Poetry I like to write poetry

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All of the people I've talk to across the forums thinks i am some kind of psychopath that enjoys talking boats, bran muffins, sheep, and transformers, but i actually like to write poetry, and here is one of said poems


Feeling lonely, and ever so dark
Always thought the chances of seeing you were stark
Until that one day we finally met
Now all i had to worry about in life was death
Until a bullet to my back ended the life
And all i remember was my last sight
You were crying, and i was aching
I had left you my heart for the taking
And now as I'm gone, i wanted you to know
I will always be with you, it will show

now comment or whatever and left me know what you think

 

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i think i put this thread in the wrong place, can a mod move it to the right place for me?

 

[Fabletear]

That was good!!! You write poems better than I can in my opinion.

 

[Weapon XIV]

That was good!!! You write poems better than I can in my opinion.

i have about a thousand, just looking to see if everybody likes them enough so i can actually focus on them, im not just somebody looking to rule the world with sheep and bran muffins, inside lies the heart of a poet, and an assassin, and a dinosaur

 

[Amizon]

- Moved to Original Works -

 

[Exoskeleton]

Hey! we're in the same boat! I'm a psychopath too who writes stories, poetry, songs etc. Awesome!

 

[Weapon XIV]

Hey! we're in the same boat! I'm a psychopath too who writes stories, poetry, songs etc. Awesome!

Im not alone in this unintentionally cruel world!! now i will write more, and have some up soon.