Dark Child
Ex-Soldier
I write poems in my spare time, good ones too.
Stand-by, I'm getting my book.......
LIFE
Behold,
Someone with spirit so bold,
but got a heart so cold,
and she can turn you to stone,
and trying to stay in her home.
But if your talking bout life,
the constant struggle, the fight,
just looking at her, the site,
and then just thinking, you might.
Now look around, what do you see?
You see nothing but me,
and who I'm trying to be,
but, do you believe me?
Now this is what you knew,
I have a heart of true blue,
Look girl I love you,
and I know you love me too.
No matter the danger,
no matter the risk,
I shall conquer my love with true loves first kiss....
The End
So what do you think? I need honest feedback, majority of who I showed there to liked them, but taking them on the net is the next level. Oh, and if you want to put this somewhere you gotta include my name on it..... Anson.
Stand-by, I'm getting my book.......
LIFE
Behold,
Someone with spirit so bold,
but got a heart so cold,
and she can turn you to stone,
and trying to stay in her home.
But if your talking bout life,
the constant struggle, the fight,
just looking at her, the site,
and then just thinking, you might.
Now look around, what do you see?
You see nothing but me,
and who I'm trying to be,
but, do you believe me?
Now this is what you knew,
I have a heart of true blue,
Look girl I love you,
and I know you love me too.
No matter the danger,
no matter the risk,
I shall conquer my love with true loves first kiss....
The End
So what do you think? I need honest feedback, majority of who I showed there to liked them, but taking them on the net is the next level. Oh, and if you want to put this somewhere you gotta include my name on it..... Anson.