The School of the Wolves (part 1) OOC and signups

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The intercom crackles to life as you all enter school for the first day.

"Hey kids! Are you new to this school? I'm going to take the dumb looks on your faces for a yes. Welcome to Pendle High, the school of wolves and arguably the worst school in the nation. This place is the absolute worst in the nation. There are only two kinds of dudes here: the ones who transferred here on purpose, and those who wound up here because of bad luck... and those dudes probably aren't going to be here too much longer.

If you're that first kinda' dude, then there's only one reason to be here: To climb on top of the pile of broken bones that this school is going to turn into and be the Top Dog! To rule this school, and with your crew, defend the pride and honor of not only this school, but the whole damn town. We've never lost a war to any of the other schools in the whole damn state.

The principal doesn't give a damn, and spends his days inside the office glued to his computer. The teachers are either alcoholics, on their way to it, or baked out of their gourds, and the sober ones are too chicken to do shit. I don't even think that the town cares all that much about the place, but something keeps 'em from bulldozing the place over n' turnin' it into a strip mall. I don't blame 'em This place is so thoroughly stuck in the middle of nowhere that your parents (well, those of you who have parents) are probably wondering if the government remembers -let alone- knows that we exist. We don't don't really care though. We're not all about fighting though, and we screw around a lot and have fun but...

This high school isn't the place for the weak, or exceedingly pacifistic. This is a school where you make your way with your fists. Within these hallowed halls, respect is the most valued currency, and is earned by proving your strength and guts through the fights that you're gonna' have.

...Oh, and freshman? Welcome to high school"

-Garry "The Diplomat" Greenman. Pendle High Senior, leader of the "Three Blind Mice" faction, and spokesperson for the Tyrants Alliance.

History:
Pendle is a city located within it's own county. It is also surrounded by other nowhere counties in the least known, and most boring state in the United States. The city used to be a midwestern boomtown during the gold-rush days. The money accrued from the gold carried on, allowing the town to prosper until the time of the depression of the 1930's. The city survived it, but it's economy never fully recovered from it.

The city struggles -desperately at times- to keep itself afloat. Though there are steady sources of income. For instance, the Plain Jane's Fabric consistently does exceedingly well each year, providing the city with much needed income through the fabric supplies that it sells to those delinquents at Pendle high for perpetuating the towns most sacred and special tradition [we'll get to that in part two though]. Whether they know it or not, the [The mascot for an sports team if it existed would be the Pendle city Timber wolves] wolves of Pendle city are saving this town one dollar at a time.

Delinquent culture
Just because a majority of the kids at Pendle high might have criminal personalities, does not mean that they are without honor. Respect is valuable, but sometimes a win is a win. Dirty fighters, meaning those that weapons, hit their opponents after a KO, jumping dudes using overwhelming numbers over a one-on-one battle, betrayals, and sneak attacks make person feared. But never respected. Would you rather win, knowing that nobody will probably ever trust or respect you in school again, or lose, take your lumps and accept your defeat or fight another day? Though not even the dirtiest of delinquents would ever dare draw a gun, knife or other deadly weapon on their victim. The delinquents here can be honorable. Even the worst fighter at school can be well-respected if he has a reputation for honesty and keeping his word. Just don't be a dick though, or somebody might knock the taste out of your mouth.


School Spirit
Regardless of how anti-establishment and anti-teacher the kids are, everyone shows some amount of school unity by wearing their uniforms to school. Some guys even take it a step further by self-enforcing the dress-code, beating the ever-loving shit out of those not wearing at least some part of their school uniform to school. What you wear after school is your own damned business.

The standard uniform for males consists of beige slacks, polished black loafers, a white dress shirt, a red and blue plaid tie, and a dark blue sweater or sweater vest, containing the embroidered pattern of a white wolf howling at the moon, which is the schools logo, symbol, and emblem.

The girls uniform consists of the same except that a matching dark blue skirt is worn.

There is a war going on for the position of Top Dog, or Leader of the school. The are numerous factions, some big, and some small, some weak, and some strong, but all vying for the ultimate control of the school. No matter the differences, and no matter the faction, the "Wolves" (the delinquent students ) will always rally together in mass to defend itself against any who threaten it, and protect "the pack"



Local Rival Schools

St. Anthony's All-boy academy

Very possibly the only school that Wolves equally both pity and respect. The school is Catholic, and all-boys, which is the reason why they pity them. St. Anthony's is home to some of the best high-school boxers in the state. Of course, these are boxers and not fighters. The two schools bear no enmity towards each other, seeing their rivalry as something more necessary than desired if anything. Somebody has to stand at the top, and so far it's been Pendle, yet St. Anthony's feels it only natural to challenge that. They have the Respect of both Pendle High, and Edison high.

