Original Power of the Gods.

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Power of the Gods
Prologue: The Hands of Providence

The three figures moved quietly towards the House of Law as the boiling sun shone down upon them. Most people were resting to avoid the harsh burn the flaming ball left, and those who remained awake tended to remain away from the foreboding structure that cast its shadow over the whole town, so the trio passed practically invisible.


When they reached the entrance of the House of Law, they took shelter beneath a balcony, letting the shade cool them down.

A moment passed, then the only adult among them took out a small radio from the bag on his shoulder, lifting it with his bronzed hands to his firm, full mouth.

"Team B, in position," he said softly into the radio, talking over the crackling. Knowing he would get no answer, he flicked the radio off and stashed it into his bag.

Next, all three figures removed a thin object from their bags.

It was a slender, nine-millimeter pistol, which the man loaded with bullets before clicking the cartridge shut and flicking the safety off.

The second and third members of the trio, a boy of fifteen and a girl of seventeen, loaded their own weapons with bullets, the girl with swift, elegant movements, and the boy clumsily.

The way the boy held the weapon, at arms length with one hand, showed his inexperience, while the way the girl clutched it, close to her chest with both hands, proved her expertise.

The man looked down at them both.

"Hermes. Athena. Ready?"

The girl nodded. "Ready."

The boy grunted in a quavering voice.

Looking at the glass doors, the man placed a large hand on the door. "I'm going in."

The girl nodded again. "Godspeed," she said, before disappearing around the corner, the boy close behind.

When they were out of sight, the man entered the huge structure that stretched up to the clouds.

It seemed almost lke an office building, with desks and suited figures working behind them. It represented order and how it could not be broken.

Or so they thought.


After a few minutes of walking, he came across the first checkpoint.
Faceless soldiers, dressed in khaki camoflauge, and wearing black plastic visors, stood before him, and above them was a large steel structure, like the metal detectors found in airports..

As he approached, he sent a flurry of sparks from his hand into the wiring for the detector, frying the circuits, so that when he passed under the detector, the red light neither blared nor lit up, and the soldiers didn't raise the rifles clutched to their chests.

Sometimes having the power of Surt could be a blessing.

Supressing a sigh of relief, the man moved on.

Stage One complete.

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After another couple of checkpoints, the man took the elevator up to the 160th floor.

This area was made of squared off cubicles, except no one was working in them, only guards with their visors flickering words, wires from the computers feeding into the darkened plastics.

Passing them, the man walked into the only office door on the floor.

This was like a conference room. White walls, a long brown conference table with hard-backed black chairs neatly lined up alongside.

Reaching into the bag, the man took out his final object from the bag on his back.

A thick black square with a thin glass screen.

A timed bomb.

Putting the bomb down on the table, he pressed the red button on the end of the left side of the square.

15:00 flashed along the screen and began counting down.

The man was finished. He had to escape before the bomb went off, taking out the major support pillar just outside this office.

Stage Two complete.
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He was halfway to the elevator before the guard noticed him. His eyes lit up in recognition, and the man felt his chest heave.

The guard was clutching his rifle tighter, so the man beat him to it, pulling his pistol out and shooting the man point blank between the eyes. As his visor shattered, the man fell back, blood spurting from the hole the bullet had drilled in his head. He was dead before he hit the floor.

Then, everything erupted into chaos. Alarms were blaring, his world was flashing red.

Bullets began flying, and the man dived behind a table for cover, as smoke and the burst of gunfire filled his head.

Firing over the desk, he heard cries of pain and thuds as bodies hit the ground. The green carpet was soon slick with blood.


But after ten minutes, the man realised this wasn't getting him anywhere. The elevator was constantly delivering more men and women to their deaths, and it was only a matter of time before a bullet found its mark. Not to mention his ammo was running low.

It seemed he had no choice. He had to use his power.

Letting the power flow to his fingertips, his body filled with heat and power, and the old familiar feeling of fire in his stomach rose.

Breathing deeply, he stood up and left his cover, standing in the middle of the throng of men and women that surrounded him.

And unleashed the full force of Surt, god of the netherworld's fire.

The dazzling brilliance of the flames incinerated the unfortunate souls closest to him to ash, and the guards behind them were burnt to blackened husks. Those at the very back were thrown like rag dolls through the windows and walls by sheer power.

The carpet blazed and the walls were black.

The man was the only survivor of Surt's Inferno.

Apparently not, for now a burst of applause reached his ears.

Looking frantically around, he saw a tall woman standing before him. Long black hair flowed to her shoulder-blades, and she was accompanied by no less than twelve soldiers, armed with...

"Your bomb has been disabled, Surt. These guns are loaded with tranquilisers potent enough to bring down the gods. Now, you will come with us, and tell us everything you know."

The man raised his gun. Two bullets left.

No. she couldn't get the information. It was too precious.

The gun rose to his temple.

