Defend Kameran-Disc

Kibbies

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Alright, the thread is started in the ORPG section. If you wish to participate, be either one of the freelancers, or a soldier from somewhere else. If you wish to be something different, go ahead and ask and I'll flip a coin then choose to consider it.

I'll allow probably three or four others, so sign-up with haste. It must be approved for me though since I have an idea where this will all lead, and certain characters will not be allowed: those who are extremely powerful, and those that would hurt the story.

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Currently:
Kibbies ::: Darian and Farius
Shenorai ::: Shenorai
The Legendary Wullfe ::: Wullfe
Julius Argexis ::: Julius
Drachnon ::: Elsa
 
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Thanks much for the vote of confidence Shen! I look forward to participating, granted I'm accepted. Slightly off topic, I've posted in Seclusion! Yes! Lol. Let me know after you respond, so I can continue.
 
Just from your usual tone that I've noticed, I can tell that you know how to write. I will accept likely any character you wish to use, since I believe you have good discernment of how to keep a good balance in the RP. Let me know which of your characters you wish to use (not sure how many you have), and I'll let you post after I do mine.

I am babysitting right now though, so I'll have to wait to post and add you to our list on the first post.
 
I'm always game but seeing as i dont know what angle the story will take i dont really know which character to use... so some info would be helpfull, Also drachnon micht want to join if theres still slots open... (we have a pair of characters we'd like to try teaming up...)
 
Alright, Wullfe, Julius, you are permitted to enter upon your own will.

I'll allow one or even possible, two more characters. Firefrenzy, you and your buddy may be able to enter, but I need to know which characters you are using, and then I will probably accept.
 
Alrighty after reading the story I decided that Elsa would probably fit best. I used her in an RP that died shortly before the RPG section was reformed (the kingdom of fate RP).
She originally had almost no history (because a normal 9 year old girl would have very little history worth mentioning) but I'll use material from IC posts to create one for her.
Also I've edited her abilities a little since I posted her for the kingdom of fate RP.

Name: Elsa “the blessed” Windfall<o:p></o:p>
Gender: Female<o:p></o:p>
Race: Human<o:p></o:p>
Class: Celestial
Age: 9
Weapons: Bow of the Heavens, Sword of truth.
Height: 1 meter
Weight: 45 kilos
Armor: None<o:p></o:p>
Magic: Prayer magic (“spells” listed below)<o:p></o:p>
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Blond

Appearance:<o:p></o:p>
A young girl with blond hair, she wears a dress that reaches too her knees. The dress looks like it was white at some point however it’s already quite worn down and now has a colour closer too grey.<o:p></o:p>

History: (old)
Elsa is an orphan taken in by her uncle and aunt at a young age, because she has a weak body she is pretty useless however when the angel Alindria comes to her she’s entrusted to guide humanity through the dark times ahead of them.<o:p></o:p>
(Alindria’s bio is not included as she plays no role besides that of a mentor to Elsa)

History: (new)
Alindria flew through the infinite realms of time and space. She didn't really have anything to do at the moment since it had been rather silent in the realms of the gods lately. However that was soon was to change.
As Alindria reached her destination she could feel the presence of her goddess, Aditu.

Alindria approached her and with her telepathic voice she asked:
"You summoned me, my goddess?"
Aditu replied:
"Yes I have my child. It seems that there are some problems on a nearby world. It is my wish you go forth and shine your light over it’s people so they may find guidance in the dark times ahead of them."
Alindria:
"As you wish, my goddess."
Aditu:
"However I can't bring you there myself or create a body for you to manifest yourself in."
Alindria was surprised and asked:
"You want me to use my current form? I thought you disapproved using this form near mortals, goddess?"
Aditu:
"I know, therefore you need to find a mortal with a soul as pure as your own. You can then share that body if the mortal is willing too. Once you've been in that body for long enough you should be able to create a body of your own."
Alindria didn't like the idea of sharing a body even though it wasn't her own. Still since her goddess had requested it she had to do it.
Alindria:
"I will do my best goddess."
Aditu spoke a blessing over Alindria:
"May the light be with you my daughter."

