Original [Discussion] Abyss

Gaige

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Criticism and opinions go here please, etc etc. Feel free to point out anything you feel is wrong, and I hope you enjoy reading it.
 
Well, I finally got around to reading it. :wacky:

Firstly, the prologue was intense and I'm glad it was because it drew me right in with the typical things that usually happen: questions, questions and more questions! Hale's an interesting character from the first chapter and I do wonder what Chris's problem is. Maria's such a strong character, too.

All really intriguing so far. I can't wait to see what problems will unravel. Keep at it!
 
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