The Lost Orphan versus The Cursed Swordsman

As the black dragon disappeared Darkova leapt forward and slammed into the ground directly in front of Haze, he then sprayed acid directly at Haze as his fangs grew closer to Haze, attempting to bite while Haze was slowed down. The ground nearby could be heard rumbling, followed by some snow falling from large hills and forming a huge wall as it descended, it wasn't large enough to completely crush Darkova, but it could easily cover him. Luckily he was designed for such harsh environments so all he had to do was await the inevitable, he could devour Haze afterwards.
 
Haze roared as he ran forwards and jumped, grabbing the hilt of his blade. He placed his feet firmly on the things chest and pulled, but his blade did not move. Groaning in anguish, he took out his gun and shot several times at the beast, aiming his shots closely to his blade so that if they impacted, it would be looser. If the technique succeeded, Haze would successfully pull his blade out and after doing so, would jump off and if his plan worked, he would land after the avalanche had swept by. The avalanche was getting closer and closer and soon would be on top of them.

The beast looked as though it would be safe but unless Haze's plan went perfectly, he would be stuck underneath a ton of snow. It was bizarre, it was as if this battle had been planned, as though someone brought them here to fight in this place and had discussed with someone over some form of communications tool on how this fight would proceed...
 
As Haze leapt up to release his sword from Darkova's stomach, Darkova quickly 'belly flopped' into the snow, odds were with his weight would crush Haze, and if not he would quickly be suffocated. The avalanche was quickly racing towards them, it was now that the battle would be decided, all Alistair had to do was keep Haze in one place.

His thick fur would most likely protect him from the cutting cold from both the wind and the avalanche, Haze however could not have his survival so assured.
 
"Crap!" Haze yelled as the beast came down upon him, Haze let go of the hilt and rolled away from the avalanche. As the beast hit the ground, Haze JUST managed to get out of the way and smirked as the avalanche finally came upon them, however much of it was blocked by the beasts massive body, meaning very little actually came down on himself. After several moments of ice and snow throwing itself over the beast the rumbling stopped. However, Haze wasn't covered at all, thanks to the beasts huge size and mass, very little came down upon him. He jumped forwards and quickly got rid of the little snow that did fall on him.

"That's it? Tch, you're quite ridiculous if you thought that was going to hurt me, and you are a fool. Because of the stupid bellyflop you did, my blade is now lodged furthur into your body." Haze smirked. "You hurt yourself more than you did me."
 
I will be the judge of this RPB as Marcus is in it he cannot judge it.
As my grammar is susceptible at best, I will disregard any grammar issues.
I will use the member names for the comments and everything here.


Both of you seemed to ignore the laws of physics more than once, not to mention that there were some powergaming in here though as subtle as it was.

Marcus:
You dodge things too easily, even in pointes where one should not be able due to the laws of physics and logic you still manage. Even though your character is fast and nimble, you fail to consider a few things about powergaming. Powergaming is not only being über strong and never get hit, but it is also about how much of a coincidence your movements are. You move around in the air faster than possible, and you always seem to manage to block or dodge.
Although this you did great with the limited skills your char had to his disposal, at least to what he was used, though you failed to take advantage of the area around you.
Even when Gantz became the Darkova and spit acid against you, you disregarded the whole attack; it was not even mentioned in your post.
Your greatest flaw was yieldability.

Gantz:
You seem to take damage or blocking/dodging to a more natural level, but you also seem to ignore the laws of physics and logic here and there, more so then Marcus.
You seem to be able to do things in a shorter time span then one would normally need to do a third of the movement, and still manage to block incoming attacks.
You did not even begin to take out the power and skills that your character could use, and you seem to forget to take the advantage of the area around you.
At the beginning when Marcus threw his sword at you and at the exact same time started to shoot at you. You managed to shoot the blade away, but somehow you managed to block the bullets AFTER, even though technically the bullets would hit you first.
Your greatest flaw is lack of detail.


These are only a few points that I decided to take out, you both did ok at best, but I know that you are capable of much better than this.
You both seem to not really be in it, and it seems that you never put your heart in the posts, so they ended up on the dull side.


This makes it hard to decide a winner, as both were lacking on each’s own aspects, but slowing better in others.
I would like to call it a draw, but this would not make it right as the tournament is not complete yet.

So with great issues I appoint Marcus as the winner. Though he did have his issues, he was the one that made the most believable choices.


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