Meh first amv.
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This was a good video.
There was a decent amount of clips added in there, though at the beginning it felt too slow with Axel talking for ages within the same scene.
This song needed to be a bit more action packed and a bit more alive. Jumping from scene to scene a little sooner than it was already.
I would focus using more of the action packed scenes when the song gets a bit faster and then focus on using the slower clips when it gets slower. So that it relates to the song and lyrics a bit better.
No doubt this is a great first video and you did really well with the clips you had and the timing between clips was good, but there is always room for improvement. =)
This really should be in Luca - Miscellaneous with the other videos. XD
There was a decent amount of clips added in there, though at the beginning it felt too slow with Axel talking for ages within the same scene.
This song needed to be a bit more action packed and a bit more alive. Jumping from scene to scene a little sooner than it was already.
I would focus using more of the action packed scenes when the song gets a bit faster and then focus on using the slower clips when it gets slower. So that it relates to the song and lyrics a bit better.
No doubt this is a great first video and you did really well with the clips you had and the timing between clips was good, but there is always room for improvement. =)
This really should be in Luca - Miscellaneous with the other videos. XD
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HighwindPilot
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I like the concept of the video.
My only real "critique" of it is that some of the shots last too long, or they're too draggy. I took video production for about 3 semesters in HS, and one of the biggest things we were stressed on to keep a video interesting - was to make sure the individual clips don't last too long. In doing so, we attempted to make the video feel like a kind of perspective of events, as oppose to (the way my teacher worded it) "putting a subject in front of a camera". It doesn't have to take away from the story that's being told, but it's simply to chop the clips up and mix them more.
Other than that, it was a cool video. I really liked the concept. And I liked how you were able to match his gestures and expressions with particular things said in the song.
My only real "critique" of it is that some of the shots last too long, or they're too draggy. I took video production for about 3 semesters in HS, and one of the biggest things we were stressed on to keep a video interesting - was to make sure the individual clips don't last too long. In doing so, we attempted to make the video feel like a kind of perspective of events, as oppose to (the way my teacher worded it) "putting a subject in front of a camera". It doesn't have to take away from the story that's being told, but it's simply to chop the clips up and mix them more.
Other than that, it was a cool video. I really liked the concept. And I liked how you were able to match his gestures and expressions with particular things said in the song.
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Thanx for the help, i figured something was going to be said about the beginning... but yeah... 1st attempt was good i think. But im supposed to be making Sean (KoD) a Roxas amv, but i need to find a better movie maker.... and hopefully this upcoming will be much much better.
