Caladbolg's Signature

Caladbolg

♥Celestial Weapon♥
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I have done my signature, with a little help of a friend, but just a little.
Here it is.... I think it's fits great to my profile :)
What you think about it ?
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Ok, so first things first. For me, there's far too much going on, it feels way too cluttered. The KH Tidus and the Blitz Acing Tidus simply are not needed. They draw the eye far too much and make it so I'm not sure exactly where I'm meant to be looking.

Now, for the actual Caladbolg. I'd have cut the background off it, put it more towards the bottom right, though not in the corner and added "Caladbolg" text with it so that the blade was acting as a line beneath it.

The rest of the sig, the background and Tidus looks great. Except there's a spot on his chin from the C4D(?) that could be erased, it's a bit distracting. >.<

The border is fine though white might have worked better.

Though it's not awful so well done! There's just a few things that you could do to make it better, is all. =]
 
Actually i like that kh and dissidia Tidus in my Signature, but thanks for Commenting :P I like Critic ;D Still it was hard work maybe that's why i like this signature so much ;d
 
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The sword for me is the main thing that looks outa place. The wee white box around it covers part of Tidus face and ruins the clarity.
Seeing as thats the main tids image you have he should be at the front of everything i see what uv gone for with adding in the other renders but it clutters the tag a little too much. Blending them into the BG and making them a similar colour would be a more effective way of putting them in.
The blending down the bottom of Tidus is impressive though i like that a lot I just think the sig would be better without the other images in it. All good tags have only one focal point and when you put all those images into it the focal point becomes non-existant.
The c4d and that looks great and i like the texture..its just all those renders >_<
 

The background looks really nice and flows well and Tidus's arm blends in nicely with the background.

The colour theme suits Tidus well and looks great. =)

The only suggestions I have are the following:

I would suggest you remove the image of Tidus in the bottom left and the small Tidus on the right.

They are far too distracting and it's hard to know where to look. There should be one focal point and it seems to me that the larger Tidus in the background is perfect for that as he's already meshed in well with the background.

The sword on the left doesn't fit in well either. It looks rather awkward and should be erased all together in my opinion.

Some text and a one pixel border would make it look great once the extra images are out of the way. =)

Great first attempt at this!
 
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