Alindria left her goddess and headed towards the world who's location was given to her through telepathic contact. It didn't take Alindria long to arrive at her destination. Now she just had to find someone with a soul as pure as hers. She started looking through all fighters with strong body's in the hope of finding a body that would be most useful in her task. But soon she realised that no adult was pure enough to contain her soul.
In the end Alindria went to a church build in the name of Aditu and searched through the souls of those there.
With the exception of two infants there was only 1 person in the church that was suitable.
It was a little girl sitting on a bench in the back of the church. After inspecting the girl for a while Alindria decided that even though she was young and had a very weak body that it was the only option. Alindria merged her soul with the girls body without the girl noticing it. Then she started to reach into the girls memory’s. After a while she found out that the girl had lost her own parents and was now living with relatives in this village.
This would make things easier since Alindria would have to persuade the girl to leave this town soon.

Alindria didn’t speak to the girl but waited until the girl returned home and went to sleep. Now that she slept Alindria could talk to the girls through the girls dreams.

Alindria entered the girls dream and looked around her. She was standing in a field of flowers, in front of her was a single tree placed on top of a small hill. Alindria could see the self-image of the girl sitting beneath the tree. The sun was right above the tree casting a shadow over the girl. Still it wasn’t warm or anything so it seemed like the girl choose to sit in the shadows for a different reason.
Alindria walked to her and the girl looked at Alindria with questioning eyes.
Alindria spoke with her voice that sounded like a beautiful melody:
“Hello there child, may I sit down?”
The girl looked at Alindria for a while and finally said:
“Yes.”
It was not much more of a whisper and the girl sounded a little uncertain. But Alindria knew she had to earn the girls trust. So she sat down and looked around and the scenery and asked:
“This is a beautiful place, what do you call it?”
The girl looked around but because the little girl wasn’t aware that she was in her own dreams she could tell the name of it so she just kept quite and stared at Alindria for a while.
Alindria didn’t ask anything else but just sat with her back against the tree waiting for the girl to continue the conversation.

After a few minutes the girl asked:
“Who are you lady?”
Alindria looked at the little girls face and with a smile she said:
“I’m called Alindria.” Alindria spoke her own name in the native language of the first worshippers of Aditu, since her name was based on the language of that race.
The girl tried to speak the name but the since she wasn’t used to making the sounds it didn’t came out very well.
The girl saw Alindria watch as she tried to speak her name and fell silent embarrassed by the fact she couldn’t speak the angels name.
Alindria spoke:
“It’s okay. Can you tell me your name?”
The girls soft voice spoke:
“Elsa.”
Alindria repeated the name:
“Elsa….. That’s a beautiful name.”
Elsa’s pulled up her knees and hid her red face because she was embarrassed by the compliment. Alindria waited until the girl pulled herself together and then asked:
“Can I ask you a favour?”
Elsa looked at Alindria with an open mouth, incapable of understanding what the beautiful and strong looking Alindria could possibly expect from a little girl like herself.
Alindria continued:
“I need you to bring me somewhere. Can you that?”
Elsa looked around and said:
“But I don’t even know where I am. I could never help someone like you.”
Alindria:
“Yes you can Elsa. You are the only one who can help me right now. Besides I think you are the only one that knows what this place is.”
Elsa:
“What do you mean?”
Alindria:
“This place exists inside your dreams, therefore you are the only one who knows it’s name.”
Elsa:
“This isn’t real? How about you?”
Alindria smiled and said:
“I’m real. Don’t worry about that little Elsa. If you accept to help I will join my soul with yours and you’ll know that I’m real first thing when you wake up.”