Red Maple Private High school:

Home to the richest, and stingiest kids in town. The Red Maple's school mascot if the wood peckers, which kids from every school in town derides the (Much to their chagrin) as "Peckerheads". The school itself is considered one of the best schools (education-wise) in the state. Greedy, the Peckerheads don't want just "best", but "strongest" as well. It is a school after all that demands excellence constantly. The wolves, are looked down upon by the Peckerheads as "human filth", "trash", "rednecks", and "distastefully ... urban". This list does not include the racist, anti-semitic, and homophobic names, that they're apt to hurl at the non-Maples.

Their current leader is Chaz Robinson, Senior and Captain of the football team.

Thomas Edison High

Really just a bunch of Brainless jocks, metal-heads, and alcohlics; most of them go by a "Might Makes Right" policy, believing themselves to be physically the strongest school in town aside from St. Anthony's. In reality the school is mostly threatened the strength of the Wolves without even playing sports. They feel perfectly justified in hating the wolves, feeling that they're lazy good-for-nothings, and therefore don't deserve the title of "Strongest School in town". This fact, disturbs them, the Edison High Watts. What they haven't realized, is that though, they have unity, they usually don't have much of a plan or a clue.

Of course, most people consider Edison high the place to go if you want to see a Football or Basketball game.

Edison High kids have a grudging respect for St. Anthony's (primarily because of their Boxing Club), but view the rich kids at Red Maple as "a Bunch of sissy-fag boys"

Major Factions

Factions are the bread and butter, for the school of the wolves. They, like kingdoms and dynasty's rise and fall with generation and graduating classes. It is unknown currently, how many faction, maor and minor have existed throughout the schools entire history.

The Three Blind Mice:
Otherwise known as the "Mice" or "Jerry's", they were born in Garry's sophomore year when he hurled a handful of dust into the eyes of three Juniors that had tried to secretly and privately jump him. He took the blinded lot of them down quite easily. The Mice have sonce built a large reputation and following, choosing to pick their battles and fight wisely. They fought tactically and with surgical precision Garry aimed for the throne of the top, almost winning the shebang, but lost majorly at the battle of the (East street) bridge. The loss cost Garry not only many of his followers, but the tremendous momentum he'd been building through a strategy of carefully well-planned battles. Distraught, and needing both time and peace to recover his losses, he joined the Tyrants alliance to grant his group extra support. It's not really known as to whether or not Garry's going to stage a comeback attempt, considering that he's now entering his senior year. It is speculated that his younger brother Tommy is slated for the position as head of the mice. There have been rumors that "Trick" might be more that a little ambitious, and therefore in contention with Garry for the position as leader. This however is just speculation

Leader: Garry "The Diplomat" Greenman, Senior
Vice head/Right-hand: Tommy Greemman, Junior
Generals: Terrence "Trick" Dillenger, Ronny "Iceman" Kowalsky

The Armored Black Heap
The second oldest known faction in the school. Founded by the "Big Black Buddha", these guys are some of the most carefree unserious dudes around. They are also the second oldest contemporary group around. There aren't many rules to follow. The tenants of the group are as follows:

1. Just don't be a dick.

2. Have fun. Don't hurt your fellow brothers.

3. Have fun.

4. Try your best to love and get along with your fellow brothers.

5. Have fun. Share and give as much as you can, for you'll probably recieve that much back.

6. Have fun.

7. Protect your comrades and those close to you.

8. No drugs (Weed and booze are okay though). Also, try not to get arrested.

9. Have fun.

10. Try to at least enjoy yourself and the company of those around you (have fun)

There's not much structure or lorganization in this faction. The only recognized and respected leader in the group is the person bestowed with the honorary title and position of "The Black Buddha". The Black Buddha is first nominated and chosen during freshman year by the currently acting Black Buddha, as a successor to his position. The only prerequisites (aside from not being a total dick) are a true demonstration of both good character and above-average fighting ability. The other prerequisite is that the Buddha has to be of full African American descent, hence the part "Black". The nominated Buddha then takes over the part of acting Black buddha in Sopohomore year, after the previous Buddha has graduated. Every member of the heap is considered a complete equal; from the highest Buddha, to the lowest joining freshman.

