Poetry This Is Just To Say

Amizon

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So we had a little poetry exercise tonight, which was both profound and amusing, considering that we came out with such interesting results. Basically, we took the poem called This Is Just To Say by William Carlos Williams and rearranged some of the words.

If you want to see the original version of the poem, then look no further than here. It's my first poem I've posted on the site, so I don't know what to think, really! On the other hand, comments are greatly appreciated.



This Is Just To Say

I have extracted
the people
that were in
the imagination

and which
you were probably
shoving
for binning

Forgive me
they were disgusting
so sickly
and so smelly
 
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