Ugh!

[Aztec Triogal]

It took me over an hour and a half just to write my introduction to my fallout 3 review. I must have reworded that fucking thing about fifteen times and I'm still not happy with the last sentence. It is written very well now though... but man I finding that perfect word is so impossible sometimes. And it sucks big old bollocks (whatever the fuck that is) that no one's going to end up reading it anyhow

 

[Big Casino]

Im kinda the same with grammar, especially if its a big post reply. I change words, edit bits out etc. Would be much easier if I could get it right first time.

 

[Ang]

What was the last paragraph?

 

[Aztec Triogal]

Well I've completed both the Introduction and Storyline sections and I'm pretty happy with the results. I think both are phrased well but the character section is providing some trouble. I think I may have to skip it and come back to it later.

 

[Davey Gaga]

And it sucks big old bollocks (whatever the fuck that is) that no one's going to end up reading it anyhow

The member of the team who approves the review will have to read it, so there's one...

 

[Aztec Triogal]

Oh boy, I'm half-chubbing with joy