Im making a semi original story of a completely made up final fantasy world.
But im new to fan fiction. So go easy on me. Here's my idea.
Setting:
Takes place in the world known as Obromiara and taking place in three continents/countries, Rebrandt, Kobrier, and Asturna. (I tried to make the names seem consistent)
Rebrandt and Kobrier are in alliance. However Asturna has made attempts to invade the other over the past. For the sake of piece, the two countries dont wage war on Asturna.
Kobrier- industrious country (imagine the town from the original ff6 boxart). Home to most humans and the most populated out of the 3.
contains five cities and two towns. (Itll be easier to keep up if I dont mention the towns and cities in the summary)
Rebrandt, the home to Paladins and although less populated and industrious as Kobier, have the most political power in the alliance and military completely enforced. Kobrier although industrious, provide Rebrandt the most high end military weapons they can offer. Rebrandt has three cities, three towns.
Asturna, home of the lufenians. Hold ancient technology but focus on their magic abilities. Have been developing a secret project involving beings from heaven. Asturna is divided by north and south. North believe Lufenians should focus on finding a way to return to the sky while South have dedicated their time researching Obromiara's natural resources and making it their new home. North wish to create war and use technology of Kobrier/Rebrandt to find a way to return to their previous home. South pity all races even north lufenians and wish to remain impartial. Due to this, its mainly why Rebrandt and Kobrier have been hesitant to raging war on Asturna.
North Asturna contains 3 towns 1 city. South contains 3 towns, 0 cities.
Races
Not many odd races other than the typical moogle. However Lufenians will make an appearance. So I hope people get excited about that. The style is remaniscent to Ivalice (tactics/XII/Vagrant story)
Cameos
Typical ff staples to appear:
*Cid
*Mog
*Biggs and Wedge
*Gogo (thinking about it)
*Gilgamesh.
*typical ff summons.
General plot:
Kio, a teen boy witnesses the death of his family by a female Dark Knight with a scythe. Looking at the uniform and weapon choice, was quickly able to deduce she was a Dark Knight of Lufenian descent. He vowed to get revenge and 6 years later had become a Paladin for the Army for Rebrandt (originally from Kobrier) for the sole purpose of hunting down the female lufenian dark knight. At this time, alot has changed. Rebrandt has slowly been becoming aggressive and are thinking of breaking their treaty with Kobrier and joining alliance with Asturna
PROLOGUE
"It has been said, those chosen by crystals of Obromiara are destined to either destroy the world or save it. For aeons those chosen by the crystals have been known as Tesserae, and throughout aeons, theyve done more destruction than salvation. Civilizations had to start over from the ground up. It was until the men and women of Obriomiara had enough and decided to destroy every single crystal and Tesserae left.
6000 years ago, and the world have finally established peace with the majority. However rumors of Tesserae returning are rising, and our country is ready to wage war against Asturna. What do you think about that, Kio?"
I, already knowing exactly what to say stand up and with a strong glare in the commanders eyes, I say, "If it for Rebrandt, I volunteer to be in the front lines and seek those Tesserae! Sir!"
"Thats what I like to here, its time for you to be promoted" the commander said. He looks at me with a smile and intense stare, and gives me a new uniform. I look carefully at it, believing I would be promoted to being a knight, but the uniform and armor was completely different. It seemed too good to be an ordinary knight.
"Sir, am I a special bodygaurd for the king?" I ask. He laughs at me, and looks away toward the land. He then sighs and says, "Your not a simple bodygaurd, you're the new Paladin of Rebrandt.
I was shocked. How can a foot soldier who hasnt even passed knighthood become a Paladin? I havent even learned all the techniques. Just as I was about to decline, the commander begins to say, "Dont worry, soldiers dont get promoted to being Paladins out of straight answers or ability, you become a Paladin by showing how strong your heart is. Do you believe you got the heart for it, Kio?
I then looked in his eyes and said, "Yes commander!"
"Good, welcome to the beginning of your life." He says as he gives me a firm handshake. At the time, I didnt know what he meant, but I didnt see the whole picture, even now I dont see it comoletely. All I saw was an opportunity for revenge. How silly of me to believe a Paladin could avenge his family.
