the training ground

yuki-raptor

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This is the training grounds.

Imagine the real world but all the things from myth and legend actually existed.



We start of in Tokyo japan. How you get there is up to you. and who you are is up to you too.

Name:
Sex:
Class:
Race:
Age:
Appearance:
Personality:
Equipment:
History:

make it as detailed as you want but dont go too far. this is for beginners lol
 
Never done this before, don't be surprised if I screwed up, I'm stupid sometimes :awesome:

Name: Lari Melek
Sex: Female
Class: Witch
Race: Human
Age: 19
Appearance:
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my OC, an old minified drawing :3 She has dark brown hair with bright streaks of red, blue, and green, with multiple beads tied in; and she usually ties it in a ponytail. She has a wrap with a yellow pattern that she ties around her waist, it was her mom's.
Personality: Cocky, cocky, bubbly, bubbly!:P People find her annoying because she's so chatty. But she's not shallow and self absorbed, she actually cares for others and always puts them first. She likes to prove herself, considering that people have always put her down and underestimated her when she was a younger, she has a high temper/anger-management issues because of this.
Equipment: Nothing but her worn out wizard hat :D
History: Her mom died a year ago and their family started to fall apart. Her brother branched away and became an drug addict, her dad is now helping him 24/7 with his new wife. They leave Lari and her older sister alone. Lari always ridiculed her sister and threw insults whenever she could, to make her feel like she has a higher status than her, but her sister would always throw something back that was way over the edge and make Lari feel like crap all day everyday. She ran away and here she is today living on the streets and casting spells on bystanders who look at her funny. She dropped her last name and took on the name "Melek", which was Turkish for "angel"... her mom was Turkish.

...did I do okay? :gonk:
 
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well done for your first time. there are a few things i can suggest. but you dont have to do them. :)
for appearane try to explain what she looks like incase your picture link doesnt come up on some peoples computers. i always find that a description and picture work better than picture only.
also for history try to put more details like what happened for her mum to die and why was she picked on.
but this is a very good first attempt. its better than i did originally lol. oh and a last name doesnt go amiss either :)

plus rep for trying
 
Name: Rasler Namikaze
Sex: male
Class: paladin
Race: Human
Age: 22
Appearance: Rasler has Black spiky hair, Blue peircing eyes, he wears a black leather jacket with a dark red short sleaved silk shirt underneath it, also he as a black vest top under that, he wears a pair of Black denim jeans with a pair of boots to finish off.

Personality: Rasler shows a level of intelligence not seen in others who number his years. Mix that with his calm attitude under pressure and he is a formidable opponent. He is short-tempered and this means he is often too hasty and rushes into things without thinking first of the consequences.

Equipment: He carries around with him a retractable blade that is on his right arm that is hidden under his sleave. It looks simmiler to this except it is one single blade.
blade.jpg


History: Rasler was a normal every day boy growing up staying at the top of his class through school and college, his life was pretty basic that is untill he turned 20, his parents knew it was time to show him the other side to the world, they explained to him that he was a paladin, a warrior set the task of protecting the world against evil, at first he thought that they where just nuts until he encountered his first demon.
 
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both approved. although i would like a little more detail from both of you in the history section.

My character is as follows.

Name: Krystal / sylphia bransteil
Age: 18 / 453
Race: human / demon
Class: Diviner / summoner
Sex: Female
Appearance:
Krystal: here... she usually wears her hair up in a tight ponytail with a bandana tied around it like a bow. Her favourite atire is a black pleated skirt and white blouse with tights and flat shoe. Her shoes are usually converse. She is pretty in a girl-next-door kind of way.
Sylphia: here... nothing much else except her whip like weapon that is usually coiled round her waist ike a belt

Equipment:
As krystal she has nothing but a small dagger to protect herself it looks like this

As Sylhpia she has a chain whip that looks like this

personality: krystal is sweet charming and innocent Sylphia is the exact opposite

History; krystal thinks she is normal. she actsnormal lives normal and feels normal. But sylphia is there and her presence is known.

sorry i ran out of time but i posted it. you know the setting post an intro post now
 
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