So here's my character

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(I hope that nobody minds if I make my template like this.)

Name: Nova Blaze
Age: 18
Race: Human
Class: Warrior, or arguably, a templar
Appearance:Considered very attractive by the ladies and envied by all the guys (he considers it a curse because most of the girls that fall in with him, turn out to be nothing but trouble), Nova is the skinny type. Or at least in that sense, he has very little body fat on him from martial arts conditioning. He has a brown, thin yet muscular, and suprisingly flexible body. Though he's not as tough as some of those big hulking muscle-bound meat heads, he's working on that. As for his hair, it is black, however, he had it shaved a couple of months back.
Height: 6'0
Hair Color: Black
Eye color: White
Clothing: He wears a white t-shirt under a black, sleeveless hooded vest for a top. For a bottom, he wears a pair of baggy black pants, rolled up to the calves, a pair of brown, leather, close-toed sandals.
Weapon/s: Estillo de Reino style martial arts (a cross between Capoeira nad Tae Kwon Do), A red-bladed katana with ancient letters written along the flat, and simple concealed survival knife
Special Abilities (if any): It is debatable on the fact of wheter or not it's magic, but Nova is a talented pyrokinetic. Granted, he does lack the emotional control that skilled ones do, but that's becuase he's still a beginner in it's professional use.
History: Nova was born from a poor yet hardworking family. Though it would've been better for the family to teach him the family craft of leather working, his parents found out that he had a knack for fighting, and a very special gift that seperated him from the rest of the boys around the neighborhood:that was the gift of flame. Knowing that he'd be more destructive to himself than others, he was sent to the academy of the Estillo De Reino style. From there, he trained tirelessley mastering the style, adding a bit of a "blaze style" touch to it. Now that he's graduated from the academy though, he seeks one thing that life as a poor man would've never afforded him: Adventure.
 
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Not a bad character at all. This is pretty decent and goes into depth. May I ask what the character's personality is like? Is it dark, cold and ruthless? Or generally friendly?
 
I agree, overall the character is decent.

His physical appearance is humorous, however I think it plainly contradicts itself. You have:

Considered very attractive by the ladies and envied by all the guys

Then:
Nova is the deceptively frail type. He has a brown, thin yet muscular, and suprising flexible body. Though his muscles aren't as big as some of the other guys, they are harder and stronger than most. As for his hair, it is black, however, he had it shaved a couple of months back.
It's as if you're trying to make a double-edge sword out of his frailty. If he's a frail guy, he is more subject to injury than any other person. Having a strong muscle tissue "than most" breaks the purpose.
 
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