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In the bitter frost of war, there lies Hope.
The dream of complete congregation,
The gathering of the people,
Rejoice in alliance and family.
But that is just a child’s fairytale.

The quake of ground,
The roar of sea,
The echo of forever fighting,
The screaming eternal sound,
This is the truth.

The Shiver Corporation move ever forward,
Their terror experiments growing malicious,
Hunting for typical human beings,
Scientific research turning wicked,
They want to create a super human life.

The Hope of discovering magic is growing,
One step closer, day by day.
People die in the process,
They fall one by one,
But their intentions falter.

Intent on preventing further damage,
Their lies a resistance,
Each bearing a reason to fight,
Their memories a distant illusion,
The Prism Force revisits a dead Hope.

Since they were discovered,
Attempting to dismay the Hope Government,
The Shiver Corporation acted.
The Prism Force were locked away,
Deep in a shady dungeon,

The Force escaped the dungeon,
Only to be caught and stopped,
Their memories were erased,
And they were set free.
They returned to the world.

Forgetting who they are,
Their families,
Their friends, each other,
The Force broke down,
The Shiver Corporation grew stronger.

After eight years of jigsaw,
Regaining some memory,
The Force is standing to fight.
To stop the experiments,
And return hope to Hope.


The Prism Force

A damaged insurgence militia whom wish to halt the Shiver Corporation's ferocious scientific experiments on innocent human beings, lead by Rain and four other accomplices, the Force attempt to piece together more of the memories and see whether there is more to the science tests.

The Shiver Corporation

A forever rising scientific corporation in conjunction with the Hope Government that conduct experiments on people to see whether super human beings can be created. Since magic was only recently discovered, the Shiver attempt to include magic with their creations.

Hope Government

The agency that runs all of Hope, they freely allow the Shiver to conduct their tests on their people and dismiss the attempts of Force taking necessary action. The leader of the Government is attracted to the idea of having super human beings, but the other members of the council strongly disagree.​


Members of Force

Rain

Using his codename, Rain, Adam Phodusk is determined to have Shiver put to an end and for the Government to realise what they are doing. Adam is the leader of a resistance militia known as Prism Force with his cohorts and helps his team gather pieces of the jigsaw that is the memory.

Swift

Going by her codename, Swift, Laura Rohta follows Adam. Laura discovered deep in her memory that her and Adam were once lovers, but decided not to inform Adam. She is sworn to help Force stop Shiver and to save the people of Hope.

Ruby

Following her codename, Ruby, Alana Nerall, works for Force. Every single day, she struggles to cope without her memory, and since piecing together that her entire family were used for experiments by Shiver, she decided to rejoin Force again after leaving many times.

Phase

Abiding his codename, Phase, Alexander Morgahn tries to lead a normal life. His dark past slowly creeps back up on him as his memory returns, but he decides to forget the past and move on with Force. Uncertain about his family, his children and wife, Alexander wants to fight.

Mist

Leading his codename, Mist, Jonathan Batod wants to be free and destroy Shiver. Jonathan misses his old life, and tries to piece his memory and fight against Shiver. Jonathan never had a family before he lost his memory, and now he only imagine that he does and tries to find them.

 
Chapter One: Forgotten Memory

Tuesday. I can hardly remember when it was this cold, everywhere seems so empty. I can’t remember anything, who am I? Where am I? It’s snowing, there’s ice...is it winter? I look to my left and see a girl, we’re both the same. We have no memory. None. She doesn’t even know her name, we can’t think of anything to talk about. The room is freezing, the walls are turning to ice, and she turns to me. She looks sad, she can’t remember anything.

“What shall we call each other?”

I wasn’t quite sure what to say, it was the first time she’d spoke. I’d done all the talking before, I talked myself speechless. I looked at her, she was beautiful she had shoulder length straw coloured hair and the glossiest green eyes. Even though we’ve only just met, it felt like I had known her for years. She waited for my reply, I shrugged.

“I’m not sure, we’ll think of something.” I said, rubbing my hands together for warmth.

“I’ve had some thoughts, what about codenames?” The lady asked me.

“Sure, why not. Call me Rain.” I replied.

“Swift.” She answered, with a shattered smile.

We sat for hours, talking about nothing. She spoke about the Government and I went on about food. We realised we had much in common, and Swift decided that we should leave the house. I wasn’t ready for that, we’d only just woke up. I can’t even remember the name of the house we’re in, or where we are. Swift seemed to know some information. She told me we’re in Pelesium, a city built for one purpose – trading. The trading city of Pelesium was grand, it was white and blue, filled with happy and not so happy faces, but it was now our home.

“We have to leave here one day, you know?” Swift said to me.

“I know, it’s just taking me to a while to adjust." I replied honestly.

“When you’re ready.”

I thanked Swift for her patience, I thought that she was going to be difficult and hard to get on with, but she’s easy. She’s kind and caring, and I keep thinking I’ve met her before. Do we already know each other? Or not. I looked at Swift, we had no idea what our names were and her idea of codenames was quick and...well, it was swift thinking. She looked at me, her straw coloured hair covering one eye, and she smiled.

“I’m ready.”

“Really? That was quick.”

“Let’s go.”

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Chapter Two: They Come in Two

We didn't spend long gathering the necessary equipment needed to head out, Swift had told me that she could remember some parts of the town, the streets, the alleys and the best places to be. Although, she was lucky, I couldn't remember anything and had no distant memory of this place."You're sure you want to go?"Swift asked.

"Of course." I replied, although I wasn't quite sure.

Swift smiled and me and packed some food into her backpack. She put it on her shoulder and took my arm, dragging me out of the room. She was quick down the stairs and I was soon to follow. She turned round as she reached the bottom, looking up at me. She knew something was wrong.

"You're not, are you?" Swift pressured.

"I am, if I wasn't, I'd tell you." I reassured her.

"I'm not quite sure who you are, Rain."
Swift joked.

Swift laughed her joke off and walk outside the house where we'd woke up. We've not known each other long, but again, I still feel as if I've met her before. She turned around and pulled me out the door, the sun was bright and almost blinded my eyes. Swift pushed my hand away from covering my eyes and she took a deep breathe.

"Can you smell it?" Swift asked, breathing in and out.

"I'm not sure." I replied honestly.

"The stench of Pelesium, how can you not smell it?"
Swift laughed.

"You've been here before, Swift, haven't you?" I asked.

"I - I don't know, I can't remember."
Swift replied, looking down.

I knew she had, maybe she couldn't remember fully. I reminded her of what she told me about how she could imagine herself here as a child and that she thinks that she was born here. I reminded her also that she could smell the stench of the town, whereas I couldn't. Only a frequent visitor would recognise the smell that much.

"I think so. Maybe, have you?" Swift asked, looking towards me.

"I can't remember, we'll have to see." I answered.

"So, where do you fancy going?"
Swift said, wanting a quick answer.

"I'll follow you."I butted in, rather fast.

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Seeing as you said this is a story story and the RP section is for Roleplays. I've shifted this for you. =]

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