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Shion

Shion

Shion Kupozuki
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Aweeeeee! I love your sorceress design!!!!!!!1
 
Thanks!!! ^^ <3 I did that my freshman year I think. The only thing people actually noticed were her knockers XD
 
You have some very nice sketches there, but I'm going to give you a little critique. I don't mean to sound harsh, I promise I'm not being mean when I say this, but you need to work on your proportions a little more. Try using guidelines when you draw as they help immensely with body proportions. Your sorceress sketch is wonderful, but the eyes seem to be too close together and one is a little bigger than the other. The angel one, the head seems to be a tad too big for the body unless that's what you were intending upon doing. The faces just seem to be a little off in some of them, so definantly do a search on drawing human guidelines or I can provide you with some tutorials I have saved myself. Please please don't take any offense to this, I'm just trying to help a fellow artist out. I've had MANY a critique in my time and while sometimes it really sucked to see it, in the long run it really helped me improve. Human anatomy is one of the hardest things to draw (believe me, been doing it for years) Other than that, very nice idea, you have a good eye for detail and I like your style of sketching!
 
Yeah they kinda are. But they are the best set I've ever draw lmao They weren't really supposed to come out like that, but I guess they looked good when I drew them lol

Lady Aerith said:
You have some very nice sketches there, but I'm going to give you a little critique. I don't mean to sound harsh, I promise I'm not being mean when I say this, but you need to work on your proportions a little more. Try using guidelines when you draw as they help immensely with body proportions. Your sorceress sketch is wonderful, but the eyes seem to be too close together and one is a little bigger than the other. The angel one, the head seems to be a tad too big for the body unless that's what you were intending upon doing. The faces just seem to be a little off in some of them, so definantly do a search on drawing human guidelines or I can provide you with some tutorials I have saved myself. Please please don't take any offense to this, I'm just trying to help a fellow artist out. I've had MANY a critique in my time and while sometimes it really sucked to see it, in the long run it really helped me improve. Human anatomy is one of the hardest things to draw (believe me, been doing it for years) Other than that, very nice idea, you have a good eye for detail and I like your style of sketching!
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Well I do have this how to draw anime book but I seldom look at it. I guess I should take the time and kinda practice from there and see how things turn out. ^^
 
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Definantly!! Practice makes perfect sweetie, don't forget that ;) If you ever need any help learning proportions as well, don't hesitate to ask me. I love helping out any fellow artist. I just I didn't hurt your feelings and I hope you didn't take offense to my post because that was not my intention at all. All of our stuff that we do can't always be all fluff, there's always room for improvement, even for me :D
 
Hah! Love it. Did you just draw them from your head? Coz' if so, you're good. I'm not really good at drawing things from my head. That's what I need to work on. Anyway, great job!
 
Yeah they pretty much are. I'm excelent at coping things when I look at something but those are in a special book and I'm not tearing them out. But yeah thanx ^^
 
Lol. Well if those are from freshman year, then that sounds about right.
My drawings looked exactly like that in 8-9 grade. ^_^
 
Idk what happened. Actually, let me find some of my old art and prove to you that I'm serious. lol.
I just doodle often, and it helps you improve a lot.
 
I doodle all over my homework and stuff and one of my teachers has a pissy fit over it. My doodles are ugly though cause I do them in pen.
 
all great drawings, especially like the dragoon one. It reminds me of the good old days when I played FFXI :D
 
Yeah, so do I. Never got too far in the game though, some other game got my attention and made me leave it. Still got a lot of good memories from that game.

What class were you in the game?
I was a war, never got high enough to change my class xP
 
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