Alexander

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Name – Alexander Joseph Rosche

Alignment – Evil...Very Evil...Chaotic Evil?

Race – Human being with enhances cybernetic parts.

Gender – Male

Age – 18

Appearance – Alexander has brown skin about a caramel down with curly jet black hair that reaches to just above his shoulders and black eyes. He stands 5 foot 8 and weighs about 130 lbs. He has a semi muscular build and is very much in shape most of the time. His skin is soft and has no scars, his face is fairly handsome. He can usually be seenn sitting in a chair. He possesses great posture when standing and sitting. When fighting he can use a small jetpack which emerges from his shoulders. His jetpack is two slim bars that are a foot long, 3 inches wide, 2 inches tall. and sticks out from his back. They are gray and compact and easily retract when Alex no longer needs them. This jetpack is built into his boby. At the back of his neck there is a cord that connects to usb ports and other devices. It's a small, barely noticable circle with a usb sticking out that it attached to a retractable cord that connects the uusb to the cybernetic body.

Attire – Alex wears a white collared long sleeve shirt with a black bowtie and black suit jacket and pants. He keeps his shirt tucked in formally and wears a silver belt. He has black socks and black shoes with a white strip down the middle. He wears a silver watch and two silver headsets, one on each ear. His clothes are spotless, his earpeices always in and on.

Armour – He wears a bullet/knife proof vest under his suit. He doesn't need much armour because of his genetic makeup. His vest is only around his chest and weighs 10 Lbs. It' doesn't affect him at all seeing as he can't feel weight in his cybernetic body: He can only control it. It's thickness is 2 inches and it's made of hard metal.

Personality – Alex is very strict about getting what he wants. He has no concerns about other's feelings and uses people's emotions and insecurity against them. He has a way with words and speaks alot around anyone who will listen. To strangers he is a kind gentleman who is very smart beyond measure. He accepts the ignorant way others view him and finds that he could easily manipulate them to his advantage. To people he knows well, he is brutal. He uses everyone he knows a slaves or tools to help him in his quest. If they aren't serving him in any way, he takes it upon himself to kill them immediately. Alex is an angry, angry person inside. he bottles up his anger often and puts it into his actions instead. He has no regard for human life. He's nasty to children and see's them as annoying. He doesn't get along with anyone young and prefers to kill over solving his problems. Most would call him slightly mental, but his smarts make up for his lack of mercy.

First Impression – A first impression of Alex from what everyone views of him is a smart and rich, classy fellow. He always seems to have a stare of a genious in his eyes and never says much. He's quiet to those who don't know and is feared because of his mysterious observational skills. He is feared by mostly everyone he meets and is seen as brutal by those who really know him. His actual personality makes him seem crazy and almost unstable at times and his bravery is easily shown through his manners and body language.

Strength – Alex doesn't have much strength. Compared to others he's very weak. Even with a full cybernetic body, Alex still has the ordinary strength of a young man.

Vitality -- It is very easy to take Alex down with magic. He can be out in just three strong hits, four medium hits or five small hits. Either way he's lost the fight. His magical defenses and pysical defenses are a little different. He can withstand almost any attack with a blade or bullet due to his cyberneticc body shell. It takes much more than just a stab to bring him down completely. To take Alex out with a pysical attack, you would have to stab him in the chest, or head once. Actually getting through to stabbing him would take at least three strong hits in the same spot repeatedly. Stabbing him would most likely kill/defeat him

Speed – Alex is very fast due to how his system is programmed. He can run about 65 mph in thirty minutes. He usually uses his speed for a break or for getaway.

Stamina – Alex can fight for about a day before he gets overheated and unable to fight anymore. After a day of fighting though his sould eventually tires of fighting and he may forfeit if he needs to. He can run for up to 30 minutes without getting tired.

Reflexes – Alex is always a step ahead of his opponents. He can react at the second his opponent attacks him. His thinking is sharp and he can dodge most attacks that come his way. He uses his speed to dodge his opponent's attacks.

Fighting Style – Alexander's fighting style is street fighting mixed with gymnastics. (Very much like Lili from the Tekken Series) It includes many flips and graceful jabbing and punching. He uses this in hand to hand combat. In general, Alex fights dirty in all situations. He will do anything it takes to kill his opponents. He loves to resort to using others to do his work for him or making unfair fights.

Weapons – Alex carries two silver pistols which he keeps hidden in his suit coat. They are made of pure silver and the bullets are silver also. These pistols are always fully loaded and there are no extra clips for bullets once the 6 rounds from each gun are used.

Abilities – Due to his cybenetics:


Jetpack: He has a jetpack upon his back that automatically activates every time he jumps. When Alex jumps, it activates allowing him to jump as high as 3 stories into the air. The jetpack disengages after 3 stories and alex will either have to land somewhere immediately after or find a surface to land on which to jump again. Thsi tactics is great for battle as he can jump out of range of harsh attacks or buy enough time to think of another strategy. His body allows him to not be too injured when landing from a large height. Another function this jetpack serves is in assistance in fighting. When Alex is going in for a jump kick, it will kick in, giving him a smaller boost than usual making him jolt towards his victim much faster than anticipated, thus delivering a very powerful kick. The jetpack is control by Alex's intentions and thoughts.


Transfer: Due to the digital enhancements his soul is stored in a shell like body. It is contained within a vessel in the shell's head and links his mind to all of the cybernetic parts. His thoughts and actions then control these parts and he can fight. A cord from the back of his neck allows him to connect to anything with a usb port, that be computers or otherwise.


