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Name – Vincent Belvare

Title – The Blue Eyed Fiend


Alignment – Good

Race – Human

Gender – Male

Age – 26

Appearance – Vincent is about 5'10. He weights about 190lbs. He has quite a bit of muscle on him. But not like he's on roids. Mainly a slim build with toned muscle.

Vincent is white with blonde hair and blue deep eyes. His hair almost covers his eyes. He doesn't have any type of beard or side burns. He also has no tattoos.

AttireSora's attire in KH2. But it's not exactly the same. The main colour is black and the second colour is yellow. He has gun holders on each leg, and a generic sword a knight would use.

PersonalityWhen you first meet him, he's not exactly "inviting". He usually keeps to himself. But once you get to know him he's very friendly and kind. Though he doesn't look like it, he always does the right thing with no second thoughts about it.

First Impression – You would get scared. Thinking that in some way he'll harm you. Looking at his weapons you'll think that he'll use them on you. If you saw him on the street you would try to walk around him and if you saw him walking behind you, you'd start worrieing. He looks like some sort of bad ass.

Strength – Vincent is quite strong. If he punched a wall, his fist would go pretty far into it. If he punched his opponent it would take away 50HP.

Speed – He's very fast. He can probobly out run a dog. He can dodge powerful attacks but probobly get hit by quick attacks like a gun shot.

Endurance – He can last quite a while. He can take more pain than the average human being. He can take has much as he can dish out.

Reflexes – Very good. He is extremly acrabatic. He can do flips with much ease. He can also jump quite high. Remember, he doesn't have any powers he can't dodge bullets.

Fighting Style – It all depends on who he's fighting. If it's just some random person he will fight with honour and pride. He will also think before he makes a news. If it's someone he hates, he'll fight without any honour and in an agressive manner. He also try to get into their head with insults. When it comes to hand to hand combat he will use the kick boxing fighting style.

Weapons2 mini shot-guns. He only uses when he has to use long range attacks against his foes. They look like average mini shot guns.

Knight's sword. A sword that any knight would use. It was givin to him by his father before he passed away. He uses it the most.

Armour – Vincent belives that armour slows him down.

Abilities – When Vincent gets angry, his strength seems to go up and so does his intellegence. He just goes crazy.

Vincent is extremly smart, he was the smartest male of the Belvare children. Second only to his sister. So when in battle (when not angry) he will use his surrondings to his advantage.

He's verys fast and agile. He can do flips with ease and perfectly. He can dodge most melee attacks with ease.

Magic – Vincent knows quite abit of black magic. Such has Fire, Thunder and Wind. He only knows one white magic spell. Which is cure.

Other Skills – Belvare was a former Sky Pirate and Bounty Hunter. So he has all the skills of a Sky Pirate and Bounty Hunter.

HistoryVincent Belvare, born into an extremly rich family. He had a very happy childhood. He had 2 sisters and 3 brothers. But when he turned 19, Vincent came into his father's study only to find him dead. A few months later, the Belvare children went seperate ways. To this day, they haven't talked to one another in a long time. A little after those events happend, he found himself in a city known as Midgarton. Where he met the love of his life, Yuna Lockheart. A sky pirate. She had her own crew. Vincent joined them. A few years later they were flying over the great sea and they where attacked by an unknown ship. They were shot at and Vincent and Yuna fell over the edge and into the sea. Vincent then awoke into an unknown beach. Alone. Yuna was no where to be found. He then became a bounty hunter. A few months later Vincent got tired of it. Vincent then began his journy to find his true love. And along the way, to do the right thing and help out those who can't defend themselves.

 
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Not the RP mod, but whatever, I'll save you and Hera some time. Since your Bio doesn't follow the one we use on FFF, your bio won't get approved =P
 
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Follow the guidelines listed on this link. It will tell you what we need you to write about your character, so that it is easier for you and other RPers to understand the limitations, strengths, etc. of your character.
 
Made edits. Just for the record, I made the history short because I want to reveal key moments of the character's past during RPs.
 
AttireSora's attire in KH2. But it's not exactly the same. The main colour is black and the second colour is yellow. He has gun holders on each leg, and a generic sword a knight would use.

Sorry, but you'll have to either provide us with a picture, or describe it to us. Some people might not know what Sora looks like, so we need something to go by.

PersonalityWhen you first meet him, he's not exactly "inviting". He usually keeps to himself. But once you get to know him he's very friendly and kind. Though he doesn't look like it, he always does the right thing with no second thoughts about it.

We'll need a fair bit more than that. I can't get a good idea of what he's like, only some of his attributes.

Strength – Vincent is quite strong. If he punched a wall, his fist would go pretty far into it. If he punched his opponent it would take away 50HP.

Speed – He's very fast. He can probobly out run a dog. He can dodge powerful attacks but probobly get hit by quick attacks like a gun shot.
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Endurance – He can last quite a while. He can take more pain than the average human being. He can take has much as he can dish out.
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Reflexes – Very good. He is extremly acrabatic. He can do flips with much ease. He can also jump quite high. Remember, he doesn't have any powers he can't dodge bullets.

Once again, the descriptions are quite lacking. For strength, we'll need a ratio to go by when you speak of how much damage he deals. HOWEVER, remember that this is not something for you to exploit in battles. Just because you deal, say 50 damage, doesn't mean you WILL deal it in battle. There are many factors to take into consideration.


Weapons2 mini shot-guns. He only uses when he has to use long range attacks against his foes. They look like average mini shot guns.

Knight's sword. A sword that any knight would use. It was givin to him by his father before he passed away. He uses it the most.

We need an idea of what the miniature shotguns look like. There are lots of things that can be considered 'average' mini-shotguns, but they all look different.

Same goes with the knight's sword. Lots of different styles of long swords.

Abilities – When Vincent gets angry, his strength seems to go up and so does his intellegence. He just goes crazy.

Vincent is extremly smart, he was the smartest male of the Belvare children. Second only to his sister. So when in battle (when not angry) he will use his surrondings to his advantage.

He's verys fast and agile. He can do flips with ease and perfectly. He can dodge most melee attacks with ease.

What you're speaking of can be classed as an adrenaline boost.

Magic – Vincent knows quite abit of black magic. Such has Fire, Thunder and Wind. He only knows one white magic spell. Which is cure.
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Other Skills – Belvare was a former Sky Pirate and Bounty Hunter. So he has all the skills of a Sky Pirate and Bounty Hunter.

We'll need descriptions of each of his magic skills. Appearances, energy costs, and the like. Also, you need to describe what skills a Sky Pirate or a Bounty Hunter have. I'm sure I'm not the only one who doesn't know the specific skills they need.



Update this, and I'll take another look.

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Alright. PM me or post here so that I know when to look at it ^_^
 
Since this bio is for approval for an ORPG, I'll just make this suggestion:

Please add a little more detail to the different areas of your bio as Red XIII has pointed out. I've gone through and fixed the formatting errors that popped up on your profile, so you don't need to worry about that.

Also, since you're looking for approval in the ORPG, please try to remove some unoriginal content [such as references to things within Final Fantasy games], and that will speed the process along. Most RP Masters for ORPGs prefer original characters as well.

Once you've done that, your bio will be all ready for approval for the ORPG. =) Please post in this thread once you've done that, so we know that the changes have been made.
 
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