The legend goes that the first Buddha was friends with a bunch of nerds, who after watching an old horror flick. The Buddha didn't begrudge or judge them for who they were, and attempted to introduce all of them to girls (potential girlfriends for some) in exchange for helping him with some difficult homework (back when teachers gave something of a crap). Members of a major faction (whose name has been lost to time) had surrounded the movie theater, lying in wait for when the lot of them left the theater. The faction members were armed with baseball bats and bottles. Knowing that the nerds wouldn'tprobably survive the beating they were going recieved, the Buddha thrust himself in the way of the attackers absorbing all the blows meant for them. He even tried fighting back a little, taking out a couple of opponents in the process. Bloodied, beaten, and broken, he fought on until he finally succumbed to his injuries and slumped to the ground unconscious. Shocked by his sacrifice and angered by the injury of their beloved friend, their fists clenched in unbridled rage. It seems that he had also given them some of his fighting spirit. Incidentally, Fivefall and the Armored heap generally tend to have a lot of respect for each other. Not only do they generally get along well, but they also tend to know when to stay out of the way and each others affairs. Problems that arise between the two are quickly solved. Fivefalls members also tend to freak out less when a member of the heap touches or accidentally harms their bike. I said less.

All members of the Armored Heap are required to shave their head upon entry into the group. Most continue to shave their heads anyways after it grows back. The Buddha have to shave his head completely bald. Besides, it sort of keeps the adults happy. All members of the heap at least have some respect for the Buddha. However, don't let their foolish, happy-go lucky ways fool you. The Buddha is usually always a huge monsters, and most of the members of the heap are in standing to become rising monsters. Retribution is swift and often cruel, and fights with their group will always be somewhat painful and difficult.

Fivefall
One of the oldest, smallest and most widely known factions in Pendle high's modern history. Fivefall is famous for having a grand total of 25 members at any given time. The legend goes that the original Fivefall were a group of science and history geeks who had gotten tired of being bullied around. Unable to take their torment any longer, the five gathered together and took on and defeated a major faction by themselves barehanded, making them beasts in the process.

The group consists of 5 school monsters, with a limit of 4 "agents" working under a particular number. Each agent is sworn to working under only one monster, and they adopt the number of the beast that they work under as part of their Identity. No agent or beast -it is told- is better or more valuable than another, and members swear a blood oath to never to intentionally harm another member of the Fivefall. By fulfilling the oath, they become blood-brothers/sisters (or cousins if you want to get into semantics) with all other members of the Fivefall.

The signature style of the group are the black bomber Jackets. The recognized beasts wear a large emroidered patch containing their number in red

Their mission isn't really all that clear (it is only apparent to the monstrous leaders), but it seems that part of it is to prevent bullying of weaker school members whenever and wherever they see it happening. All members are subject to stopping bullying. These mysterious badasses are the closest things the school has to enforcers.

They're also known for their love of motorcycles. They are mostly extremely sensitive about their bikes. A non-member getting his or her grubby hands all over their precious hog is an offence worthy of the highest punishment. May god help you if you intentionally harm their bike. They are complete bike-o-philes. As a result, riding something like a scooter will make you the butt of their ridicule for as long as they remember you rode that "sissy euro trash hunk-o-crap" to school.

It is also said that when all 25 gather, something major is going down. Blood will spill, bones will break, and teeth will fly.

#1 Thomas "Brick" O'Malley
#2 Regina Huxtaby aka "The girl with the red Ballet Slippers"
#3 Ahiga Wakiza aka "Brother Sun", one half of the "Tribal twins" aka "The Terrible Twosome
#4 Nihzoni Wakiza "Sister Moon", one half of the "Tribal twins" aka "The Terrible Twosome
#5 Was occupied by Wally Grennich, however, he is confined to a hospitabl bed in a vegetative comatose state after a a bike accident lat at night. He still holds the position of #5 for as long as he lives. However. Fivefall is currently in search of a worthy monster to fill his jacket and act in his stead (That means that this position can be open to any strong enough player character)

The Beasts/Monsters

They're called beasts and monsters for a reason. Their strength alone is worth enough to form a faction. A monster or a beast is the type of guy who's taken on more that 4 guys at once in a fight. Normal kids just don't compare. These are the types of guys that send you flying through doors with a hard kick. School beasts that aren't allied or a member of any group are usually called "Lone wolves". They're respected and feared, and for plenty good reason. Freshman and underclassmen that either continually improve their fighting ability or fight with increasingly exceptionally improving skills are called "Rising Monsters" or "Frankensteins". It is currently unknown how many school beasts there are and for numerous reasons. There are some of course, who choose to keep their ability hidden because they actually want relatively peaceful days.

