My Go At Graphics!

Freya

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154xgdf.jpg

I blurred too much.
123twnn.jpg

I kind of like the colours.
ixe7sw.jpg

I wasnt keen on the colours or the brushes I used here.
15cgjrm.jpg

The Cows damn hair ruined it!
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I actually quite like this one.
2q1fbps.jpg

I like this one aswell.
2j2ay5j.jpg

This one was the one I realised that I could add a glow to stuff.
2hxsgp3.jpg

Arg! The brightness to the rightness! I went a bit overboard.

So many sucky ones here for you to see. Please give constructive criticism.
 
Wow. for your first attempt they are GREAT, i liked three the most, you just worked it well, i love the colors and the text on 5 is PERFECT. Well done.
 
the render isnt the greatest, mabie with a better one you could like it to, coz the blood and the bg, and how it joins is amazing
 
154xgdf.jpg

I like this one, i like the blurryness to it and the soft colours are very nice to look at and easy on the eye.
The dark pink around Kate could use some blending into the lighter tone, id recomend smudging it to make it merge better. Change the setting on the smudge brush so that it scatters though otherwise it wont smudge nicely.

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Nice clours again and they go brilliantly with the render i just think its a bit to empty on the left. Try and avoid putting renders right on the end of the sig. Stick to the rule of thirds. Have a look at this link to see what i mean.
http://digital-photography-school.com/rule-of-thirds
ixe7sw.jpg


Same again with the render placement. I think the brushes are quite good but again it seems a little empty. Maybe reduce the size of your canvas so theres less to fill that way it makes things a little easier. I like the border and the brushing coming from the render.


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Definately your best by a mile. The C4d youv added looks fantastic and the render blends brillliantly. The text looks great aswell. The only thing is that little emptiness on the right. I think if ud did this one on a smaller canvas it would be perfect. Good job.


2hxsgp3.jpg


I do like the glow uv added here its very glossy and shiney looking. The characters blend well into the BG but the BG does feel empty again. Its just white, add some brushing maybe.


Good work on the whole i think maybe try using smaller canvases as you seem to have trouble filling up all the space. Bigger sigs are a lot harder to do though but uv done a pretty good job for the amount of time youv been doing GFX.
Keep practising and posting ;))
 
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I just made these after a really cool drawing of Tidus I found on the tinternet.
The pic dosnt really fit in with the whole.. thing. But I had a go.
 
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