Doing this he can aquire information from the internet due to satellites in the sky that belong to him and his company. He can also transfer his own data into digital devices such as going into a computer and taking it over in order to control it's functions or gain access to locked places. He can surf the internet but he cannot stay in electronical devies for over eight hours long or else his soul would be capable of being completely lost in the sea of information provided to him. Another risk this runs is if the device he resides in, such as a computer, is destroyed or shut down while he is occupying it, he will not be able to gain access out of the device itself. He would have to surf the web and find an outlet through another computer if he wished to escape..


The second part of his transfer ability is the transfer of his sould into other cybernetic dummies he can link to. He always keeps extra dummies in his lab to be ready to link to. He transfers to other dummies by pluging into the usb ports hidden on the back of their necks.
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Magic – None

History – Alex was raised in a very rich family. He was raised very proper, being taught how to fence and how to practice good manners. Alex was very smart in school and skipped numerous grades to to his academic exellence. He also got into various activities such as gymnastics, self defense fighting, and running track. His family owned a giant company that funded many mafias, and street gangs who did dealing on the side.

One day in an outing , the police had come to arrest his family in their dealing with gangs and business. He was only 16. Alex's father and mother took him into a car and tried to outrun the cops but were surrounded and the car was shot full of holes, leaving his parents dead and Alex fatally injured.

With Alex barely holding on, his uncle who had inherited his family's research company found a way to stor Alex's soul, meaning memories, personality, and feelings, into computerized data so that the boy could live. Hundreds of Cybernetic dummies were created in the same image of Alex in the form of his teen youth.

From then on Alex had aquired these cybernetic bodies and had nothing but pain and anguish in his heart. He was used as an experiment for a year, with his uncles company and had gotten used to his cybernetic body although he hated the fact that he wasn't fully human anymore.

When Alex turned seventeen he murdered his uncle and his uncles family, covering it up to look like an accident and thus became the new heir to his family's company. With no mercy and an ever growing hatred for humankind, Alex found ways to use his own sould to travel through electrical devices and operate them. He also recruited the gangs and mafia's along with his company combining them all into one group.

Thus Alex began his plan to take over the world to make it suffer as he had. He has been destroying other competitors with his company and it's technology and plays many brain games with others in order to get what he wanted. In a year his heart had turned cold. He had no value for human life anymore and has decided that it's his way or no way.
 
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I'd like to see a little more expansion here in either/both of these sections. Be as specific as you possibly can. Facial structure/features, notable scars, etc.

Armour

What's it made of? Does it cover his whole torso? His arms? How thick is it? Weight? Does it impair his movement in anyway?

Personality -

Seems to be missing.

Vitality -- It is very easy to take Alex down with magic. He can be out in just one strong hit, two medium hits or five small hits. Either way he's out.

Very rare that I say this, but are you sure you want him that weak against magic? Unless he has some form of avoiding a magical attack (Reflexes?), I could stand to see his defenses upped a little bit. I know you're going for balance with his physical strength, and that's appreciated, but I think you may have overcompensated a bit.

Also, define "out."

Weapons

What are the measurements of the pistols? Length, caliber, etc.

Abilities

The jetpack ability wouldn't be usable in an RPB. Theoretically, if you were in trouble, you could just fly away, and a character without the ability to keep up would be SOL.

The transfer ability is iffy as well. In theory, it makes him immortal/impossible to defeat. The only way it can be allowed is if, after the transfer, he is incapable of fighting for a length of time. In other words, it can't be used a battle tactic. Only as a saving his consciousness tactic.
 
But, I don't know anything about the specifics of how certain things are made of :sad2: Like bullet proof vests....can i just say it's all made of hard metally stuff? :P I also don't know much about what caliber even means when it comes to guns :sad2: Screw it he's getting knives.

I'd like to see a little more expansion here in either/both of these sections. Be as specific as you possibly can. Facial structure/features, notable scars, etc.

I put more but....there's nothing special in the looks department. He's very plain...

I also have some questions.

For balance I mmade him very weak against magic because I wanted his other abilities to be able to work. There is a certain balance, and the transefer ability could be explained more but he's not "immortal". He has a soul, and his weaknesses are clearly explained. He's easy to kill you just have to be smart about it. If not then oh well. He doesn't have anything else astonishing about him but that one thing. He's intended to be in a more realistic setting. My origional intentions was for him to be a rich spoiled human who would be able to buy machines and other toys that could fight for him, but lately I've been hearing alot of "Oh my character is invincible and technically this and blah that" from others who already have approved borderline powerplayable characters. I just want to give Alexander a way to compete with these others so as not to be completely overpowered in a fight. I also wanted to keep most aspect of him simple because he's really nothing special when it comes to abilities. He uses his brain and other things more than fighting himself...

There is a way to make the transfer ability work. As I said it was a rough draft....and my fingers got tired of typing so i'll edit his abilities to seem more fitting to you.
 
Ok, the adjustments you made to Appearance, Personality, the Jetpack Ability are all good and approvable.

As for not knowing what caliber is, what bulletproof vests are made of, etc., you might have to do a little research. I've had to do it before for a couple characters. The vast majority of the info is readily available.

If you're fine with the balance, I'm fine with the balance. I was actually giving you license to make him stronger, but I'm not going to force you into that if you don't want it.

As to the Transfer ability, I'm not completely against it. I just don't want it to be used as a tactic where it's an instant full heal. Example... battle battle battle, I have you on the ropes at 5% health, you transfer to a clone that's 10 yards away, and bam, you're at full health and ready to fight some more, while I'm stuck at X% of my health.
 
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