The exceptions:

Of Course, you always have to be just a fighter here. There are some (albeit few) weaklings, wimps, geeks, and nerds who've managed to do the unprecedented and carve out a niche for themselves within the school. The services that they provide to the school and town are invaluable and make, grant them immunity from bullying and violence that might otherwise be brought upon them by the more athletic types. All factions involved in the school are mandated to swear an oath to never harm, sell out (to other schools), or recruit (Their services provided them would unfairly tip the balance of power, which is cheap). Williningly and knowingly harming one of these individuals, not only breaks the oath/pact, but also harms the interests of the entire school; and god help you if you bring that shit-storm (the entire school) on you.

Larry labb-Bell, aka The Owl:

Larry is a Sophomore. He's the eyes on the border. The watchman. His special duty is keep a constant vigil, surveying both the town and the county. Chances are that if that danger is on the horizon from another school, you'll hear about it from him. If it's in a different county, you'll hear about it from him. If it's about a war between two entirely different schools, you'll still hear about it from him. If you haven't heard about something involving the different schools out there, he's either asleep, sick, or diggin something up. The Scope keeps the Wolves on guard when they need to be and is an invaluable necessity.

Ben Framington, aka Pastor Hughes, aka Father Hues:

He's the man that you come to for advice. When you're seeking the anwers to something, you seek him. When you a faction leader and mired in doubt about both yourself and your abilities, you seek him. When you're having trouble with your life outside of school, and need something or someone for it, you seek him. Faction leaders not only schedule appointments with Father Hues (Junior), but they have the entire bathroom, reserved, using their own members to do it! Wheteer you're a beast, leader, exception, or just another dude, you go to him when you need help and advice. He's also probably the closest thing that the school has to a reliable shrink, and a psychiatrist.

Father Hues is somewhat of a mystery in the fact that nobody has seen his face! The only place where you'll knowingly encounter him is in the second floor bathroom near the science lab, and in the last toilet stall from the wall on the left. There's a sign-up sheet outside of the bathroom for when you want to schedule an appointment with him. If you do though, you'll need to provide him with adequate compensation for his time and efforts. Rumour has it that he ate an entire vat of old chilli in his freshman year. Which is of course bunk.

Gustaf Bellynyic, aka Goggles:

(Sophomore)

Goggles is in a way the same af the owl, except where the Owl reports on out-of-schools affairs, Goggles reports on factions and such. His job is the most dangerous out of all of the other exceptions. When there's a rumble in the hallways, Goggles is there either in the midst of the battle of far away taking notes on those involved. He's also the one peddling information between faction. He notes weaknesses, and weakpoints, though he constantly tries to unite the school by adding the implied suggestion of unity rather than war. Of course, if it's juicy information, he'll be willing to tell you. For a price...

It has been rumored that he's trying to set up some sort of zine or student newspaper with the other exceptions. The three fear however, that it might endanger their immune status, making them once again subject to punches and bullying.

Disclaimer
This is an RP about high school. Regular high school, meaning that it's to be very much grounded in reality. The first part of the RP is going to span from the first day back at school to Halloween. This will allow for good RP battles (most just fist fights and such). There is going to be a lot of politicking, meaning betrayals, double-dealing, faction and alliance building, etc, etc. Characters acting with (forming an alliance or faction together) or against (rumbles, gang-fights, beefing, and etc) will added that oh-so-needed extra spice of drama and tension to make the RP oh-so-very-engaging. Communicating about the RP outside, of the RP will help, and will be greatly preferred.

Keep in mind that you characters are regular-ass human beings, and do not exhibit inhuman abilities like mega strength, magic, and blinding speed strikes. And no swords! This is middle-o' nowhere-USA, and that'd be just asinine.

