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- Kuro Narukami
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- Lamia
Figured Since I need feedback,I'd follow Oli's lead and make a separate thread for everyone to discuss and give me tips on how it sounds so far as well as give me feedback on how to improve the storyline.
Atm the story is slowly progressing and I intend to make this a semi-long storyline.
Chapter 11-17 should be rather eventful so keep reading
Atm the story is slowly progressing and I intend to make this a semi-long storyline.
Chapter 11-17 should be rather eventful so keep reading