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Name: Elizabeth Wyrnn

Alignment – Chaotic good

Race – Elemental, which looks like a normal human.

Gender- female

Age – 21

Appearance –Elizabeth is fairly skinny but she has very good muscle tone. She is has a Caucasian skin tone and a small tattoo on the left side her neck that just looks like a bunch of vines, but it has a special meaning to her. Her fiery red hair goes to the middle of her back. It’s slightly wavy and glossy. Her gunmetal gray eyes are set in her heart shaped face giving her a stern yet soft look. She is about 5’8” and weights about 150lbs..

Attire – Elizabeth usually wears tight black pants. She has cream colored loose shirt underneath a green velvet Corset. The cream shirt is long sleeved and goes to her wrists. The loosest place on it is between her elbows and her wrists. Almost like this http://www.moviemarket.com/library/photos/258/258762.jpg minus the jacket, the shirt closes around her wrists, and w/o the red. She wears black leather boots that go to right below her knees. She wears a necklace with a cross on it. She has a black cloak with silver trimmings. She wears fingerless gloves that stop at her wrists. She does not wear armor. The clothes are resistant to burns because they are woven out of a special kind of wool. The wool comes from sheep raised near an active volcano.

Personality – She usually keeps to herself, but when she makes a friend it’s a friend for life unless they betray her. She seems like a loner but is actually quiet happy woman. She’s fiercely protective of friend and what small amount of family she has left. Occasionally she has a nasty temper. Elizabeth is extremely intelligent and has a good sense of honor. She likes having fun with her friends. She usually is the joker and the peacemaker of her friends. When Elizabeth gets bored she usual becomes silent and remains so as she think of the past or a riddle she hasn’t figured out. When she is insulted by someone bigger than her, she has no qualms about punching them and it probably would turned into a brawl. if someone accidentally tripped and spilled something on her but apologizes Elizabeth would accept the apology and say something like, “no harm no foul.”. Elizabeth does not believe in killing innocent even if it is a “means to an end”. She does not mind killing an evildoer and believes in killing in self-defense.

First Impression –If a total stranger bumped into Elizabeth on the street they would be at first only see her looks until they saw her eyes. Then they would be a little scared. But say she invited them to have a drink with her (though she rarely does this) the person would realize that she’s just a teddy bear (sort of lol)

Strength – Elizabeth isn’t all that strong. Yes she could break someone’s nose and a couple other bones and glass stuff or fragile stuff, but not doors or walls or anything like that.

Speed – Elizabeth is faster than she is fast. She can run 15 to 20 mph after she builds up in cross-country. For a sprint she can run a good 25mph.she’s fairly quick at sidestepping.

Endurance – Elizabeth can take a couple really good hits and keep fighting. She can keep up a changing fight up for about 20mins before showing fatigue. She can run a hour and a half without being winded. If a man of normal size and strength punched her in the chest (bare fisted mind you) she would have the wind knocked out of her and she might have a bruise but she could still fight back.

Reflexes – Elizabeth could tell if she were being ambushed in about 5 seconds and react accordingly. And she can dodge arrows if she can hear them as they are released.

Fighting Style- She fights honorably. She can use a good mix of hand to hand and sword work. She’s fast on her feet to make up for not being strong.

Weapons – Carries a Hand and a Half sword in a black scabbard. A hand-and-a-half sword, commonly known as a Bastard Sword, was a straight-bladed sword renowned for being lightweight, yet powerful, able to pry open plate armor. The swords are good because they can be wielded with two hands, yet a fighter could also wield it with one hand if they fought using a shield. The length of the blade is 86cm. It’s overall length is 112cm and it weights about 1.5 kg. It has no magical properties aside from the fact that it cannot melt at all. It’s made from a metal that not even Alex, the woodsman Elizabeth got it from, knows of. The handle is made of the same thing and looks as though it were made of silver It can be destroyed other ways but not by fire. A small dagger she keeps on the inside of her right boot, it’s made of the same metal as the sword. The blade is 6inches long and double edged. The hilt and the blade are silver-looking. The hilt has a ruby in it.

Magic – Elizabeth, being an elemental does not know the full extent of her powers. She can control only fire made by her or in a fire pit/ fireplace/ on a torch. She cannot control other people’s fire because it is not pure fire. It’s fire usually tainted by magic. Making small fires takes almost no energy at all, while setting a whole forest on fire would take an enormous amount of energy. There is really no limit to how much fire she can create except that if she uses too much energy than she will pass out. If Elizabeth is not careful she scorches everything her skin touches aside from her clothes(see attire). This takes no energy thanks to the near constant and high body heat she gives off. She can control it if she is paying attention. Her weakness is water. When it’s raining she becomes tired and if she’s in it she can’t make fire. If she were thrown in a lake or something like that and were unable to get out she would pass out. If her bare skin is wet she can’t use her powers with that part of the body. So if her left hand were wet she couldn’t make fire with it.