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Name:
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Political affiliations (includes your rank in a faction if you're a member of one, and any alliances/political crap with any other groups):
Age:
Appearance:
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Personality:
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Thanks! I'm still trying to edit, add, and find the time to do the first two damned things. Make sure to tell your friends though!
 
WHOA! Kick ass story. Im in! Im going to leave a ew areas blank as im not too sure as to what to put in. Until i get everything straight, ill fill in as much as i can
 
oh fucking GAY! Fivefall seemed pretty good, but im not a big fan of american bikes (i assume by American, it means harley looking ones right?). I have to admit though, the current factions are really good. im having a tough time to choose. Can i first be a lone wolf then join?
 
Did some more edits. I thinking about creating another major faction with the function and focus of combating out of school factions, rather than for the domination of the school.

And possibly an all-girls crew.

Afterwards, i'm going to put up some stuff for other local rival schools.
 
Hey, Serge, i was wondering if you could post your bio up first. i truthfully am not too sure as to how to write it (most of the stuff i go into are fantasy. Not quite know how to write in moderation) so i wanted to use your one as an example of a character in your rp. Its a great concept tho. Kudos to you.
 
BAM

(I'm re-editing this)

Name: Mason Lionel Robertson IV (what reads on his school card)

Aliases/Titles (if any): “Moose”, "Buddha", “Bruce Leeroy”

Political affiliations: None… yet

Age: 14

Appearance:

Mason is a little bit taller an average freshman. He’s a 5’10, 125 African American male with caramel brown skin. His hair is almost completely shaven, excluding a thin layer of hair still remaining on his scalp, though the edges where the hair meets skin are detailed and shaped up nicely. He got his nickname, “Buddha” as a result of the way that it looks. He has a strong jawline, and a naturally penetrating gaze that gives him a near-constant “serious” or “angry” looking natural facial expression. It gets him into more trouble than he’d like to admit, though he has no real control over it.


Mason has a very wiry, yet athletic build, developed through years of farming; his hands and feet are visibly scarred and calloused, further evidencing the nature of his work. his work. There’s a large diagonal scar on his chest that was caused by a haywire piece of farming equipment and sheer bad luck. It almost killed him getting the scar. Mason hates going to school without his lucky red bandanna. He also prefers wearing dress shoes or sneakers.


Fighting ability/ies and experience:

Mason has little formal solid martial arts training. The majority of that which he knows is a composite mixture of the skills his father taught him, and the kickboxing training he received from low-level instructors at the local YMCA back down south. Mason primarily is a striker, and has little experience with grappling. Though 14 years old, Mason has a lot of fighting experience. His punches are powerful, and his kicks are lightning fast. His experience with fighting enables him to be able to switch things up, allowing for quick, wild punches and devastating kicks and knees.


Mason's talent and potential in fighting, combined with his 2 “signature” moves made him the king of Boomer Middle school for a reason:

1. The “Moose Kick”, which is essentially a side kick with the power to take the fight out of anybody who catches it full-force. The first time he used it, he kicked a dude through a door, while simultaneously earning him the title/nickname “Moose”.

2. Mason’s “Magnum straight” is a lightning-fast no-nonsense straight punch aimed at the sternum or face. Mason has given it a magnum name because of the speed in which he both drops into a low forward stance and instantly (like the bullet from a gun) "fires "the punch off. Also, he plays too many video games.

Personality
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Mason is a sometimes stoic, exuberant, and earthy soul. A lover of having fun and people, he's a naturally bright person. This is a quality that makes him a natural leader. Years of secretly indulging in his hobbies (fighting games, comics, and action figures), combined with his family's genes have instilled in him a love of fighting.

Mason also unfortunately has poor filter control, which means that he sometimes ends up saying awkward, insensitive, and offensive things around his peers (though usually and comedically at the absolute worst time). He hates being condescended to though, and his anger is something to be feared, changing from a relaxed and easy-going dude into a furious torrential downpour of fists and profanity (in a deep southern drawl) instantaneously. Luckily, his rages don't tend to last too long and he reverts right back to his original self immediately afterwards.

He enjoys listening to music (Preferrably what he calls "Black people music... and a little classical"), comics, video-games (role-playing of course, don't judge!), break-dancing or "b-boying" (he can’t seem to fucking get that damned windmill down, but he's trying to incorporate it into his fights), and (secretly) studying the stock market.


