Original [Poem] Passion

[Gaige]

She burns like fire
Eyes alight in twilight's glow
Passion shining in her soul

His steps slow, deliberate
Taking in the air, the smells
Of nature, and passion awakes

Child, intrigued by everything
Every sense, adventure anew
Passion stirred by slightest sound

This is very unstructured, but it came to me and I decided to write it down raw. No rhyming scheme really, so if you like structure and rhyme... tough.

 

[Sepalcure]

And lucky for you I don't. Love this, it's very raw and open, very soul-baring. I don't even have a favorite stanza that stood out to me because the poem itself is powerful. Nothing seems out of place, it all just flows beautifully. Very lovely. Hopefully you'll write more poems that just "come to you."