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Caije

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Crash! A storm brewed, Frightning thunderbolts emerged from the sky. Smashing of the hard surface. Man, Women and Child looked scared as they looked up on the storm. it had never been this loud before.

Perched on his throne the king also looked out. He moved past his guards and trough the metal doors onto his balcony. He looked shocked as he stepped backwards. He drew his sword and threw himself forward.
The thunderbolts brewed and grew louder. Shocks hitting man. From each shock a monster came out. Demon like with fangs sticking out. The kings Caverary moved out of the stables and charged trough the city to try get there in time.
Smashing trough the panicking crowd they slashed forward and drew there long swords. they slashed the montsers as the monsters attempted to burn the city.
The clouds opened up andglowed a violet couler.
BANG!
Several black dragons emerdeged from the clouds and swooped on the city. In the lead a man in black armour. he rallied the other dragoons who were on the dragons cheering. They dived down on the city burning it.
The king looked on. He looked at his Heir. A young lad about the age of 14.
"Vixti my son, If I do not return, please look after the kingdom..."
The Child looked scared. His eyes Glued on the Chaos emerdging from town. He was frightened.
"Father? What is happening" The child croaked.
"He is back....." the father said, he moved forward drawing his sword. His Bodyguards coming behind him.

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6 Years later
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The sun came up. It was a bright cloudly day. The prince of the castle awoke. He got up and looked out the window. The sea was just divine in his eyes. It was peaceful and calm.
The prince looked west and saw the docks. He could clearly se Battle-ships being loaded. He scowled. He retreated out of the castle and into the grounds. He saw the Royal Knight who was in charge of castle defence.
The Boy asked where his father was. He was worried. He charged onto his horse and over to the docks. he was too late though. the boats had emerdged.
A week later the boats washed upon shore. or at least what was left of them. They were shattered and falf sunken. the Queen was awoke immediatley. She was told her husband had fallen. The boy Outraged.

Two days later that same storm came. Chaos erupted. The men marcherd to meet the monsters but were ambushed by the dragons. The prince wounded fled from the city unconcious by a Loyal soldier. They Halted at a Inn, to recover his Inuries.

The battle for the world has Just begun.....

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Sorry If that took so Long, Let me give you a little explanation....
The flashback for 6 years ago is what Happened when the Evil king, reffered to as He returned. People still to this day do not know how the monsters got here. Or how he was Ressurected.
Basically the Evil king took over a peaceful nation and plotted the downfall for the race of men. The young prince in that story Is not the same one for the present time.
He is though up for grabs for whoever wants him.
If you have any questions just ask.
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Rules
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No God modding
No power playing,
No killing off characters
You can make a Original character or choose a role of one of the Characters.

Roles
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They Young prince, played by Me
The loyal Knight, Played by
The Prince whos in hiding, played by Vincent
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Those three roles must be filled in order for the rp to start. If you wish to be one of them just state in your template.

Template:
Name:
Age:
Gender:

Weapon:
Class:
Race:
Abilities:

Appearance:
Bio:
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Name: Sacon
Age: 17
Gender: Male

Class: Warrior
Weapon: Sword of strenght. A Longsword with a golden handel. The sword comes from his fore fathers. Its been passed on ever since the king of the current country died. usually passed onto his heir. It has strange scripture on its handel and the sword is said to be hold of some strange power.
Race: Human
Abilities:
Cure: Heals himself or others using Healing magic.
Pure sword: A grossful attack in which Sacon slashs with a elementel attack.
Painful wound: A special Attack which may Poison the enemy. Only used When sacon iis very weak.


Appearance: Has long black hair and blue eyes which move down to his shoulders. His eyes are deep blue. He wears a white tunic which for its size provides much protection. He wears a long white cape and blue trousers.
Bio:
Sacon, a young prince in which is Heir to the throne. Sacon grew up spoiled but always wanted more. His father secluded him from the outside world. He craved more. He only met people from his own kind. Mainly nobles, and Almight kings from Neighbouring countries.
A short while ago war broke loose in the Kingdom. A Large sea war took place in which his father was present in. The battle was lost in the begining when the large Battle ship was taking over and blown to small bits. His father was slain by a demon warrior named Kratos. A Demon warrior fighting for the other nation.
The war was loss and very few few men from the former powerfulest nation returned. His fathers body was brought back slain. Many wounds were delivered. His mother grieved and fell on her knees while Sacon looked on in Rage. He decided to train, working very hard he knew he would be king soon, He was trained by his master, a man named Hiro, A swordsmaster and a respected warrior amongst the army.

A few weeks later the shore was invaded and so was the Kingdom. The Kingdom fell in a fiery blaze killing many. Sacon was severly wounded and his mother captured. Being dragged away to safety from a Royal soldier. They stopped in a abandoned Inn and laid him to rest. Healing his wounds.
 
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I'll be the hiding prince.

