn't have Control of this Ability, His body does it when he is nearing Death or being severly beaten. Drains Most Of his energy, it tends to knock him unconscious for Short periods of time after use.
Backstory: Always Spending time with the same group of friends Stephen has become a leader to a small band of Free running youngsters who's ages range from 16-18. Stephen spends most of his time either out on the Streets practicing his Free running or at home with his mother during times of Curfew.
The group he spends most time with consists of four people, two boys and two girls, josh, Sarah, Jesse and himself make up the group who have become known as the four colours because of their attire. Stephen dresses in all black with a white mask when they are out doing their business, earning the nickname 'Black' Ricky in white with black mask earning him the nick name 'white' Jesse and Sarah are the same with Blue and red earning their nicknames Red and blue Respectively.
How is the Upgraded Bio Carbuncle?
A bit too powerful yet I think ... tho let's see carbuncle decision Anyway what does DOB mean? 
Anyway what does DOB mean?
Date of birth, and he isn't to powerful, he wont know how to use any of his abilities asides the Falling cleave because it is practicallly a jumping downward slash.
Okay I was wondering if DOB was date of birth or something scientific
I was wondering if DOB was date of birth or something scientific
I dont see much problems with it other then you lack weight for your char, and for the weapons.
Though Im getting rather annoyed seeing people shtealing Clouds blades, I did not set any rules against lending things from game chars, I only had one stating that you had to make it yourself. And this you did.
I dont see any overpoweredness, even if you were to remember all skills, look at Gilliam, my char, when he remembers all he is able to crunch a fecking tank.
So, I will [Approve] this 'update', but Id prefer you add the weight of your char and the weapons before you acctually post.
Though Im getting rather annoyed seeing people shtealing Clouds blades, I did not set any rules against lending things from game chars, I only had one stating that you had to make it yourself. And this you did.
I dont see any overpoweredness, even if you were to remember all skills, look at Gilliam, my char, when he remembers all he is able to crunch a fecking tank.
So, I will [Approve] this 'update', but Id prefer you add the weight of your char and the weapons before you acctually post.
Name: Sofia Weaving
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Height: 165 cm
Weight: 52 kg
Birthdate: July 01
Time: Today
Appearance:
Sofia has a slim body and her female attributes arent especially developed. She has fair complexion and she doesnt have any special marks on her body but she has a small scar on her back right below her left shoulder. She looks a little trained, but her slim appearance makes her look a little weak. She has long blonde hair that is straight and thick, and reaches just past her shoulders. Her eyes are blue and look large because of her small size.
Clothes:
Sofia wears normal (but a little tight) dark blue jeans and a normal white t-shirt and a white long sleeve shirt over with chinese characters on the right sleeve. She wears a beige scarf and white converse sneakers. She wears a thin gold necklace around her neck. She carries a black schoolbag on her back too. She also carried a mp3-player with small earphones. Most of the music she has there is guitar or piano ballads from different bands and artist but she also has some upbeat electronic music and rock music in her mp3 too.
Personality:
Sofia is a bit of a inwards person, she likes thinking more than talking. She tries to help people when she can and shows alot of caring. But thats because she doesnt have high self confidence and not because she's "good". She's not depressed or anything like that. She can laugh and have fun, and she can be a little immature and sometimes be mean too but that doesnt happen very often. When it really is needed, Sofia can help when people argue too much, and when she does she is direct most of the time. She pretends that she doesnt care alot about what other people say and think about her. Most of the time she seems like she's insecure and shy but she really doesnt like talking too much.
Schoolbag:
She has her wallet with some money in her bag. She also has some food in there (a couple sandwiches and an apple and a few chocolate bars) and a water bottle. She also has a small bottle with vitamine-and-mineral pills.
Magic:
Sofia has never been able to control her magic, because she doesnt know really what she is doing, but she can make people feel and do different things when she looks at them. She doesnt know why some of those things happen. Here is what she can do:
- She can put a person to sleep or atleast make them sleepy.
- She can make a person feel different emotions like depression, happyness or anger.
- She can give a person a really bad headache that lasts a few minutes.
- She can make people remember things they maybe dont remember or dont want to think about, but one time she made someone remember something that wasnt real. She can also "see" in her head what she is making people remember when it happens.
- She can make things burn by staring at them for a while.
Most of the time it has only been the first three things. Its only in special times when the 4th thing happens, and she has never made anything catch on fire yet (so she doesnt know she can do this at all).
History:
Sofia grew up in a family as the only kid. She went to school like everyone else and had a few friends, but no one that was really close. She was okay with life most of the time except when her parents got angry, because she got scared because they yelled alot and really loud. When she didnt do homework or go to school she wrote poems that she always threw, and she went out with her friends in cafés for a little while, but she didnt say very much, she listened more.