Year: 1st (freshman)

Bio/Personal History:

Born and raised in the South, Mason was helping his father work on the struggling family farm since he was 7 years old. A freak accident involving a stray roto-tiller blade put an end to all of that. He was in the hospital in intensive care at the hospital for a year and had to be resuscitated 3 times. His parents had to sell the farm in order to pay for his hospital fees. He started fighting when he entered middle school. Mason's father (the third) noticed that his beloved son had inherited his propensity for fighting and his talent at it (i.e. knocking a kid much bigger and stronger than him out with a hay-maker) and taught him what he knew in his spare time. He sent Mason to the local YMCA to develop technique, skill, and most importantly, discipline. They moved out west to Pendleton for better opportunities and his father works two very stable jobs with good pay (a miner and a custodian), his mother is overseas on business. Having become the king of Boomer middle in the south, Mason enters school here at Pendle high, contemplating whether or not to try for Top Dog status.
 
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Right, here i go...

Name: Dies "Hinamori" Irae

Aliases/Titles: One Hit

Political affiliations: Lone Wolf

Age: 15

Appearance: Dies is, by blood, a mix of German and Japanese. However, her japanese blood is much more prominent, taking after her mother. She stands at 170cm tall, well above average, and weigh in at about 60 kg. Her hair is dark chocolate brown and tied in a normal ponytail which reaches the low of her back. However, with her beanie on, she lets it hang. Her fringe is loose at the front and has two tassels hanging from the sides that frame her face. She is relatively well shaped like any teen girls, but in contrast, her build is much stronger as a result of training and constant fighting. The only adornment she wears are earrings, in which she has a pair chain earrings on her ears and a black metal bracelet on each wrist. She wears thigh high black socks and the college blazer plus a sky blue ski beanie which she leave the two tassels untied which reaches her collar.

Fighting ability/ies and experience: Dies has plenty of fighting spirit. She was raised in a dojo in japan which trained in bare fist fighting and in swordsmenship. She was told she had a nack in handling weaponry. It is said that give her any weapon, proper or improvised, and her victory is almost guaranteed. However, she is often without any weapon, especially where it counts, thus she depends on her fists. Although having been taught in a wide range of bare hands martial arts, the one that counts is Bai Ji Quan, a close quarter martial arts. Being said that she is good at it, she is nowhere near as good as she is with weapons, thus is only at a mid level. Not good enough to fight in tournaments, but good enough at school.

Bai Ji Quan centralizes on breaking the opponents guard and their foundation and mount explosive and short ranged high, mid and low attacks from close quarter. It emphasises strikes using knees, elbows, shoulders and hips and aims at attacking vulnerable points on the body, mostly the neck and the joints. Once the guard is broken, a single critical hit is landed followed by a series of fast, heavy hits aimed at vital areas. Unlike western style which generate power through swinging force, Bai Ji Quan utilises a one-hit push strike method from close range. The bulk of the damage is done through the momentary acceleration that travel from the waist to the limb, further magnified by the charging steps.

Experience wise, her dojo has a heavy emphasis on serious from the go. Fights could lead to serious injuries. Therefore, Dies is no stranger to extreme hostile attacks. However, there was still limits to how one fight. As much as she is used to such hostility, Dies may be unprepared in response to cheap tactics or deception such as suprise attacks and traps.

She has a few moves that are finishers and heavy damage.

[Normal damage] Counter: Her most used move is the counter. In this situation, we will use a right swing in which their left leg is forward. This can be applied either side.
Against a swinging right hook, with her left arm, she would simultaneously block the incoming blow and slide it down to grab onto their elbow while kneeing them just below the ribs or the solar plexus with her right knee. The left arm will come up, the elbow at their head level and with an open claw hand. The moment their head comes forward from the knee, the left hand will perform a crushing downward palm strike with the lower portion of the palm. Following the downward momentum, the knee used will slide down the body behind the left leg, stepping into their center of gravity behind their knee. Whilst she is sliding down her left hand will come down from the palm and elbow them in the heart area. By this time, her leg will be on the floor and she will be right up close. Here she could do two things:

1: From the elbow, at this close range, she could simply backfist the opponent in the face with the final downward momentum and let them drop OR,

2: From the elbow, with a shouldering motion, she will heave at the body with her arm acting like a spring. Since her right knee is behind their leg and in their center of gravity, the force acting on his head and the lower legs will make them lose balance and fly backwards.


