Sab's sketches

[Sabriel]

These are for my art assignments over the last couple of years, please comment and critise as I'm thinking of taking art.

Cariature- Queen. Y7

Bicycle - Y7

Cubism - me. Y7

My room.

Our car. (Y8-ish)

Our car interior (ditto)

My Mob. - Y9

Hairdryer - Y9

Most recent: Y9. My shoe.

 

[Rorolina Frixell]

Hard to see the face too well and the arms could do with being thicker, right now they look stick thin. The rest looks really nice though ^^

This looks prett good, but the pedals look a little too close to the ground, as well as being too close to the rear wheel imo. Also, this may just be me not seeing the angle but the rear wheel seems smaller than the front wheel. Also, the front wheel, where the brake part is (I forget the name, the part in the center of the wheel >_>) doesn't look very central, the rear wheel one looks fine though imo Nice work on the chain too ^^

This looks pretty good, going for a picasso-esque style? Very nicely done ^^ the feet look a bit on the thin side (i'm no artist mind, so that may have been intentional for this art style) also, the legs could do with not 'joining' till a smidge further up

Again, it seems to be pretty light so it's hard to pick out details, you may want to press harder in areas, or after drawing go over it again to enhance the detail. From what I can make out though, you've done a great job on the room overall Love stuff like the Bunny, bed, desk etc. Did you use a room for reference or was this purely mental imagery? Also, noticed you did outside scenery from the windows. That's one thing I often forget xD

For this, it looks a bit on the 'wobbly' side, like the wheels are on a lean and the car looks like it's adopted a 'pyramid' look. I do like how you added in the logos and such though, shame you missed out a registration plate for a finishing touch xD The doors could do with being smaller (the car overall could be taken down a few centimeters) as they look really stretched. As for the interior you may want to 'hide' the sun shields (or w/e tey're called, used to block the sun for the driver and passenger >_>) since from outside you wouldn't often see that much of them. The seats etc however look fine

Now for this, I love what you did for the car door, as well as attention to the other details on the back seat area. However., unlike previous drawings you didn't add anything in from the window, and you forgot seatbelts. Remember those next time

This looks very nicely done, in particular I notice your attention to the buttons and designs on the phone. The shape looks pretty much perfect as well and I can faintly make out some shading. Nice job ^^

The handle on this looks great but you let yourself down on the 'head', the back looks quite wobbly but on the whole it looks quite smooth. with that adjustment it would look spot on

For this, I can't really see any fault. There's a good use of shading, shape, interior and details such as the bow. Nice work

 

[Sabriel]

Don't forget: some of these are quite old, but thanks for the comments!

I think the last 3 sketches was what earned me my 91% and thus, an A.

Editing the first page detailing when and what that is.

 

[Sabriel]

Doodle, I CAN'T ROTATE IT

Express yourself competition entry