Elsa looked at Alindria for a moment and finally became aware of something. She slowly opened her mouth and asked:
“You aren’t a human?”
Her voice seemed to have a little trace of fear in it. Which was normal as all humans feared things they didn’t understand.
Alindria replied:
“I’m indeed not human. I’m what your race calls angel. I was send here by Aditu.”
Elsa recognized the name of the goddess she worshipped. For a while she seemed uncertain about Alindria but then decided that Alindria was indeed who she claimed to be.
Elsa wasn’t the most religious follower so she still hesitated before she spoke:
“If I help you will I still be myself?”
Alindria smiled and said:
“Don’t worry I won’t harm your body, nor your mind or soul. And once you’ve completed your task I will return to the heavens.”
Elsa said:
“Okay then I’ll help you as much as I can.”
Alindria smiled and said:
“Thank you Elsa. Thank you very much.”
Then Alindria turned into light and merged her soul with that of Elsa.

The next thing Elsa knows is waking up in her bed at her uncles home. She remembers the dream and for a moment thinks it was not more then that. But then she realises something was different.
Elsa placed her hand on her chest and closed her eyes. She could feel her heart beat in her throat but she could feel a second heart beating in sync with her own. She concentrated and felt a warm presence inside of her. Elsa tried to grasp what it felt like, it seemed to be a mixture of love, happiness and trust. Elsa remembered that is what quite similar to the feeling she had when her mother used too hold her when her mother was still alive.
Normally Elsa cried when she thought about her mother and the memory’s they used to share but the warmth inside of her seemed to comfort her, knowing that tomorrow would be the first day of her union with the angel that had appeared in her dreams Elsa laid her head on her pillow and as she went to sleep she spoke:
“Alindria…….”

After this meeting Elsa started learning how to use her powers from Alindria but before she could finish her teachings the need to go to the city of Kameran arose and Elsa set off.<!-- google_ad_section_end -->

Weapons:<o:p></o:p>
Bow of the heavens:<o:p></o:p>
This bow needs no string or arrows when Elsa makes the movement of firing an arrow a string and arrow made out of light magically appear and after fired the string disappears.<o:p></o:p>
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Sword of truth:<o:p></o:p>
The sword of truth is a gift from Alindria to Elsa, however it has no physical form and instead is part of Elsa’s soul. Whenever Elsa holds and suitable object the power of the sword is transferred into it and the object will be the ‘sword’ as long as Elsa holds it. However this doesn’t mean that the object needs to be a sword itself. Even things like a tree branch can be the sword of truth.<o:p></o:p>
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While an object becomes the sword of truth it looks normal for those without supernatural senses. Those who have a weak sixth sense will see a white glow coming from the object while those who have a powerful sixth sense will see the silhouette of a sword surrounding the object.<o:p></o:p>
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The sword of truth has several abilities, for once it becomes very strong and can be used to block attacks, even from people who have overwhelming physical strength, with ease. Also anyone touching the sword cannot speak lies nor can he knowingly hide the truth, this works on Elsa as well however this hardly makes a difference in her case. (if his mind is somehow erased he obviously can’t tell even while he desires so, and this doesn’t let people know things they don’t know.)<o:p></o:p>
Last of the sword of truths abilities is the ability to shine an aura of power that revitalizes those with a pure heart.<o:p></o:p>
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Abilities:<o:p></o:p>
Child:<o:p></o:p>
Elsa is very young and therefore she isn’t capable of things that adults are capable off. She will need help with various things. However at the same time people are more quickly to sympathize with her then they would with an adult.<o:p></o:p>
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Aura of redemption:<o:p></o:p>
Elsa is constantly by a an aura that inspires the hearts of people to do right and seek forgiveness for anything they have done wrong in their live. Except for those who’s hearts have been totally been consumed by darkness will be affected. Depending on their sins people might completely devote the remainder of their lives in helping others or devote their lives in helping Elsa so many more may find the same ‘gift’ of harmony they have gotten.<o:p></o:p>
The effects of the aura will never fade (on it's own some spells may remove the effects of the aura) however someone needs to be around Elsa for a prolonged period of time (several hours at least) before it takes effect.<o:p></o:p>
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Holy blessing:<o:p></o:p>
Thanks to Alindria Elsa is considered to be blessed, because of this she is more fortunate then before and offers some protection against evil powers and creatures, such as daemons and devils. Attacks from said creatures will only inflict half the damage they would normally do.<o:p></o:p>
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As a second power the blessing acts as a passive form of turn undead. Weaker undead creatures like zombies and skeletons can’t get close to Elsa. Strong undead (vampires, liches and the like) still can still approach her but will be reluctant too.<o:p></o:p>
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Foresight:
Elsa has a passive ability that lets her know when danger is coming.

