Yari's Submerging Graphic

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Yari

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Hello, Im new here and hope to be able to stay. I see your all very good at graphics and many of you do it so I thought I may aswell add some myself and add a decent thread name.

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I hope you think its okay. I think the image of her on the right is too far to the left.

Anyway! Hope to stay and have fun :)
 
Yari said:
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Made these out of random. I think I prefer the darker top one.
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Oh my, I see such a big jump from the first one you showed us. And yes, the barker one does look a little bit better than the bright one, even if the bright one it self does have its own advantages. =)
For one thing, the brighter one looks a little bit more blended in which would be the one thing that the pieces are missing a bit. I'd say try to mak your image as a whole, as if it was always meant to be the way you placed it, blend it so that it doesn't seem as if was two starting images. =) That's what I always try to do.
Another good thing to do is try to use colors from the stock it self, that was everything flows a bit better, but in the end, you didn't do such a bad job.
Keep practicing! ^^
 
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I kinda like this one.. On photoshop it looks a bit more darker and not as white as it seems on this file.

And thanks for the comment zack
 
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I kinda like this.. I thought it was some random anime until my friend told me its the logo girl of a Japanese computer music making program :D

c and c please.
 
Oh my!
This is a big improvement over the ones you have showed me already. The blending is well done ad the few effects go well with the image.
But perhaps on the other side which means the left, its a little empty, the text is there sure but maybe something else?
Don't over crowd it now. =)
 
I really like this newest one. I really like the text. I agree with Zach_Fair that it's missing a little something. Maybe adding some small squares in the lower left hand corner, the dark blue that's in the characters hair would help? Maybe not squares but something small. It won't take much though. Keep it up it!
 
Thanks for replies. Ill add something to the bottom left in a bit.. The square idea sounds cool.. Ill experiment. :)
 
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