Original [discussion]Memories of the Forbidden

[Captain Squee]

Discuss my story here

Link is here

As I said in that thread, I am a bit rust right now, so please bare with me here. I need to oil up now

 

[Exoskeleton]

Interesting first chapter...

 

[Captain Squee]

It will start rather slow, It will simply be introducing personalities

 

[Æon Flux]

I like it thus far! Keep going you get better as you go on with Lloyed~his story is flawless thus far... Darens' is a Bit rusty though But good all in all!

 

[Aerius Sygale]

An interesting read, though brief it may be, good job on it. I look forward to reading the chapters to come. I wonder how many there will be, guess probably you may not even be sure yet, depends on what comes up, you know.

And personality...huh...I've never had much of that, I need to work on being more likable. Everybody is different, I just happen to be somebody that could use some change, I'm a bit uptight and take things too seriously. That shows in that Eureka Academy RP sign up/discussion thread when FireFrenzy gets up to something. >_>'

 

[Captain Squee]

Another vert short chappy, but next chapter it gets real fun

 

[Æon Flux]

Ok I love it!!!!!!
~waits for next chapter happily

 

[Captain Squee]

Should I continue this?

If I do, it'll have to wait either way, but...well you know, I'll try