Poetry despair and agony

[Sexy Beast]

Let the darkness takeover
Thre is no one who can save us
We live in a world of pain, suffering, and agony
The only justice we know is our mind
With that we will take things into our own hands
There will be no justice, nothing from right or wrong just the point of pure survival
There cant be no savor, there can’t be any enemies just us living the way we want to
The only path we can take is the one we make ourselves
Make a path, then make the roads we choose then choose a road and don’t look back

 

[Valkyrur]

Another poem, i see.
There's one spelling error, savor should be saviour, right?

Whats this one about? I'm sorry i'm not very good when it comes to Literature.

 

[The Messenger]

It sounds like in your poem that we live in a dog eat dog world. Survival of the fittest. Only strong survive. Am I close? Also that it is inevitable for this to be avoided.

 

[Valkyrur]

Seems like something about a dark past too.
"Make a path, then make the roads we choose then choose a road and don’t look back"

 

[The Messenger]

This one may have a relation to the previous one too. I wonder if it is........

*starts to compare the two*

 

[Sexy Beast]

wow tm you are a ood thinkerto these kind of things.

 

[The Messenger]

When I read poems, I read beyond just what it says. I think about what is going through the person's head when they write this poem.

So was I close or right?

 

[Sexy Beast]

yes you are correct im very impressed nhow you take my poems seriously and show great interest into it.

 

[The Messenger]

I have fond, unique, interest in poems. They have more TRUE emotion in the words in it. I am able to recognize it much easier on a poem. Besides, I can picture what could be the scene, if the poem were to be animated. That is why I like them so much.

 

[Sexy Beast]

well i am not an animator. sadly so all i can do is post them and see what other people think of them.

 

[The Messenger]

You are one. When you write a poem, you are making an animation with words. Your emotions and what you want to be seen in your poetry is shown in a mental animation.

 

[Sexy Beast]

oh, well what kind of animation were you talking about??

 

[The Messenger]

I am talking about the animation you get from reading something.

When you read a book, do you ever picture, in your head what is going on? That is what I do. I did that exact thing with your poem, which was how I was able to figure it out.

 

[Sexy Beast]

wow now thats really impressive. like i it once before and i will say it again you have a gift for getting the mental picture otten format.