Her relationship with her parents was good until she got a boyfriend that they didnt like. During a school break she ran away from home with him, but he left her after a while when they were far away from home. She was too ashamed and afraid to come back, so she didnt return and has been travelling around with a card her parents bought that lets her ride most normal public buses and trains in the nearby regions. For the little while that she has been away, she has stayed at cheap hostels and worked at nearby cafeterias to get by.
(i hope this profile is ok, i didnt really know how you wanted them to be, but i hope shes ok...)
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Height: 165 cm
Weight: 52 kg
Birthdate: July 01
Time: Today
Appearance:
Sofia has a slim body and her female attributes arent especially developed. She has fair complexion and she doesnt have any special marks on her body but she has a small scar on her back right below her left shoulder. She looks a little trained, but her slim appearance makes her look a little weak. She has long blonde hair that is straight and thick, and reaches just past her shoulders. Her eyes are blue and look large because of her small size.
Clothes:
Sofia wears normal (but a little tight) dark blue jeans and a normal white t-shirt and a white long sleeve shirt over with chinese characters on the right sleeve. She wears a beige scarf and white converse sneakers. She wears a thin gold necklace around her neck. She carries a black schoolbag on her back too. She also carried a mp3-player with small earphones. Most of the music she has there is guitar or piano ballads from different bands and artist but she also has some upbeat electronic music and rock music in her mp3 too.
Personality:
Sofia is a bit of a inwards person, she likes thinking more than talking. She tries to help people when she can and shows alot of caring. But thats because she doesnt have high self confidence and not because she's "good". She's not depressed or anything like that. She can laugh and have fun, and she can be a little immature and sometimes be mean too but that doesnt happen very often. When it really is needed, Sofia can help when people argue too much, and when she does she is direct most of the time. She pretends that she doesnt care alot about what other people say and think about her. Most of the time she seems like she's insecure and shy but she really doesnt like talking too much.
Schoolbag:
She has her wallet with some money in her bag. She also has some food in there (a couple sandwiches and an apple and a few chocolate bars) and a water bottle. She also has a small bottle with vitamine-and-mineral pills.
Magic:
Sofia has never been able to control her magic, because she doesnt know really what she is doing, but she can make people feel and do different things when she looks at them. She doesnt know why some of those things happen. Here is what she can do:
- She can put a person to sleep or atleast make them sleepy.
- She can make a person feel different emotions like depression, happyness or anger.
- She can give a person a really bad headache that lasts a few minutes.
- She can make people remember things they maybe dont remember or dont want to think about, but one time she made someone remember something that wasnt real. She can also "see" in her head what she is making people remember when it happens.
- She can make things burn by staring at them for a while.
Most of the time it has only been the first three things. Its only in special times when the 4th thing happens, and she has never made anything catch on fire yet (so she doesnt know she can do this at all).
History:
Sofia grew up in a family as the only kid. She went to school like everyone else and had a few friends, but no one that was really close. She was okay with life most of the time except when her parents got angry, because she got scared because they yelled alot and really loud. When she didnt do homework or go to school she wrote poems that she always threw, and she went out with her friends in cafés for a little while, but she didnt say very much, she listened more.
Her relationship with her parents was good until she got a boyfriend that they didnt like. During a school break she ran away from home with him, but he left her after a while when they were far away from home. She was too ashamed and afraid to come back, so she didnt return and has been travelling around with a card her parents bought that lets her ride most normal public buses and trains in the nearby regions. For the little while that she has been away, she has stayed at cheap hostels and worked at nearby cafeterias to get by.
(i hope this profile is ok, i didnt really know how you wanted them to be, but i hope shes ok...)
Why od everyone post the chars?
I asked to have it linked to, no?
*sigh* Ah well.
There are a few things about your char.
First of all, I see no form of energy drain of her magic, as well that her magic is actually G'modding unless you let the owner decide if it works or not.
second, there is the lack of a weapon, and skills to protect herself. If she cant do any of these, and she is alone in a fight, she will be messed up, trust me ^^
Im not saying that you can't play her like she is, but if so you would need to find another player that will protect you, and if so you should be as active as that player or they might leave you ^^
Well, start out with a 'drain' for her magic. And you decide yourself if you want to be able to fight in the RP or not, but for longer sirvivability, I urge you to at least be able to do soemthing ^^
Especially sicne her "make things catch on fire" is sort of... non existant as of now.
I asked to have it linked to, no?
*sigh* Ah well.
There are a few things about your char.