Favoured:
Because of her divine relation Elsa has a natural affinity with holy beasts such as Unicorns, Giant Eagles, Giffins and various forms of Fey. Many such creatures will assist Elsa if needed.
Most specifically a unicorn called Moonhorn of the silver manned Unicorns brings Elsa to wherever she needs to be. Though he will not come to close to human cities, nor will he actively assist in battle.
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Magic:
Create food and water:
Elsa can use her magic to create a small amount of food and water. The amount she can create is rather small and only enough for about two people (adults) and the spell can't be cast more then 6 times a day.

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Cure light wounds:<o:p></o:p>
Elsa can cast this spell several times a day and it’s capable of healing most small injuries. It doesn’t cure poisons, curses and other magical effects.<o:p></o:p>
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Cure serious wounds:<o:p></o:p>
The spell is a more powerful variant of Cure light wounds however Elsa can only cast it a few times a day.<o:p></o:p>
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Cure poison:<o:p></o:p>
Twice a day Elsa can remove any form of poison from anybody’s system.<o:p></o:p>
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Calm emotions:<o:p></o:p>
When casting Elsa utters a single divine word which can calm the emotions of animals and people alike. This is powerful enough to stop a raging bull in a single second.

test
 
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I like it too. It is a great idea that I haven't much considered, and I am impressed.

For this ORPG, I do ask that you change the aura to something lesser that doesn't protect you against demons. It can protect in some form, but total protection or rebuking of demons would be an unfair advantage for this campaign. Also, keep foresight to a short time. Nothing over three seconds would be best.

If you'd like to play a 9 year old, go ahead. Otherwise, you could make it so that you have your new body, but your new body is a mortal one. I am fine either way.

Great work, you're in.
 
Okay I've edited the holy blessing so it only halves damage (need to find a better wording for it).

As for the rebuke undead considering that demons aren't undead the ability never affected them anyways.
The foresight won't warn her for hours away though the time she gets may depend on the nature of the danger. A giant horde of daemons comming at her will give a warning faster then a assasin with a knife.
 
Sorry, I normally put my own feelings through my RP. Look at it as a way to express without fearing the fact of being insulted, or watching people laughing because of what I say.

Life is a RP, live it, enjoy it....
 
Sorry, I normally put my own feelings through my RP. Look at it as a way to express without fearing the fact of being insulted, or watching people laughing because of what I say.

Life is a RP, live it, enjoy it....

Well said, that's why all of my characters have swords! Wait... I have swords, too. Hmm... I guess I roleplay, because there are alot of aspects of myself that don't get to be expressed, but I don't want to lose track of either. Most of my favorite characters start as a single point or feeling in my life, and are then given details (and shiney powers!) of their own to fill in the blanks. From there, I let their story and personality build up on it's own as events play out in game.

For example, Lethryn stems from the convoluted, optimistic, awkward, emotional, chivilrous warm spot that tied a knot in my gut when I was at that age. I don't ever want to forget that torturous, wonderful sensation, so I keep a character to embody it alive whenever possible.

But, I really have no reason to be spamming up this thread (given that I'm not even apart of the RP). I have finals punching me in the jaw as it is. Have fun, doods! ^_^
 
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