Now look at what you've done

it's actually a satire of said lower-class people.

however since ypu spelt derogatory 'dergatory', i think you are in no position to criticise.

And the grammar is fine, you may find the diction questionable, however changing that would rather defeat the purpose.
 
Pooley said:
I just forgot how to spell derogatory. I tend to be one of the better spellers. :monster:

;D
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*sighs*
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/diction
also when you talk about diction in a poetical sense, it means what words you choose to use. In this case, 'learn' instead of 'teach'

However your spelling does tend to be better than most.
Also you didn't forget, you said you couldn't spell it:neomon:.
That is neither here nor there however:wacky:
 
Sgt Pepper said:
*sighs*
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/diction
also when you talk about diction in a poetical sense, it means what words you choose to use. In this case, 'learn' instead of 'teach'

However your spelling does tend to be better than most.
Also you didn't forget, you said you couldn't spell it:neomon:.
That is neither here nor there however:wacky:
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You sir, have just earned one whole respect point. :neomon:
 
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