"Stop him!" yelled the woman.

But it as too late.
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The girl named Athena felt the moment the man died.

No emotion showed in her face as she lifted the radio to her mouth.
"Mission failed. Surt has been killed."

Sighing, she looked up at the still flawless House of Law, with the exception of a few windows.

"We need new recruits."

Post your opinions here if you want to share them. Thanks!
 
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Wow, I'm very impressed so far with this! It was quite intense reading this and I couldn't believe he died after almost completing the mission. So I wonder who these "new recruits" are going to be, eh? This is certainly intriguing to say the least. I think I'm going to keep a good eye out for this one!

Keep up the good work and I'll definitely be anticipating more. ;)
 
stashed it into his bag. - that sounds weird to me... :hmmm: I'm not sure why, but it does.

A slender, nine-millimeter pistol, which the man loaded with bullets before clicking the cartridge shut and flicking the safety off. - I think this is a fragment... It's got the subject and an action, but not an action that the subject is doing. I'm not sure.. this is just what I'm noticing :)

girlof - missed a space there :P

Next, all three figures removed a thin object from their bags.

The second and third members of the trio, a boy of fifteen and a girlof seventeen, removed their own guns and loaded them with bullets, the girl with swift, elegant movements, and the boy clumsily.
- They seem to be removing their guns twice, if I'm not mistaken :)

I like Athena :ryan: She sounds like a cold character, and those are always the best, tbh. Cold is good.

Lovely way to end the first bit, but now I want more! Write more, yes? :)
 
I can see what you meen about the stashed it into his bag thing.

The typo is there and the fragment, thanks for noticing.

And they did remove the guns twice.

Thank you. I'll fix them later. And thnaks Faith!
 
Part One: The Harvest

Chapter One: Ignorance

"The violence continued as the terrorist attack claimed more lives, only ending when the terrorist took his own life, ending his reign of terror which rocked the village and the House of Law, claiming at lkeast fifty lives."

Jamie Viash switched off the TV with a sigh. He couldn't afford to be wtaching TV right now. He had only half an hour left before school; it was half-past eight.

Leaving his breakfast of toast half eaten, he swiftly darted up to his room, grabbing the clothes over the bed and moving into the bathroom.

There. he changed out of the white t-shirt, ratty jeans and white socks into the unpleasant school uniform of Halis Community College: a thick, bottle green jumper, white buttoned shirt, grey polyester trousers and black socks and shoes.

Looking into the mirror as he put the thick green and yellow tie that completed his uniform, he appraised himself in the full mirror.

Ugh, he thought as he saw himself. He looked like a greenfly. That jumper was far too big. And the trousers looked like hairy legs.

At the age of seventeen, with his exams coming up in nine months, Jamie's height was only one of many worries. He was only five foot four or five, which meant that he was below the height of all guys and most girls in his class.

Still, nothing he could do about it now. His height was one of those things he just couldn't change about himself. Pity, but reality.

He looked away from the mirror as he ran a brush through his thick, brown hair.

There were plenty of good qualities. There was his slender form, which, if not the most athletic, was still good enough. and he'd never experienced any acne, which was even better.

Puberty hadn't passed him by totally either, because he had a pretty deep voice, not to mention the tan that stayed over the summer. Light, but pretty attractive, he liked to think.

He looked at the time and cringed. Quarter to nine? While he was mulling over his pros, time was moving on without him!

Running downstairs, he grabbed his schoolbag and walked briskly out of the door, closing it behind him and locking it before moving at a speed that surprised him.

"Slow down, kid. I'm not that fast."

Jamie turned around and smiled.

A tall, broad-shouldered girl sat on the grey wall, her feet skimming the ground. She was incredibly tall at five foot eleven inches, with extremely dark skin, and an average, though powerful build. Her black hair was cropped close to her head, and she wore a skirt in favour of the trousers most students preferred, along with grey tights.

As Jamie regarded his girlfriend, Kari swung herself gracefully down from the wall and kissed him on the lips, detaching herself after a few moments.

"Alright?" she asked with a pleasant smile, showing her white teeth gleaming in the weak sun.

"Tired," moaned Jamie.

"Egh," shrugged Kari. Jamie smiled softly.

As the two walked in silence, Kari tried to break Jamie's early morning blues.

"Come on Jamie, cheer up. If you don't, you might get stress realted diseases, like hurt disease, diabutus and migrainus!"

Jamie chuckled at this interpretation of Ms Churst, their Home Economics teacher, who couldn't pronounce her E's, and the two moved with a new cheerfulness all the way to school.

Sorry for the short chapter. Basically, my library session ran out and it was submit or lose the lot (due to a lack of copy and paste..) The next few chapters will be introduction chapters, introducing the main characters and setting the scene for the story.

Also, keep an eye on the main characters' names and surnames.m They're anagrams or alterations of the gods they'll represent.

 
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