Lilac bio

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If this is in the wrong place can someone move it for me? Feel free to complain about quality etc. And I won't use it till I've got the 50 posts.


Name: Lilac

Race: Lordern
The Lordern are similar in appearance to humans, but with several differences. Their skin colour is, in the main, purple or blue, but the Royal Family has red skin. They also have a body that compresses fat, making them skinny. They also have control over the elements.

Gender: Female

Appearance: Lilac has purple skin, yellow eyes and a slim figure, compared to most Lordern. She has nimble fingers and strong shoulders, that give her an evil look, but she is good at heart.

Attire: Lordern prefer to be nude, however they acknowledge other beings want for clothing, so they wear a thin veil that obscures their figure completely. Lilac wears a vest and shorts made of silk, and these are red and purple respectively.

Weaponry: Lilac carries a sniper rifle constantly, slung across her shoulder, allowing her to engage targets from a distance, but also has a ring that enables her to magically fashion weapons from her surroundings, named Improvisation. Improvisation manipulates whatever elements that are nearby to create weapons, e.g. it will change the shape of a boulder to a sword, when the ring touches it.

Armour: The only armour Lilac wears is a pair of boots made of leather. All other armour is formed in the same way as her weapons by a ring named Manipulation. The ring will change the shape of the element that it is touching, in the same manner as Improvisation, but into a piece of armour, e.g. a breastplate made of rock.

Fighting style: Lilac is permanently jumping around, preferring to avoid attacks than deflect them. She works out weaknesses early on in the fight by using a special tactic, namely removing possibilities as soon as possible, and goes for it.

Abilities: grasshopper's rage - allows Lilac to jump to extreme heights for 10 seconds.
cuckoo's deception - allows Lilac to hide right among her enemies, in a chameleon like manner, draining her mental stability. This can only be used for a short period of time before it deteriorates, depending on her state of mind. (Less time [about 20 seconds] when she is scared, angry or sad, longer [up to a minute] when she is calm/happy)
Rhino's skin - Increases Lilac's defence to exceptional heights, by around about an extra half of her normal defence, for 30 seconds, completely nullifying projectile damage for 10 seconds. This can only be used at 1/4 of her health.

Magic: Form Barrier - Compresses air into a solid mass, creating a small barrier. takes a short amount of time to cast.
Change Gravity - Alters gravity direction so that Lilac can walk on walls etc. Takes time to cast.
Call Golem - Summons a Rock Golem to fight enemies for Lilac. Takes a lit of willpower to cast in battle.

History: Lilac is an illegitimate daughter of the Lordern King, and was sent to the Planet to start her own life. Upon arrival, she gets in a tussle with a monster, and loses, entering into a coma for a few years. She was revived by a traveler named Orchus, who she fell in love with, but he had a wife. She felt scorned, and killed him, and now she travels the world, searching for that wife, for revenge, and for a reason to live.
 
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It seems as though you might be a bit confused, so I want to clear something up first:

Is this character intended for use in the RPG? Or, are you creating this character for use in text-based role playing? The area you posted it in is for bios for a training-area, which allows you to RP-battle and spar with others under less strict conditions. But, this area has nothing to do with the RPG Inferno.

Please let me know. From there, I'll either move this thread to the RPG Inferno, or I'll continue on and help you get your bio approved for The Practitioners. =)
 
I'll use it for training, as I've never RPed before. I can see what it's basically about though. From what you've said, does that mean I can use the character here, without the post requirement, as long as it's approved?

I'll use the character here. I've never RPed before, so I think it's best. So once it's approved can I use her straight away?
 
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For future reference, please do not double post. If you need to add something to a previous post, please select 'edit' and do so. Below are my suggestions for your bio.

Weaponry: Lilac carries a sniper rifle constantly, slung across her shoulder, allowing her to engage targets from a distance, but also has a ring that enables her to magically fashion weapons from her surroundings, named Improvisation.

Please explain what Improvisation is. You're going to need to go into more detail about what it does.

Armour: The only armour Lilac wears is a pair of boots made of leather. All other armour is formed in the same way as her weapons by a ring named Manipulation.
Please explain 'Manipulation' in more detail as well.

Fighting style: Lilac is permenantly jumping around, prefering to avoid attacks than deflect them. She works out weaknesses as soon as the battle begins, and goes for it.
It is unlikely that you can work out weaknesses before a fight starts, because players are not allowed to know what another character's weaknesses are [unless that character does things that hint at it.]

Abilities: grasshopper's rage - allows Lilac to jump to extreme heights
cuckoo's deception - allows Lilac to hide right among her enemies
Rhino's skin - Increases Lilac's defense to exceptional heights for a short time
Is 'Cuckoos Deception' just meaning she can hide? You might want to explain that one a little more. As for 'Rhino's Skin,' please explain for just how short a time her defenses will be raised, and just how high.

Those are my only suggestions, otherwise, you've done great. I've gone and fixed some spelling errors for you. Once you've done as suggested, you'll be all set. =)

Edit: Due to this member's participation within the upcoming Mentorship Program, this bio will be moved to 'The Enlightened.' =)
 
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