Zitanier

One-winged Demon

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Name:Zitanier Zen

Title:Mister Z

Aligment:Good

Race:Human

Gender:Male

Age:17

Appearance:Zitanier is very tall thin and he has short black spiky hair.

Attire:Zitanier is wearing snow camouflageshorts a red T-shirt with an card on it and black and white shoes

First Impression:When he meets a new person he is very nervous but if he knows the person a lot he will react friendly and cool.He will say many jokes if he is in a good mood but if he isn't in a good mood he will be cold.

Strength:He isn't verly strong physically and he prefers to use weapons to fight.
However a fist could take 50 HP from the enemy

Speed:He isn't very fast and he HATES running but he attacks very fast.

Endurance:He has a great stamina and he doesn't takes alot of damage

Reflexes:He doesn't reacts fast,if somebody try to scare him he won't be scared so if somebody ambush him he will stay calm.

Fighting Style:He uses many tactics;he may rush into the enemy and start hiting with mania or he will wait the enemy to attack and he may use the fake death.Also if there is something important(nation,friend,etc) and he has to do something that is a suicide he 'll do it.

Weapons:Zitanier has two fireblades.The fire blades is a weapon that comes from Zen the creator of Zen family and it is given to people of the Zen family from generation to generation.

Armour:He has only an bullet-proof jacket.

Abilities:Zitanier uses the sword dance to heal his comrades and he uses flame tornado when there are many enemies around.

Magic:Zitanier dislikes magic and he uses only fire.

History:Zitanier is living in Hellion a small nation.He is the last alive member from the Zen family a family that exists from the creation of Hellion and her's mission is to protect the Hellion from the enemies.Unfortunately Zitanier lost his mother at his 3,his father at his 12 and his older brother(Who was taking care of Zitanier when their parents died)at his 15.Now hes is a student in Favia Garden and he dreams to be a strong warrior and to take revenge for his family but first we wants to make a family.
 
This is way too vague.
Everything needs more detail.

Try this, picture him in your mind, then write down what you see.
The magic needs severely more detail, you have to detail what each spell does (if he has multiple), estimated damage, energy drain (AKA: Mana drain), what it looks like when casting... etc.

The weapons needs to be detailed more, what does it look like and what is its powers?
How many items can it activate the powers, is the energy drained from the user, or dues it have a built in power source?

All in all, this bio is too vague for approval, I'm sorry but for now.

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