Poetry A Poem for a gone friend

[Jimmy D]

He's gone up to the place in the sky,
Where everyday feel like a high,
Where peace and harmony reign,
Where the sun is bright everday,

He's gone up to the place in the sky,
Where everyday is like a breeze,
Where there are no pains,
Where thier are only gains,

He's gone from the earth below,
Where life was a struggle,
Where all he wanted was a cuddle,
Where everyday was a muddle,

I wish you were here right now,
Tell me which path to turn and how,
Show me your car, your peoms, but now,
Your gone to the place in the sky,

I wont cry dont worry bro,
Because one day I will go,
Join you in the place in the sky,
Where each day feels like a high

This Poem is dedicated to Ali (Owen Macwere)

R.I.P. Owen Macwere, I miss you man. I'll love you no matter what happens my brother.

 

[Daenerys]

Aww, that was a really heartfelt poem. you really manage to convey a lot of emotion without using "sad" words, if that makes sense?

 

[Mastergib314]

Did You Write That?

if so thats really good. i know what its like. my best friend died in januaury of this year

 

[The Guv'na]

It's a magnificent poem. This poem could only have come from a person devastated by the tragic loss of a loved one.

 

[SapphireStar]

Thats great James. Owen would have been happy and proud to call you his friend. He will be missed and its a shock that hes no longer with us.

 

[Mitsuki]

That was really good. Simple yet held a lot of emotion in how you portrayed it. I'm sure he appreciates the dedication...