Poetry A Poem for a gone friend

Jimmy D

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He's gone up to the place in the sky,
Where everyday feel like a high,
Where peace and harmony reign,
Where the sun is bright everday,

He's gone up to the place in the sky,
Where everyday is like a breeze,
Where there are no pains,
Where thier are only gains,

He's gone from the earth below,
Where life was a struggle,
Where all he wanted was a cuddle,
Where everyday was a muddle,

I wish you were here right now,
Tell me which path to turn and how,
Show me your car, your peoms, but now,
Your gone to the place in the sky,

I wont cry dont worry bro,
Because one day I will go,
Join you in the place in the sky,
Where each day feels like a high

This Poem is dedicated to Ali (Owen Macwere)

R.I.P. Owen Macwere, I miss you man. I'll love you no matter what happens my brother.
 
Aww, that was a really heartfelt poem. you really manage to convey a lot of emotion without using "sad" words, if that makes sense?
 
Thats great James. Owen would have been happy and proud to call you his friend. He will be missed and its a shock that hes no longer with us.
 
That was really good. Simple yet held a lot of emotion in how you portrayed it. I'm sure he appreciates the dedication...
 
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