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[Birthweek] FFF GFX Tournament 2010 - Round 1 - Match 3
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1) Crowded... I like how the glass effect is put in there, and the use of colours, but I think it's too crowded. 
Not sure about the text... I think Rikki could've used a little blending, but that's just my opinion.
2) I like the swirls and how Yuna is meshed in to the background, but it just looks a bit messy... It looks like the outlines were just erased making her look a bit ghost like. Floating on the signature. The overall picture fills the sig up nicely though, so no use of text was a nice idea.
#1 gets my vote.
Not sure about the text... I think Rikki could've used a little blending, but that's just my opinion.2) I like the swirls and how Yuna is meshed in to the background, but it just looks a bit messy... It looks like the outlines were just erased making her look a bit ghost like. Floating on the signature.
The overall picture fills the sig up nicely though, so no use of text was a nice idea.#1 gets my vote.
1. Bokeh. I love Bokeh. But it's a bit distracting from the render, which could've used just a bit more blending. And the text is just lost in the background. I think either the bokeh or the glass effect would have worked on their own, tbh.
2. I'm not quite sure what it is I'm supposed to be looking at. I'm pretty sure I should focus on Yuna, but I can't stop looking at the background. And since yuna should be the focal point of the piece, the background should really just complement the focal and bring her out, instead of competing for attention with her.
It's a bit hard to choose, as graye said: they both need some work. But I'll go with 1. At least i was pretty sure what the focal of that piece was.
2. I'm not quite sure what it is I'm supposed to be looking at. I'm pretty sure I should focus on Yuna, but I can't stop looking at the background. And since yuna should be the focal point of the piece, the background should really just complement the focal and bring her out, instead of competing for attention with her.
It's a bit hard to choose, as graye said: they both need some work. But I'll go with 1. At least i was pretty sure what the focal of that piece was.
Jess goes through to the next round
1) Tatheria
2) Archer
1) Tatheria
2) Archer
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