Name:Vixti
Age:20
Gender:Male

Weapon:Two long, black swords. They're made of a powerful, unknown material.
Class:Red Mage
Race:Human
Abilities:
Slashing dirt:He picks up a grain of dirt or more and puts some magic into it. It spins around the enemy, slashing at them as much as possible.
Windmill swords:He uses magic to fuse the hilts of his two swords and start spinning them, like chakrams. He then will use them to slice enemies.
Death Blow:An attack he can only use if he's close to death, He uses all his magic power to unleashe every element on the enemy, along with his Windmill Swords.

Appearance:He wears a black cloak, he is tall, 6 feet, pale blue eyes, pale skin, long black hair.(Is it ok for him to look like this?)
Bio:When he was 14, his father left to fight "Him".(Is his father dead?) He became a hidden prince over the next 6 years.
 
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ooc: No its fine, ill change the name,Howver Vixti can be his undercover name...., dosent matter and you can include anything you want in the Bio Make sure it tells us how he escaped though and what he did , where he went ect.
EDIT: Class's are anything except Gunner, so anything like mages, paladins warriors, Knights Dragoons, Ninja's Theifs ect.


If I wanted to be in complete control of the Rp i would of made a Fan fic....lol
 
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Just finished my character in my "NW's Characters" thread over in the Garden.

Anyway if your ok with me being a random character I would be happy to join, if you need a link to the bio click here.
 
I hate creating histories. Why do people care so much about wat happened in the past.....
 
No. Without a past you have no past.=) Fine, I'll make one but it's gonna be simple. I don't have the time right now to make a full one. I'll start with him as 14.
 
ooc: I might aswell be the Loyal knight if no one wants to be him.

Name: Sharku
Age: 37
Gender: Male

Weapon: Doma A Long sword which is made of a ancient steel. Completly crafted out of magic, It holds much power. Easy to grip and wield. The sword itself is said to be older than the Gods itself. It stretchs over a metre long and posses's the power of Fire.



Arcana Slightly shorter than the Doma and is a regular Long sword. It has a Blue Gem carved in the middle of it. It is easy to grip and may be used to attack in several blows.


Class: Knight
Race: Hume
Abilities:
Slash: Slash's his opponent.
Save the King: His final attack in a sticky situation. He throws up his blades and uses the power of fire and Holy to attack his enemies.
Combine: He combines the power of Doma and Arcana to make 2 consecutive attacks.
Holy: Holy surrounds there enemies, works well against Dark users and the undead.

Appearance: He has long blonde hair and blue eyes. His body is Built up and he wears armour. His armour is steel. He wears a Crimson gauntlet on his left hand. He has a a red cape. He is taller than most men at a height of 6'9
Bio: Not much is Known about Sharku before he went into Knighthood. He easily outmatched any other soldier and became the Kings personal Guard. He survived the battleship war but failed to protect his king. As the war continued the Kings heir was wounded and Sharku escaped carrying the kings heir on the back of a Horse.

ooc: we may start now.... Ps, I will have the world planned out and posted a full map soon.
 
...Caije, I don't suppose you remember me from FFG? (I am Blood Raven.)
I shall be an extra, and I shall be straying from my usual RP templates.
Name:Galoko Jiangia
age:??
Race: Wolf/Human (If you want to know what he looks like, look at my avatar please.)
class:He doesn't even know himself.
weapon:None, for the moment.
Appearance:He wears a sleeveless shirt with several holes in it, almost like it had been chewed on and eaten through. he wears a pair of ripped shorts, and iron wristed bands that is looks like it was burned through his fur and into his skin. As a conclusion to this, he has grey and black fur.
Bio: As a child, he was orphaned and a large, burly knight took one look at him and threw him in prison, not knowing what crime he commited.
Height:8"6
Weight:178 (He is currently starving to death.)

How is this.

Abilities:
Pierce:He can slice through certain armors (Leather and chainmail.)
Howl: Causes FEAR status on opponents.

(Character development will make this better in the future.)
 
Hmmm I think Coleman stryker fits best *digs around his stash to find the bio*

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Name: Coleman Stryker
Race:Human
Age: Late 20ies early 30ies
Weapons: a two handed sword and Redeemer his personal warjack
Height:[/b] 6’ 3 in his armour
Weight: 250 pounds including amour
Armour: Rune armour
Magic: Lightning and enchantment
Eyes: Hidden beneath his goggles
Hair: Brown