Corpus corporis Inferno- when Elizabeth loses all control of her body or mind (like if she were blinded by anger or someone was trying to control her ect.) her body will burst into flame. Her clothes will burn up and she cannot control her actions. This power is rarely used because it takes all her energy and the after effects differ based on how long it takes for her to regain control. They can be anything from her being really really tired to her death if she waits too long to get control back.

Other Skills – Cooking- she is fairly good with the right materials and spices.
First aid- Elizabeth knows basic first aid and is able to treat a number of wounds
Swordsmanship- she is fairly good with a blade. She’s been practicing since she got her first sword.
Language fluency- because she travels a lot she has learned many languages including elf ‘common demonic’ and several dialects of the language of the birds.
Reading/writing- she can read and write in many languages as well like elf and ‘common demonic.
Common sense- which isn’t all that common with most people xD

History – Elizabeth was born in a small village. She was the second child of Marco and Salen, two peasants. They lived happily in a small hut. Elizabeth’s older brother had already become a man the year Elizabeth was born and had left. When she turned two, her powers became evident to her parents. Salen and Marco, scared they would be run out of the town, kept it a secret and kept Elizabeth in the house. One day when Elizabeth was about 14 she had a fit of rage and accidentally burned down the house with her parents inside. Horrified by what she had done, she fled the village. She decided not to get close to anyone because of her own destructiveness.
A woodsman in the forest found her half dead from starvation. He nursed her back to health and took care of her. He taught her how to control her powers, for he had seen a few of the other elementals before. He taught her how to fight with a sword and protect herself. She lived with him until she was 17, when he died. After he died she left with the necklace and sword he gave her. Since then she has been traveling from place to place, never staying in one place for too long. She’s always afraid of people finding out she is.
 
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Ok theb, I guess Ill ravage this one ^^
[insert ebul laughter]

ORPG/URPG/RPB- ORPG
Name: Elizabeth Wyrnn

Alignment – Chaotic good

Race – human

Gender- female

Age – 21

Appearance –Elizabeth is fairly skinny but she has very good muscle tone. She is has a Caucasian skin tone and a small tattoo on the left side her neck that just looks like a bunch of vines, but it has a special meaning to her. Her fiery red hair goes to the middle of her back. It’s slightly wavy and glossy. Her gunmetal gray eyes are set in her heart shaped face giving her a stern yet soft look. She is about 5’8” and weights about 150lbs..

Attire – Elizabeth usually wears tight black pants. She has cream colored loose shirt underneath a green velvet Corset. The cream shirt is long sleeved and goes to her wrists. The loosest place on it is between her elbows and her wrists. Almost like this http://www.moviemarket.com/library/photos/258/258762.jpg minus the jacket, the shirt closes around her wrists, and w/o the red. She wears black leather boots that go to right below her knees. She wears a necklace with a cross on it. She has a black cloak with silver trimmings. She wears fingerless gloves that stop at her wrists. She does not wear armor.

Personality – She usually keeps to herself, but when she makes a friend it’s a friend for life unless she is betrayed by them. She seems like a loner but is actually quiet happy woman. She’s fiercely protective of friend and what small amount of family she has left. Occasionally she has a nasty temper. Elizabeth is extremely intelligent and has a good sense of honor.
well, the personality tab is a tad under detailed.
Here is a thing I added to the bio template section that might help you.

Personality
Answer these questions in your description and it should help a lot.
-How is your character around friends?
-How is you character if alone and bored?
-How is he if insulted by someone larger than himself?
-if someone accidentally trips and spills a mug of water on you char, but apologizes after, how does your char react?
-What look does your char have on the following:
|-Killing the innocent.
|-Killing evildoers (bandits and the like).
|-Killing in self defense regardless on the person.
First Impression –If a total stranger bumped into Elizabeth on the street they would be at first only see her looks until they saw her eyes. Then they would be a little scared. But say she invited them to have a drink with her (though she rarely does this) the person would realize that she’s just a teddy bear (sort of lol)

Strength – Elizabeth isn’t all that strong. Yes she could break someone’s nose and a couple other bones and glass stuff or fragile stuff, but not doors or walls or anything like that.