First of all, I see no form of energy drain of her magic, as well that her magic is actually G'modding unless you let the owner decide if it works or not.
second, there is the lack of a weapon, and skills to protect herself. If she cant do any of these, and she is alone in a fight, she will be messed up, trust me ^^
Im not saying that you can't play her like she is, but if so you would need to find another player that will protect you, and if so you should be as active as that player or they might leave you ^^
Well, start out with a 'drain' for her magic. And you decide yourself if you want to be able to fight in the RP or not, but for longer sirvivability, I urge you to at least be able to do soemthing ^^
Especially sicne her "make things catch on fire" is sort of... non existant as of now.
im so sorry! hehe, i read before that it was okay to post here and im kind of used to that you post the profile in the sign-up topic.
and now that you mention it, i kind of just liked the idea but forgot that maybe the magic she has maybe doesnt work very well here... and i forgot about that energy thing! i wrote it in my other version before i changed it and forgot to leave it in. so ill just go and change that now
and about her magic, i was actually thinking that the others could write themselves if or when they wanted her magic to be used on them. hmm... but i can still see a few problems with it so ill make some changes and add something else because now that i think about it, it doesnt really fit in :/.
i also didnt think about that this was a roleplay where there was alot of fighting. it took me so long to make this profile so i guess i forgot a few things ^^. all i know is that there are a few people here in a large city and there are monsters that show up alot when its night, and that we dont really remember anything when we start. so i wasnt really sure just what the RP was suppose to be about, like, if we were going to be with other players alot or not :/.
what do you mean with that making things catch one fire is "sort of non existant as of now"?
oh yeah, just what parts exactly did you think was "godmodding"? just so i know, because im thinking about the second one, about changing peoples moods
and now that you mention it, i kind of just liked the idea but forgot that maybe the magic she has maybe doesnt work very well here... and i forgot about that energy thing! i wrote it in my other version before i changed it and forgot to leave it in. so ill just go and change that now
and about her magic, i was actually thinking that the others could write themselves if or when they wanted her magic to be used on them. hmm... but i can still see a few problems with it so ill make some changes and add something else because now that i think about it, it doesnt really fit in :/.i also didnt think about that this was a roleplay where there was alot of fighting. it took me so long to make this profile so i guess i forgot a few things ^^. all i know is that there are a few people here in a large city and there are monsters that show up alot when its night, and that we dont really remember anything when we start. so i wasnt really sure just what the RP was suppose to be about, like, if we were going to be with other players alot or not :/.
what do you mean with that making things catch one fire is "sort of non existant as of now"?
oh yeah, just what parts exactly did you think was "godmodding"? just so i know, because im thinking about the second one, about changing peoples moods
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It is ok that they post it here, so dont worry ^^
Well, yes, the players should be meeting up soon, and hopefully decide to stay together.and now that you mention it, i kind of just liked the idea but forgot that maybe the magic she has maybe doesnt work very well here... and i forgot about that energy thing! i wrote it in my other version before i changed it and forgot to leave it in. so ill just go and change that now
i also didnt think about that this was a roleplay where there was alot of fighting. it took me so long to make this profile so i guess i forgot a few things ^^. all i know is that there are a few people here in a large city and there are monsters that show up alot when its night, and that we dont really remember anything when we start. so i wasnt really sure just what the RP was suppose to be about, like, if we were going to be with other players alot or not :/.
There is a main plot, but to make the interaction of the players/characters as real as possible I have not revealed this to anyone.
To put it simply, there will be fighting, and the longer hte RP goes on, the more there will be of it. Until certain events happen. ^^
You mentioned that she did not know how to do this, or rather she had never done it before. So, my "nonexistant" was just a fancy way of saying that even if she had her memories, she would not know how to do it. Although it could pop up when needed ^^
Every part of your magic.oh yeah, just what parts exactly did you think was "godmodding"? just so i know, because im thinking about the second one, about changing peoples moods
The thing about changing emotions of a target works well against NPC's but against other players this is G'modding, UNLESS you allow the players themselves to decide if the characters are affected, if you do this then the G'moddign aspect is removed and all is ok ^^
Gime be a holler when you are done.
I am sorry to say this but i must Withdraw from this RP as i am not going to be as active as i have been recently, i have much college work to catch up on and am having trouble finding time for the Internet.
This is off course your choice.
Then, do you wish to kill of your char, should we do it, or should we just ignore your posts?
Your name is taken off the roster.
Then, do you wish to kill of your char, should we do it, or should we just ignore your posts?
Your name is taken off the roster.
Let's kill him I wanna see blood
I wanna see blood
Well, lets see what the player states.
If he does not reply, his character and posts are just to be ignored.
If he does not reply, his character and posts are just to be ignored.
this is ridiculous! can someone please post. Give it a chance before letting it flop please? i actually rather liked the idea of this rp and the character i made, so someone post!
Yeah, sorry bout that, I have just had a global democratization lately, and sadly it have been affecting my RP'ing.
Ill get in a post during today.
Ill get in a post during today.