[HD] Breaking Point: Using a quick shuffle to get straight into the opponents guard, when up close, Dies will launch a straight punch under the arms and into the opponents chest. Using Bai Ji Quan's principle of one hit attacks and the idea of push, Dies will perform a heavy punch which she aims to punch through the opponent, thus sending him flying with heavy damage.

[HD] Open Strike: A quick way to drop the opponent is when the opponent has raised both hands in position to fight, by spearing both hands in between and grabbing the opponent by the back of the neck, Dies can launch herself forward while pulling the opponent towards her. Her elbows buckle outwards to open and break their guard before a heavy knee lands into their chest. If needed, a head butt could follow onto the back of the opponents head to stun and drop them to the floor.

[F]Twisting Strike, also more commonly known as "The Crab": There are two paths one can take for this. Similarly, the moves begin from further away and a quick approach with breaking of the opponents guard by any means via the front. Once this occurs, Dies will extend a leg between the opponents groin unbent, with her waist extremely close the the person.

The Crab: The more common form of this move, her head will be at the person's stomach and in an instant, she will push forward from her rear leg, the leg between the enemies leg acts as a transfer point for the force, and both fists punch straight past her head, into the person's stomach/ sloar plexus and pushed through, sending them flying up and back.

Pin strike: Used lot less often than the crab, it is relatively similar to it, but is much more destructive. The position of the legs and body is pretty much the same, but instead, both fists are placed at either the heart or solar plexus. In an instantaneous charge, converting force from the push on her hind leg, the front leg bends like in the Crab, but her whole body shifts forward towards where her fist is and at the instant all force is transfered to her body, her right elbow rises , in which her left fist is placed into her right hand as her right elbow strikes at where the fist had targetted initially. By doing so, there will be no recoiling backwards, forcing all power forward. By combining all force from her feet to her forward movement, her bodily twist to her elbow strike and the single sharp point of conact, it can knock out an opponent in a single hit an possibly, if done by a master, kill someone. However, as she is not a master, the most it can do isknock someone out whilst breaking their ribs and sending them flying.

Personality: Dies is relatively easy going. All she want is to finish school and make her family happy. However, when those that disturb her peace (regularly) or just bother her, her temper flares somewhat. That being said, it means that she is a bit hot blooded and slightly short fused. She is, in a basic sense, a normal girl ith normal personality. She often divulge in more peaceful activities such as knitting and reading when she isnt smacking heads and daydream about. She prefers to stay out of school politics, but the fighting blood of her parents seem to drag her into trouble

Year: Sophmore (Year 10)

Bio/Personal History: Dies was born into a family of fighters from a long lineage. Her german blood from her father bestowed her tenacity and fierceness and her mother's japanes blood gave her spirit and courage. She had lived in Japan for a majority of her life, most of it being dedicated in the martial arts. Unlike normal parents, they sought her out to be a renowned fighter like them. Therefore, instead of protecting her from danger, they allowed her to be exposed. She was sent to the worse of schools and allowed her to fight and fall and experience defeat and revival. This was their ethos for their parenting, which also lead to her being sent to Pendle, in which was another of their plan in hardening up and training their daughter.

No one lived more true to the ethos of a single hit than Dies. Throughout her childhood, almost all fights had been victorious under a single combo or hit, hence earning her the title of One Hit, matching her fighting style. However, as she progressed, fights were longer, but her title remained. One Hit now also referred to that one punch equaled to one hit. During her first few years at Pendle, She had little trouble with maintaining her title as the weaker of the school attempted to make name for themselves by preying on what they though as weak. However, with the advantage of training and determination, the smaller fries were no threat. Dies do know that the stronger foes were less easy, in which she avoided any confrontation. BUT her fighting blood seemed to be drawing her to the fight like a magnet.

(Messed up parents huh? Got a bit choppy at the end, so i might redo the history later if im up to it.)
 
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Year 9 is freshman. 10 is sophmore. 11 is junior. 12 is senior.

I know, from reading your bio that she prefers, one strike, but could you explain to the quickly glancing, and the unintiated how she earned it? I think that it'd be interesting.

There'll be more update later. I'm just hoping to attract more players before starting.
 
