Poetry not a suspect

saki

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heya all i wrote this song and i wanna share it with you
i know it is kinda silly but......you ar my secound best friends^^
I tried to act tough but I end up looking like a bunny
I might eat rocks in front of you but in home I am eating honey
Donno what the hell is with me
Why my night is always sunny
Course___________________
One wrong move change the world upside down
One goofy step
Make me turn around
But I let you down
No, no one is perfect
I am an angel not a suspect

When you say I am cute or funny
I will make ya pay your blood instead of money
But acting dead back then
When every one looks at me like I did this crime
Don’t those people get it
I am innocent
Please
It doesn't worth it
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I am an angel not a suspect
Please let go it does not worth it
what do ya think
 
Pretty good but you still need some practice. I write songs myself too. If I would be able to know the tune I could tell you where you went wrong. But for starters, very good!
 
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