Poetry Resolution

Valkyrur

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Resolution

The silence rings ever so clear-
Oh so clearly as the skies rain tears.
The darkness advances upon me,
But we wouldn't surrender, will we?

No. We stand firm in defense.
For defense is the best offense.


This is the first real poem that I've ever wrote... Like, seriously - literally. Most of the time, I'm just day dreaming in Literature class... And all... But well, I just found myself falling in love with the English language at some point later... So there. Do tell me what you think about this poem?

Pretty short... And happened to be what I used in a RPB too :awesome: Convenient, really.

EDIT:

Oh, and hey, I'd like to get some advice on writing poems too. I've really taken interest in writing poems... But all I know about poems... Is that it should rhyme....??? Lol
 
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