Shane Vainlasher

Shane

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Joined
Jul 16, 2008
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Age
32
Gil
0
Name
Shane Vainlasher

Race
Half-Vampire-Looks are commonly known, large jagged teeth and pale skin.

Gender
Male

Appearance
Ghull has a slim body shape and is relatively muscular. He has long fangs pertruding from the top and bottom of his mouth, great for biting victims. He has a very pale face as many vampires do. His hair is jet black, and his eyes are dark blue.

Attire (required)
You will never catch Ghull without his black top hat. He wears a long red cape, hanging almost to his heels. He also wears a clock Tuxedo type of shirt, and black dress pants.


Personality (required)
Ghulls personality is relatively nice unless you piss him off enough. He mostly keeps to himself, and is a very quiet individual. When he gets angry, (Which does not happen often) he makes his opponents suffer.

Equipment (required)
13x Vials of blood (Healing Potion heals mana and health)

Weaponry (optional)
The only weaponry Ghull uses is his magically enchanted blade named Xiabushi, and his razor sharp teeth.

Armour (optional)
The only armor Ghull wears is very light leather armor under his robes to insure fast movement.

Fighting Style (required)
Very Controlled-Ghull is very calm and precise with his attacks, and can pinpoint weak points easily. He also calculates his next moves before he engages the opponent.

Abilities (required)
The only skill of this type is his Vampiric blade. Ghull summons the spirits of the Abyss into his already strong blade so it sucks the life out of any enemy it comes in contact with.

Magic (required)
Ghull can shape the Element of Darkness to his will. Weather it be and orb, a nova, or a torrent of darkness falling from the sky destroying everything in its path. Ghull has also studied the teachings of necromancy ale to summon undead. And do rituals to summon great demons.

History (required)
Ghull was born in a small village ,which location is not available, because his town was burnt to the ground. His town was always under constant attack by a vicious vampire, that has killed every witch hunter that came its way. One faithful night, Ghulls mother sent him to the well in the forest, of course Ghull was eager to help his mother. He had gathered the water and was heading back to town when he heard a rustle in the trees. He looked overhead, and spotted something hanging. He looked more closely, it was a body, one of the witch hunters no doubt. Ghull ran as fast as he could but it was all in vain. He could see the clearing in front of him. He stopped, he felt a cold stinging sensation on his neck. He was doomed or so he thought, the vampire was chased away by a town guard. The town decided that they would hang Ghull, because he would become a vampire in time. Once Ghull heard this grim news he got angry.... His eyes swelled with darkness and a giant nova came out from all sides. The town was gone like it was never there...

 
I want to apologize for the delay in response. I will be looking over your post and suggesting a few things to make your profile ready to go. It looks good for the most part, though. =)

The Practitioners area is still being developed, so I wish to let you know that you will see a lot of changes and new rules posted within the area, as time goes on. I'll have my suggestions for you by the end of the day.

Edit: Here's some recommendations for you:
1.) Font. Your black font is very difficult to read, so I recommend that you make it a lighter, easier to read color.

2.) Weapon. I think you should describe the Xiabushi, so we can know how it looks, and why it's special and enchanted.

3.) Armor. I think you should elaborate a bit on how well the armor protects. You mention that it helps with speed, but not really on how well it can protect you.

4.) Vials of Blood. You mention that you have 13 of them and that they heal, but please explain how much they heal.

5.) Abilities. Please explain your character's attack in more detail. Can he always use this attack? Does it take anything out of him? [Energy costs.] And, how much damage does it do?

6.) Magic. Please elaborate on these areas more. You mention that he can use dark magic, but you don't really explain how much damage each magical attack causes, how it looks, or how much energy it takes out of your character to do those attacks.

Please follow my suggestions, and your bio will be ready to go. Let me know when you've made the adjustments. =)
 
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