Name: Stephen Hownam
Aliases/Titles (if any): Tribal
Political affiliations: Lone wolf
Age: 15
Appearance:
standing at 6 feet tall Stephen has an Athletic build he is clean shaven with short brown hair that has blond highlights in it, he styles it depending on the day and/or his mood. he has a tattoo that takes up most of the space on the left side of his Torso and also his Left arm
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His out of school attire consists of
a Black DC beanie that has a visor, with the Visor poitning backwards and slightly to the right, He wears a pair of Black G-star Jeans. most of the time he wears a black or a white FCUK T-shirt. Stephen has many Styles of T-shirt in his cupboards. His trainers are quite Often White Lecostes but has other pairs in his collection.

Fighting ability/ies and experience: Stephen was taught to fight by his father who was a cage fighter, but his greatest strength in a fight is his ability to render his foes unconscious with great efficiency.

Stephen has no favoured style of fighting, nor does he favour any part of his body to cause pain. His Ground, punching and kicking skills are of equal value to him and he is effective in all areas. His blows are precise and hard, his blows are rapid even thought they aren't the strongest blows around school.

Stephen's fighting style involves staying on his feet as much as possible, and trying to find a weak point in his opponents as quickly as he can as to avoid taking too many blows himself.

Stephen only has two signature tricks in his book and he tends to use one at the start of the fight. He calls it his ninja kick, but it's basically a flying kick to the sternum after kicking off of a chair, or
[FONT=&quot]heightened[/FONT] region. and thesecond is his finisher of sorts, it consist of a three punch combo followed by a roundhouse kick, all of whichare blows to the head, and tend to end with the foe unconscious.

Personality: Stephen is a kind and caring person, he is well liked around school, and is a good person to befriend. Fighting to protect those he cares about, and also the honour of the School, Stephen is a mercenary of sorts around school, he will fight anyone for enough cigarettes.

Stephen has a short fuse, but it only breaks when he sees someone being mistreat or bullied. With a kind sense of humour many have made the mistake of thinking that Stephen Isn't a very strong fighter as he isn't in a faction, and he exerts a 'nice guy' persona.

People like Stephen because of the Aura he gives off, As it is kind, fun and caring.

Year: sophomore

Bio/Personal History: as a young child, both of Stephen's parents wanted to make him the strongest he could be, as they intended to send him to Pendle high as that is where they met.

Stephen's father was a well respected lone wolf and moved onto become a successful cage fighter in life, his mother became a tattoo artist, this explains how Stephen got the amount of tattoo's at his age.

Stephen's mother and father took it in turns attempting to toughen Stephen up, his father with extensive beatings and fighting lessons, his mother by exerting pain on him with her tattoo gun.

during his Freshman year, Stephen's tattoo's, that covered the majority of his left hand side, gave him the nickname tribal as to correspond with the design of his tattoo's (that some chose to call a masterpiece)

Now that Stephen is a sophomore, he commands more respect from the Freshmen, and enjoys now more than ever a difficult scrap with an up and coming beast or faction member.

I hope this is an okay Bio, and i hope i got my year right, I'm no good with English-american schooling translations
 
When you say explain one strike, you mean the name or her style?

Her style is now explained in the fighting abilities/experiene section

Her title is explained at the bottom of her history.

I've changed a bit of her appeareance. Her hair is no dark chocolate brown and her beanie has a picture now.

I've also added a normal move and had fixed up Twisting strike (the finisher).

All in all, take another skim through her f you need to.
 
I've been considering adding a signature moves section, allowing only 3 specials per character to make things simpler and more comprehensive. However, seeing the amount of work and detail that you've put into designing your character, it doesn't seem right. Well done tipsynaruto. Though be prepared to explain these moves (in-detail) when the time comes that they are used.

Strike Freedom, I like your character concept. You have noticeable spelling and grammar errors though. Your fighting abilities/experiences field requires more detail. Does he do any particular martial arts style, or is he just a brawler? Are they any special or noticeable tendencies in the way that he fights? Does he kick or punch a lot? Does he go to the ground at all? I need more detail.

Oh, and more detail on personalities. Any quirks or anything? What pisses them off? Are they malicious of well-intentioned jokesters?
 
ahahaha...i DID go a bit all out XP. Thnx for the consideration. ill explain what happens wehn the time comes.
 
Close. Your bio still says age: 1 . Also, how about your character's technique? Does he swing wildly? Does he try to grab and punch? Are his punches and/or kick lightning-fast? Can he throw a proper punch?

Also, check on spelling one more time (it might help to run it through microsoft word).
 
added the bit about his strikes, corrected the grammar with Word, and have added in a few more years of life
 
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