Fan Fiction Never Ever! {other crap}

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Never Ever- Other Crap Thread!

In this thread you can comment galore. Yips on story and plot are widely excepted, though the frame of the whole story is pretty much set. Thanx for reading into Never Ever! Never Ever story link is in my sig for you to get back!

Characters:
This character thread is to help readers identify someone who may or may not have appeared in the story. The character information listed here will be updated weekly by me. I will try to link as many familiar characters as I can so that you have an understanding of who the familiar faces are and their story….like a refresher!


Main Characters:
-These characters are original and were made by me! Rawrs! The story tends to focus more on them.

Never Grasley- A 17 year old boy who lacks maturity. He has a fierce spirit and always takes on challenges. Life is a free ride to him. He loves to be active and have fun whenever possible. Never also has a mischievous side to him, which makes him seem more like an evil brat than anything, but in truth he really cares. Never hates to show his weakness to others and is easy to make friends with others due to his odd appearance and attitude.

Nyere Grasley- A 23 year old man and Never’s older brother who has taken care of Never since childhood. He has had many jobs throughout his lifetime and is very wise for his age. Nyere cares very much for his younger brother and would do anything to help him. He has a gentle nature and a hint of mysteriousness about him that makes most girls go wild. Sadly though, Nyere is oblivious to the crushes most girls get on him. He mostly lets Never do as he pleases, but for this adventure, Nyere is more willing to put himself in danger than his little bro.

Snow Hastella- Snow is the same age as Never and has been his best friend since childhood. She and Never have built their friendship on teasing each other and she may even go a little overboard with her scolding of Never. Snow truly cares for her friend and loves to explore. She is very cautious of things she isn’t aware of and has tried hard over the years to grasp the concept to just “go with the flow”. She can be a little hot headed at times and she always tries to act as Never’s conscience in life, trying to guide him towards the right direction. Snow also has a huge crush on Never’s brother and believes that one day he may love her back…

Cheep- Never’s pet mouse who up until time warped, didn’t know how to communicate with his master. Cheep is a smart animal and helps Never when he’s in a bind. This little mouse is only two years old and is very observant. He doesn’t like to participate in battles and mostly hangs out in the hood of Never’s cloak or Snow’s jacket.

Giza- A time mage sent from the future to stop the utter destruction of the world of Altaria. Giza has traveled to a time in between actual time. He is sent to give Never the Ever sword in order for Never to cleanse other worlds of dangers so that the evil wizard who wants to destroy Altaria won’t summon those same dangers.

Side Characters:
Nanem- The white spirit of the Ever sword. When called he, is a merciful warrior who represents Never’s good side. Nanem opposes any who threatens Never.

Zanagrim- The black spirit of the Ever Sword. He is brutal and ruthless and represents Never’s dark side. Zanagrim opposes all he isn’t familiar with.

Guest Characters:
- Guest characters do not include all familiar characters that may appear in the story. They are only characters that will have a major impact on the story line in the future. Characters that don’t have much info. have not appeared or fulfilled his or her role in the story yet…

From the FF8 world

Zell- Zell is an 18 year old who misses the thrill of adventuring with his friends. His recent travels left him with a felling of emptiness. When a mysterious man appears and captures a local girl from his hometown of Balamb, Zell jumps at the chance to go on another adventure. Though this time, he’s bringing new friends along for the ride…

Nelly- A little girl from the town of Balamb, Nelly was kidnapped for reasons that are unclear at the moment. She is only five years old and she has a really big attitude. Little does she know that she possesses a great power within her…

Odel- Odel is the beast of which Never has to destroy with the Ever sword in this world.

Mysterious hooded man-This is the man who kidnapped Nelly for his own selfish reasons. He wields the powerful firaga spell and has immense power. He has drained the power of Sorceress Adel only to claim her power for himself.

Raithe-One of the mysterious man’s henchmen. Raithe is an electric channeler. He fights with a scythe and is loyal to his job. He's very sensitive at times and his loyalty is strong.

Sarron-One of the mysterious man’s henchmen. he weilds the power of ice. Often working with Raithe, Sarron is the backbone of the three cloaked men. He's very difficult to defeat in battle, and is somewhat not human. His body is made of hard crystalized ice...

Rinoa- A young woman who, like Nelly, was kidnapped by the mysterious hooded people. She weilds the powerful magic of a sorceress and has a great fighting spirit.

Squall- A man who wields a gunblade. He and Rinoa were going to check on an orphanage down South but it seems she was abducted by the same group who took Nelly. Squall is laid back but when is comes to helping his friends, he is determined.

Fullmetal Alchemist World (side quest)

Edward Elric-<Hasn't Appeared Yet...>

Alphonse Elric-<Hasn't Appeared Yet...>

Lust-A mysterious woman who happens to have caught her eye on Nyere...

Gluttony-<Hasn't Appeared Yet...>

World #2
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I didn't know if I should comment here or in the story, so please tell me. Well, your story really intrigues me. For some reason, fan fiction is not big these days. But keep up the good work, the story itself is interesting.

Can't really pick favorite parts atm, though, Perhaps every single one of Zell's lines. :D
 
Thanx! I love the way your fanfic is, in a way, like mine, although not really. We both include characters from different worlds sorta clashing, though I think I just spoiled my story a little... I'm a big Zell fan myself. Lets revive the facfic section together! :gasp:
 
Bah-rilliant! I'll get started on my next chapter (as I have been thinking long and hard about the next chapter) ASAP!

And YOU. Keep it up. Don't let the lack of feedback get to you. Take it from someone with 4 years of fan fiction experience!

Oh and from another topic. By all means, feel free to crop my avatar!
 
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Okay I'll try but I'll need a bigger image than the one in youre Avi. I can shrink it down.

Arts!

Never and Snow in action:

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Angry Snow....is Angry...
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That's neat. Did you draw that yourself?

And sorry, but that's the biggest image I could find for my avi. oh, well. I'll just leave it as it is.
 
As always, you amaze me with your work....even though this is the second comment I make on your story. :)

The way the concert was interrupted reminds me of scenes from certain FFs. Like how Leon makes himself Emperor while Fynn celebrated the fall of the previous emperor (FFII) or how Kuja attacks Alexandria during a peaceful time (FFIX)
 
YESH THEY DO! Cant wait for next chapter of SAW!...wait...that spells saw....SOAW! There! XD FF2 Characters need to kick some ass! get em GUY! XD

Also... Edward=amazingness! The plot is thickening in a way I never expected, though waiting for the chapters can be a killer sometimes :P
 
I loved Squall's appearance. I know Zell and your own characters get the spotlight on this story, but I always believed Squall makes an excellent leader (just my opinion, though.) Rock on, the story's getting good!
 
Thanx :p Um are you still working on SOAW story? I've been somewhat impatient to read more actually... I took a page out of your book and decided to add FMA in the story as well XD.
 
Yeah, sorry about that. I haven't even started working on the next chapter but i got a good excuse. I finally found a job, and they have me working Wednesdays-Sundays, from 9-5. Tomorrow's my day off, so I'll take some time to work on it.
 
I assume the woman that appeared before Nyere is Lust from FMA. But anyway, great chapter. I guess Never explaining about the Ever sword a bit caught my attention the most. Good stuff; keep going!
 
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