Speed – Elizabeth is faster than she is fast. She can run 15 to 20 mph after she builds up in cross-country. For a sprint she can run a good 25mph.she’s fairly quick at sidestepping.

Endurance – Elizabeth can take a couple really good hits and keep fighting. She can keep up a fast, hard fight up for about 20mins before showing fatigue.
Egad woman, do you know how long 20 min is in a fight? ^^
A normal one on one fight rarely lass more than 5 minutes.
You state a hard fight for 20 min, I have no problem with her lasting 20 min in a 'changing' fight, but a hard fight I doubt she can go on for that long.

Also add here how long she can run before resting, and add an example or so to her physical damage absorption skills.
If Mr. Knight punches her in the chest (with the bare fist) would this make fer fall?
Reflexes – Elizabeth could tell if she were being attacked in about 45 seconds. And she can dodge arrows if she can hear them as they are released.
I think you typoed here.
She can tell if she is being attacked in 45 sec. Is this her reaction time, or what?
This part is very unclear to me and needs more detailing.
Fighting Style- She fights honorably. She can use a good mix of hand to hand and sword work. She’s fast on her feet to make up for not being strong.

Weapons – Carries a hand and a half sword in a black scabbard. The length of the blade is 86cm. It’s overall length is 112cm and it weights about 1.5 kg. It has no magical properties aside from the fact that it cannot melt at all. It can be destroyed other ways but not by fire. A small dagger she keeps on the inside of her right boot, nothing special about it.
Why can it not melt? As this is an ability of the bade it should be detailed here.
Detail the appearance and type of sword, Im assuming it is a broadsword type, perhaps hte common 'knight's sword'.

Also you have to detail the dagger, how long is it, what color, one or double edged... etc
Abilities – ummm, I’m not sure if this would go here or in magic or other skills, but Elizabeth is an elemental, meaning she can control one of the elements. Her element is fire, be it red, white, blue, black or any color. She can create flame out of nothing and when she gets really angry to the point where she loses control she bursts into flames. It doesn’t destroy her body, but she does pass out once she uses this power. It takes a lot of her energy. Fire doesn’t hurt her and if she doesn’t pay attention she scorches stuff with her bare skin.
This will go under magic, as it is a magical effect.

She is an elemental? You are aware that elementals are a race of their own, and you detail that she is a human. Do you mean an elementalist?

Also, you need a ton more detail on your magic.
Energy drain, how much fire can she control, how much can she create, if she bursts in flames will she be naked afterward? So her skin causes one to be burned, would this not scorch her clothes as well?
The skin part needs more detailing as well.
Also, being completely fire immune will fiver you a serious weakness towards water. Just so you know the logical balance, if your body is so strongly elemented to fire, it will have no resistance towards the opposite. Off course rain is nto THAT bad, but even that will drain/harm her.
Also know that fire cast towards her by other mage players, you are NOT allowed to manipulate this as it is not "your spell"
if you need a reason, thin that said fire is tainted by your opponent's energy and therefore will not be pure fire.

lets start with this for now.
Magic – see abilities

Other Skills – Cooking- she is fairly good with the right materials and spices.
First aid- Elizabeth knows basic first aid and is able to treat a number of wounds
Swordsmanship- she is fairly good with a blade. She’s been practicing since she got her first sword.
Language fluency- because she travels a lot she has learned many languages.
Reading/writing- she can read and write in many languages as well.
Common sense- which isn’t all that common with most people xD
The language and wiring, how many languages and what kinds?
In stead of making your own, try and use some common used.
Elvish and 'common demonic' are the only ones that come to mind to be learn able by any RP char due to the versatility on how a char can be made.

History – Elizabeth was born in a small village. She was the second child of Marco and Salen, two peasants. They lived happily in a small hut. Elizabeth’s older brother had already become a man the year Elizabeth was born and had left. When she turned two, her powers became evident to her parents. Salen and Marco, scared they would be run out of the town, kept it a secret and kept Elizabeth in the house. One day when Elizabeth was about 14 she had a fit of rage and accidentally burned down the house with her parents inside. Horrified by what she had done, she fled the village. She decided not to get close to anyone because of her own destructiveness.
A woodsman in the forest found her half dead from starvation. He nursed her back to health and took care of her. He taught her how to control her powers, for he had seen a few of the other elementals before. He taught her how to fight with a sword and protect herself. She lived with him until she was 17, when he died. After he died she left with the necklace and sword he gave her. Since then she has been traveling from place to place, never staying in one place for too long. She’s always afraid of people finding out she is.
As usual, I wont read the history during my nag, as the rest of the information should stand alone without it.

