Poetry All of my poems

[Sexy Beast]

ok this is gonna be all of the poems i have up to date and well yeah enjoy
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My Love For You Baby
Let the sun fulfill our desire.
With the flame burning brightly as the sun
We can survive anything that comes our way
The light guide us, it will show us the way.
The sun is our light and baby you are my hope.
You are the reason I have a purpose in life.
I watch you from afar.
I know when you are sad, I know when you are mad, or happy.
But I don’t know what you feel inside your soul.
So let me know what it is you feel, and how you feel about me.
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Heartbreak
Hearts broken is it a blessing or is it a curse
Some people believe that hearts being broken is a sign of moving on
And others believe it is the worst thing that can happen
Nobody knows but hearts being broken is not the curse
The curse is the pain that builds up in our hearts
We don’t know how to get rid of the pain
Some people believe that the pain stays there for an eternity
And others believe that if u make your heart strong enough you can overcome anything with your courage
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4 Elements of Love
The Four Elements of Love
The sun, the sea, the mountains, the waves these are the 4 elements of my heart
The sun represents my passion for my lover
The sea represents that there is no limitation for my love for you
The mountains represent that there is no height limit of our love and it will rise to the top and overcome any obstacle
The waves represent the slow motion I make u feel through out our whole time together
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My Feelings For You
I dream of you
I wish you were here
My feelings for you are growing with each passing day
I want to get to know you inside and out
I want to know what you feel
I want to know How you feel about me
If you feel the same way that I feel about you then,
Our hearts should be able to synchronize with each other
We will be able to connect physically, mentally and socially
I need to hold you in my arms, feel you, and love you with all my heart
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My Affections
I love you
I need you
I want to talk to you
I want to feel you with me always
I hate not speaking to you
Every day that I know that I’m not hearing your voice I feel alone
I want your love all the time
I want to know if you love me
You are the light that will guide me out of the darkness
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Signs&Weaknesses
There are signs
There are weaknesses
These two qualities are in people hearts
The signs tell you what to look out for
Not to go in the direction you believe is right
But what is the choice
The weaknesses tell you that you are vulnerable to something
Something in your heart tells you to face or overcome your weakness
Once you do that you can do anything you feel that is right
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Choices
Let the darkness takeover
There is no one who can save us
We live in a world of pain, suffering, and agony
The only justice we know is our mind
With that we will take things into our own hands
There will be no justice, nothing from right or wrong just the point of pure survival
There cant be no savor, there can’t be any enemies just us living the way we want to
The only path we can take is the one we make ourselves
Make a path, then make the roads we choose then choose a road and don’t look back
Always choosing the path that we are making possible, Make choices then do what ever it takes to get to that path.
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Unification
Dreams happiness love
These are the feelings I have for you
I want to embrace you
I want to feel you
I need to kiss your lips
I want our lips touching
I want the fire to stay lighten
I want our love to grow stronger
I would protect u from any danger
You are my light, the shining brightness in my dark cave
I want to be your knight in shining armor who will protect you from those who try to harm you
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Deep Hate
I thought u liked me
Guess I was wrong
I’m following the beat of my heart
Going to place to place to find where I belong
Being lost in my own world
Being lost for words
Having nothing to say
Having no idea how to act
I know now that this pain I feel is tearing me apart
Apart from the world I know
Being my own enemy
Living alone, in a world full of sorrow
Doing things I regret
Always looking back, wondering if what I did was the right thing

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Undecided Untold Feelings

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OK I get it I waited too long
You got tired of me
I didn’t fulfill your desires
You moved on
How can I do this to you your wondering
I don’t know myself
You made me feel special
I made u feel warm inside
What were u feeling
How can I find out
The only question i'm wondering
Is………….
How do u feel about me now???

 

[Dark-Angel]

Lmao how did i know it was you Waytodawn in my last thread

The best poem in terms of quality is undecided untold feelings and deep hate because of its use of cliff hangers, some rhyming, the titel had alliteration, short sharp stanza's

In fact ya know what- I'm gonna copy and paste all of these poems, print and outline bits and work on them...coz i'm a sad person who need to work on my poetry more

The only problems you have are spelling you as "u" xD, your rhythm and lack of paragraphs (verses) and form. You are one of the unique poetrist who dont use ryhming as much which is actually a good thing, you use it when you feel the need, well done, you're also write a lot more than what i do. Bonus points to you! I'll admit i'm lazy unless i'm determined

Anywayz be seeing ya round my friend

-DA