I do a fair bit of writing in my spare and here so piece I'm working on. Feel free to comment and write your opinion. Here's the prologue and part of the first chapter.
The Ninja Arts
Prologue: The Many Ways.
Many wish to learn to fight while many learn and perfect there skills with training and use and then there are those who wish to master there skills and perfect there styles. In the realms there a many different fighting methods that use both weapons and body while requiring many different skills and attributes. But at the top of the groups of fighters are the secluded groups who train only there own and those who have proven themselves worthy while forcing all others to leave or die.
These groups each have there own rules, leaders, and traditions meaning traveling to a different hidden village can mean a total change in how you have to behave meaning most people who are worthy of visiting a hidden village tend to avoid others as it is difficult to change that much. But then there are those few who seek out the troubles of the hidden villages and travel from one to another training in the many ways of combat. These few are known as paladins.
Paladins are special fighters who don’t just become good at one fighting style or train just magic or use only a weapon for a paladin trains in everything they can. Paladins travel from place to place and learn each style of combat before moving on to the next place to learn there style as well. As a result paladins have become deadly warriors who tend to either uphold the peace or cause chaos. Some paladins spend there entire lives training there skills in the many different arts and few even manage to learn even a tenth of the combat styles out there. But once every few hundred years a person is born with incredible natural talent in combat who becomes a paladin and learns all there is to learn.
And here's chapter 1
Chapter 1: Mt Maranora and the Chaotic Climb.
“Why do all the good combat styles have to be on top of bloody mountains or in the middle of deadly forests or in some desert or somewhere dangerous like that”, Peru complained as the creature climbed up the ledge a handsome man with long white hair had his hand on.
“I have no idea Peru but I think it has to do with them wanting the trip there being part of the test”, the man said in-between heavy breaths as he climbed onto the ledge a greyish white creature was on. “Hey Peru you want to take a break here?” the man asked as he sat down against the rock face.
“Hell yes”, Peru said happily as he curled up into a ball that resembled a rock almost perfectly and closing its golden eyes and saying. “I thought you’d never ask Kailin.” The man smiled at this before hanging his legs off the ledge and looking down at the cliff face. Kailin and Peru were half way up mount Maranoras step cliff face and were about three thousand metres up so that when Kailin looks down he sees cliff for the first while before seeing a dense wall of white fog. Kailin smiled again cheaply before looking forwards at distance and saw the fog extending out and suddenly stopping like an island reaching the sea but this sea fell away to a breath taking landscape. The area around mount Maranora was some of the most beautiful in the Fara realm and consisted of massive plains with great forests and valleys and all of this was an emerald green colour. Kailin looked up at the sky as he moved back against the rock face which was about two metres away from the ledge, the sky was bright and clear today revealing bright blue skies and a large blue sun that was in position of afternoon while a yellow sun was just starting to rise in the west while the current blue sun was heading north. This was as it was in the realm of Fara and its two suns and seven moons. Fara was positioned in space so that it got 39hours of light and 92 hours of darkness everyday but that was perfectly suited as the days were hot and sunny while the nights were warm and clear.
Kailin took the big brown pack he had been carrying off his back and pulled a silver large flask off the side before taking a long drink of the cloudy white liquid inside.
“You want some Peru”, Kailin said holding the bottle out to the rock that was Peru currently before seeing the rock move as Peru spoke.
“No I do not like that Fe’Rair stuff you bought in Delmar, it tastes to strongly of beer”, Peru said as the second sun started to leave the horizon.
“Yeah but it has no alcohol in it, and that is why I drink the stuff”, Kailin said as he wiped his mouth before putting the flask in the pack.
I'm writing this in my spare time so I'll post each section as I write it. Oh one last thing, my chapters are long and normally take up seven to ten pages on a word document.
The Ninja Arts
Prologue: The Many Ways.
Many wish to learn to fight while many learn and perfect there skills with training and use and then there are those who wish to master there skills and perfect there styles. In the realms there a many different fighting methods that use both weapons and body while requiring many different skills and attributes. But at the top of the groups of fighters are the secluded groups who train only there own and those who have proven themselves worthy while forcing all others to leave or die.
These groups each have there own rules, leaders, and traditions meaning traveling to a different hidden village can mean a total change in how you have to behave meaning most people who are worthy of visiting a hidden village tend to avoid others as it is difficult to change that much. But then there are those few who seek out the troubles of the hidden villages and travel from one to another training in the many ways of combat. These few are known as paladins.
Paladins are special fighters who don’t just become good at one fighting style or train just magic or use only a weapon for a paladin trains in everything they can. Paladins travel from place to place and learn each style of combat before moving on to the next place to learn there style as well. As a result paladins have become deadly warriors who tend to either uphold the peace or cause chaos. Some paladins spend there entire lives training there skills in the many different arts and few even manage to learn even a tenth of the combat styles out there. But once every few hundred years a person is born with incredible natural talent in combat who becomes a paladin and learns all there is to learn.
And here's chapter 1
Chapter 1: Mt Maranora and the Chaotic Climb.
“Why do all the good combat styles have to be on top of bloody mountains or in the middle of deadly forests or in some desert or somewhere dangerous like that”, Peru complained as the creature climbed up the ledge a handsome man with long white hair had his hand on.
“I have no idea Peru but I think it has to do with them wanting the trip there being part of the test”, the man said in-between heavy breaths as he climbed onto the ledge a greyish white creature was on. “Hey Peru you want to take a break here?” the man asked as he sat down against the rock face.
“Hell yes”, Peru said happily as he curled up into a ball that resembled a rock almost perfectly and closing its golden eyes and saying. “I thought you’d never ask Kailin.” The man smiled at this before hanging his legs off the ledge and looking down at the cliff face. Kailin and Peru were half way up mount Maranoras step cliff face and were about three thousand metres up so that when Kailin looks down he sees cliff for the first while before seeing a dense wall of white fog. Kailin smiled again cheaply before looking forwards at distance and saw the fog extending out and suddenly stopping like an island reaching the sea but this sea fell away to a breath taking landscape. The area around mount Maranora was some of the most beautiful in the Fara realm and consisted of massive plains with great forests and valleys and all of this was an emerald green colour. Kailin looked up at the sky as he moved back against the rock face which was about two metres away from the ledge, the sky was bright and clear today revealing bright blue skies and a large blue sun that was in position of afternoon while a yellow sun was just starting to rise in the west while the current blue sun was heading north. This was as it was in the realm of Fara and its two suns and seven moons. Fara was positioned in space so that it got 39hours of light and 92 hours of darkness everyday but that was perfectly suited as the days were hot and sunny while the nights were warm and clear.
Kailin took the big brown pack he had been carrying off his back and pulled a silver large flask off the side before taking a long drink of the cloudy white liquid inside.
“You want some Peru”, Kailin said holding the bottle out to the rock that was Peru currently before seeing the rock move as Peru spoke.
“No I do not like that Fe’Rair stuff you bought in Delmar, it tastes to strongly of beer”, Peru said as the second sun started to leave the horizon.
“Yeah but it has no alcohol in it, and that is why I drink the stuff”, Kailin said as he wiped his mouth before putting the flask in the pack.
I'm writing this in my spare time so I'll post each section as I write it. Oh one last thing, my chapters are long and normally take up seven to ten pages on a word document.