Your greatest problem is this bio is your Magic tab.
First of all you placed it wrong but this is no biggie.
I have detailed what you should start with to begin with, but I know that we will have several posts regarding it.

For now, this character is [Not Approved]


If needed here are some Approved characters that have been picked by random.
Of the Lot
Alumar Loren is a wizard only char, so you can perhaps get something from that.
Cleret also have some magical skills you might learn something from.

If needed there is also a character creating tutorial pinned in The Heroes that might help you with your non magical things, as I haven't created a mage tutorial yet.

Hopefully this will help, and remember to PM me after you have fixed it and Ill take another look.
 
okies thanks but i have a couple things to point out about your comments
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First Impression –If a total stranger bumped into Elizabeth on the street they would be at first only see her looks until they saw her eyes. Then they would be a little scared. But say she invited them to have a drink with her (though she rarely does this) the person would realize that she’s just a teddy bear (sort of lol)

Strength – Elizabeth isn’t all that strong. Yes she could break someone’s nose and a couple other bones and glass stuff or fragile stuff, but not doors or walls or anything like that.

Speed – Elizabeth is faster than she is fast. She can run 15 to 20 mph after she builds up in cross-country. For a sprint she can run a good 25mph.she’s fairly quick at sidestepping.

Endurance – Elizabeth can take a couple really good hits and keep fighting. She can keep up a fast, hard fight up for about 20mins before showing fatigue.
Egad woman, do you know how long 20 min is in a fight? ^^
A normal one on one fight rarely lass more than 5 minutes.
You state a hard fight for 20 min, I have no problem with her lasting 20 min in a 'changing' fight, but a hard fight I doubt she can go on for that long.
Knights used to fight in 200lb armor, carring around a 40lb sword all day without breaks. and so do UFC fighters so i don't actually see anything wrong with my charecter keeping up a fast, hard fight for at least 20 mins.

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Fighting Style- She fights honorably. She can use a good mix of hand to hand and sword work. She’s fast on her feet to make up for not being strong.

Weapons – Carries a hand and a half sword in a black scabbard. The length of the blade is 86cm. It’s overall length is 112cm and it weights about 1.5 kg. It has no magical properties aside from the fact that it cannot melt at all. It can be destroyed other ways but not by fire. A small dagger she keeps on the inside of her right boot, nothing special about it.
Why can it not melt? As this is an ability of the bade it should be detailed here.
Detail the appearance and type of sword, Im assuming it is a broadsword type, perhaps hte common 'knight's sword'.

What has the world come to when no one knows what a hand and a half sword is???*tear* alas i shall work on that.
 
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okies thanks but i have a couple things to point out about your comments

Knights used to fight in 200lb armor, carring around a 40lb sword all day without breaks. and so do UFC fighters so i don't actually see anything wrong with my charecter keeping up a fast, hard fight for at least 20 mins.
well, if you consider they wear this all day long, let us then assume they react to it as if it were not there.
So, this would then be the same as a person walking around all day without armor, fighting without armor. So the end result is the same.
I know what you mean, but 20 min is a REALLY long time, with or without armor, with or without training.
A "hard fight" is basically your all. So, regardless of your physical stamina, even if you can jog/run for 30 min straight. If you do your ALL and sprint as fast as you cah, you will only last for 5 min at most, or around there at least.
So, 20 min in a changing fight is really good, with to without armor. For a hard fight, where you go all out all the time, your 'active time' WILL decrease drastically.
If all else fails, consider yourself a battery, lets assume you are one of tnose power things that last for effing ever. If you put it in something that changes its drain up and down, it can last for X time.
If you put it in something tat OM NOM NOM's the energy, it WILL be drained at a drastically faster pace.

So, I will ok a changing fight for 20 min, but not a hard fight.
Though, if you look at the practical side of it, this will only be in your bio, as when you are actually RP'ing, every fight will be changing, so you will not really have much problem fighting for 50 posts if you want that.
But, for a balancing standpoint, I cant allow a 20 min in a hard fight. Sorry.
What has the world come to when no one knows what a hand and a half sword is???*tear* alas i shall work on that.
Oh, dont get me wrong, I do have ideas on the appearance and everything, it is just that not everyone does, so it has to be detailed for those as well.


I will re-check your post later today, as Im slightly busy now.
It will give you time to edit things if you want to add or remove more things as well ^^
 
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