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Silver Shadow

Shadow of Dreams
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Author's note


Ok this is a quick author's note. I am not a good writer, and do not claim to be. That said, i would like hear any criticism you have, so long as you aren't super harsh with it. This is really about RP chars, so expect their names to crop up often. Mainly mine will be used, but i am also using a few others, like Faith's and Rene's. That all said and done, let's begin! i'll wait a few posts so as to let you guys sign up with your rp chars.
 
*cough* You're menna ask the owner of those characters before saying you're going to use them *cough*
 
Shadow Jet. I would like you to include my character Fayd Miyumi in your story. you know the one from your RP of kingdom hearts only his weapons wouldnt be keyblades anymore. they are more like clouds sword in AC... they split into two.
 
i thank you in advance for allowing my character to join in. i will read your posts and offer constructive criticism when i can, and if you should need it
 
I'm sure that you'll know about my character. However, feel free to PM me the full details of her. There are certain hidden aspects of her that could potentially spoil FFF Crisis II, so that's why I'm not posting them here. Only one or two people know about them.
 
Well, Faith, you are the king's advisor. You have powers of telepathy in the story, so you are best suited for that position. I'm almost done with my first chapter, i'll post here when i'm done.
 
Yes, telepathy, telekinesis and flight. However, if you do require more information about her background or any secrets you're wondering about, don't hesitate to PM me in the meantime. I've got all that info ready.
 
sorry it took so long. Chapter one just has background mentions of Rene and Faith (sorry) but the other chapters will be more important. here we go

Chapter One: Aftermath

Blue stood on a hill away from the battlefield. Littering it were the corpses bearing silver and blue banners, the corpses of the King Rene's royal army. Each one either had a deep sword slash or their body was blackened. If it wasn't for Jet receiving the king's royal adviser, Faith's, message, and activated Sunflash, there wouldn't be any alive. As it was, Blue was still saddened by the amount of dead for his allies. The only comforting facts were he and his friends were alive, and the amount of the dark dragon's forces dead.
Bandits littered the battlefield, outnumbering the corpses of the royal army by at least ten thousand. After losing their support from demons, these badly trained warriors were quickly overcome by the royal army and put into an eternal sleep. However, their arrows had managed to pierce a few of the king's forces, making Blue wince as he saw them sticking out of various parts of the king's army. But the amount of dead on both sides were nothing compared to the demons.
The demons, outnumbering the humans combined 3 to 1, lay across an entire section of the battlefield. There were many, mostly imps, but still enough to make the tides turn in the favor of Seingana and slaughter all of the humans. Struck down by Sunflash, there was no trace of death on them, and they already were beginning to fade away. The only dead to be buried were the warriors who had valiantly fought today.
"Blue! There you are! Shadow and Jet have called a council meeting" Luka said as he landed beside Blue after a massive jump. "We're all supposed to be there, including you." Blue nodded. "Ok then, lets go now. I have seen to much of this place anyways" Blue turned and, copying Luka's power, jumped away, Luka behind him.

I know, little mention of everyone else. But you guys will come soon. After i get the second chapter done anyways. Oh well, enjoy chapter 1!
 
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