But im new to fan fiction. So go easy on me. Here's my idea.
Setting:
Takes place in the world known as Obromiara and taking place in three continents/countries, Rebrandt, Kobrier, and Asturna. (I tried to make the names seem consistent)
Rebrandt and Kobrier are in alliance. However Asturna has made attempts to invade the other over the past. For the sake of piece, the two countries dont wage war on Asturna.
Kobrier- industrious country (imagine the town from the original ff6 boxart). Home to most humans and the most populated out of the 3.
contains five cities and two towns. (Itll be easier to keep up if I dont mention the towns and cities in the summary)
Rebrandt, the home to Paladins and although less populated and industrious as Kobier, have the most political power in the alliance and military completely enforced. Kobrier although industrious, provide Rebrandt the most high end military weapons they can offer. Rebrandt has three cities, three towns.
Asturna, home of the lufenians. Hold ancient technology but focus on their magic abilities. Have been developing a secret project involving beings from heaven. Asturna is divided by north and south. North believe Lufenians should focus on finding a way to return to the sky while South have dedicated their time researching Obromiara's natural resources and making it their new home. North wish to create war and use technology of Kobrier/Rebrandt to find a way to return to their previous home. South pity all races even north lufenians and wish to remain impartial. Due to this, its mainly why Rebrandt and Kobrier have been hesitant to raging war on Asturna.
North Asturna contains 3 towns 1 city. South contains 3 towns, 0 cities.
Races
Not many odd races other than the typical moogle. However Lufenians will make an appearance. So I hope people get excited about that. The style is remaniscent to Ivalice (tactics/XII/Vagrant story)
Cameos
Typical ff staples to appear:
*Cid
*Mog
*Biggs and Wedge
*Gogo (thinking about it)
*Gilgamesh.
*typical ff summons.
General plot:
Kio, a teen boy witnesses the death of his family by a female Dark Knight with a scythe. Looking at the uniform and weapon choice, was quickly able to deduce she was a Dark Knight of Lufenian descent. He vowed to get revenge and 6 years later had become a Paladin for the Army for Rebrandt (originally from Kobrier) for the sole purpose of hunting down the female lufenian dark knight. At this time, alot has changed. Rebrandt has slowly been becoming aggressive and are thinking of breaking their treaty with Kobrier and joining alliance with Asturna
PROLOGUE
"It has been said, those chosen by crystals of Obromiara are destined to either destroy the world or save it. For aeons those chosen by the crystals have been known as Tesserae, and throughout aeons, theyve done more destruction than salvation. Civilizations had to start over from the ground up. It was until the men and women of Obriomiara had enough and decided to destroy every single crystal and Tesserae left.
6000 years ago, and the world have finally established peace with the majority. However rumors of Tesserae returning are rising, and our country is ready to wage war against Asturna. What do you think about that, Kio?"
I, already knowing exactly what to say stand up and with a strong glare in the commanders eyes, I say, "If it for Rebrandt, I volunteer to be in the front lines and seek those Tesserae! Sir!"
"Thats what I like to here, its time for you to be promoted" the commander said. He looks at me with a smile and intense stare, and gives me a new uniform. I look carefully at it, believing I would be promoted to being a knight, but the uniform and armor was completely different. It seemed too good to be an ordinary knight.
"Sir, am I a special bodygaurd for the king?" I ask. He laughs at me, and looks away toward the land. He then sighs and says, "Your not a simple bodygaurd, you're the new Paladin of Rebrandt.
I was shocked. How can a foot soldier who hasnt even passed knighthood become a Paladin? I havent even learned all the techniques. Just as I was about to decline, the commander begins to say, "Dont worry, soldiers dont get promoted to being Paladins out of straight answers or ability, you become a Paladin by showing how strong your heart is. Do you believe you got the heart for it, Kio?
I then looked in his eyes and said, "Yes commander!"
"Good, welcome to the beginning of your life." He says as he gives me a firm handshake. At the time, I didnt know what he meant, but I didnt see the whole picture, even now I dont see it comoletely. All I saw was an opportunity for revenge. How silly of me to believe a Paladin could avenge his family.
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