2. Description: [/FONT]
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3. History:
Stryker was born on in the land of *insert name of kingdom here* where his father was a was the towns Cole supplier, they weren’t rich but they were wealthy enough to have a roof over there head and food every night, all in all they were a bit better off then most. He went to school and learned to read and write much like other children of his age, and he was a smart boy, quickly learning the lessons his teachers gave him and smart enough to know that one can do a whole lot if you put your mind to it. He was always drawing stuff and playing with the figurines he cut from branches and other pieces of wood, all was well he grew to be a healthy boy and he was still tinkering and drawing stuff (more like schematics nowadays though) but the machines he had in his head always seemed to lack a good power source that was light yet strong and simple enough to be build and maintained easily. [/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]So he laboured and laboured to come up with a device that fit those requirements until one day late in the afternoon after he had given up for the day and went to make himself a cup of tea that he noticed that the steam rising from the water was powering a waterwheel-esque device he had build earlier for some reason. So forgetting all about the tea he RAN back to his drawing table and was virtually drawing before he was properly seated the ideas seemed to pour out of his head and onto the paper and before he knew it he had designed something he called a steam-boiler-furnace which he hoped would supply all the power he needed for his machines. A week of frantic tinkering later he had build his first SteamJack, which was proof enough that it was possible, the only thing he needed was some kind of brain to make it capable of following orders and doing stuff for him, and of course there were about 25 other things that needed fixing and tinkering on but the main problem was the need for a brain. He had so far no idea how he was going to fix that but he figured he’d get it right sometime. So after tinkering some more on it he managed to get the motive systems right, and the system that controlled the arms motive, he had even drawn a system that would enable the brain to hear and see al he needed now was a bloody brain. So many late hours and frustrations later it was getting on midwinter when he was outside on a walk around the house for some much needed exercise when he heard the crack of thunder. In an effort to get to the shelter of his home he ran across the field separating himself from his home, now you should never run into an open field in a thunderstorm, and as was to be expected he was struck by lightning and went out. [/FONT]


[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]The following morning he woke up in the field with his clothes singed from his body where the lightning had struck and with a wound up feeling, attributing it to the after effect of the lightning strike he went inside but before he could grab he door he noticed lightning arcing between his hands and the doorknob, he figured it might be some kind of residual charge but when he tried it out just for kicks he noticed the lightning seemed more powerful when he focussed on it. When he sat down at his drawing board he got an idea, what if he could harness this power in a suit of armour? It would make him quite powerful… he quickly set down on the drawing board and drew what would eventually become his Rune Armour, marking it with potent runes of power and protection he made the armour virtually indestructible yet light enough as the structure seemed to support its own weight. During this time he also perfected the design of what he would eventually call the Ferronous cortex. Ever a loyal country man he decided he had best use his new found prowess and abilities for the good of his King and country, he decided to build SteamJack into a war machine armed with a flail and a flamer incorporating both the flail as was displayed on the kingdom’s signet and the flames that the church told them awaited the sinners. Now that he had finished the basic functions of the machine he would make his way to the capitol and see the king, he could make some additional modifications along the route, all he hoped was that his machine wouldn’t run out of fuel on the way, but they again wood -coal were better but wood would do- was common enough in these area and one tree more or less wouldn’t be missed in a forest. So he proceeded to the capitol. [/FONT]
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4. More in Depth Sections: [/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Weapons: Besides Redeemer Stryker is armed with a large two-handed sword that he can, using his control over lightning, electrify to deal more damage to electrical machines or do other useful tricks with. [/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Armour: The Rune armour of Stryker is a powerful suit of armour requiring magic to protect him, the “back pack” collects the energy and slowly regenerates the force fields over time and if in a clinsh Stryker can “overload” the power with his magic or regenerate it by expanding some of his own energy.[/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Fighting style: Although Stryker will not bow from the difficulties of hand to hand combat, he prefers to stay at arms length and let Redeemer handle the mess, how else is he going to see if it works? [/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Persona: Stryker is a vastly principal man, he’s loyal to his bones to his king and country, he tries not to judge based on types, but instead to find the merits and flaws of individuals himself. He’s nice to most people and has a pretty long fuse but once you’ve tripped it you’d best be very good at hiding as he keeps his grudges… and has a rather big flail to settle them with.

5. Magic: [/FONT]


[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Primary abilities:[/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Command Warjack: Stryker can telepathically communicate with his warjack(s) and give them orders[/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Lightning Bolt: Stryker can throw smallish bolts of lightning at his enemies or channel there to either his armour or his weapon. [/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Arcane shield: using this spell Stryker can make either himself or Redeemer tougher to harm, the damage is lessened as though a shield had taken the impact and lessened it.[/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Snipe: This spell increases the accuracy of a friendly model, by steadying the weapon and helping with the aiming process.[/FONT]


[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Secondary abilities:[/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Divine Lightning: using all the energy Stryker has in his body he summons forth a massive bolt of lightning which desimates all in its path (think the kind of attack that in anime would leave a trail over the floor like one of those long DBZ impact craters Kamehameha’s left in there wake)[/FONT]
[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Hallowed Fury: Transferring ALL of his energy to Redeemer (or one of his other jacks when//if he gets those) he turns it into a bezerker attacking with vastly increased strength and power.[/FONT]


[FONT=Tahoma, sans-serif]Both these powers cause Stryker to pass out as his energy is consumed in a single moment of pure power.[/FONT]
 
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