This is one i done in a different forum so tell me if changes are needed.
Name:Briador
Age:5000(looks like a 25year old)
Gender:Male
Race:Human
Colour of skin:White
Hair colour:Black
Eye Colour:Brown
Height:5'9
Description –Briador has the face of a 25year old some women call him a handsom bishonen with eyes of someone who has seen much death and war . He has short black hair and a slightly narrow jaw.His body looks like that of someone who is fit shown by the fact he has a six pack . He hardly ever smiles only when he fights a rival. He wears a dark green shirt with dark green trench coat that is always open at the front.He also wears dark green jeans and dark green combat boots.
Equipment:
He uses a long katana called Briador's Sin which is unbreakable. The katana was made by the holy order of aluna using the planets source of life to make a weapon that would help Briador against there enimies.The blade is as light as a feather and can cut through any substance. The Katana can only be used by Briador. The katana disapears when its not in his hand and reapears in his hand when he desiers so he has no need for other weapons.The katana's colour is silver with the hilt colourd dark silver which is ingraved with the sign of aluna.
Fighting Style :
Briador has masterd Tae Kwon Do and uses it in hand to hand combat.He masterd many sword styles so he tends to switch but most of the time he is very graceful with using the sword but will not hesitent to using a more agressive style if he need to.
Magic:
Briador's fource:
A magic that causes his enimies to get hit with so much fource that their flesh(metal etc)get cut. Only those who are trully powerful can withstand it.He normally lifts his hand towards his oppnent when using the attack. It normaly looks like wind is blowing when he is generating the attack.The attack looks like a green enery shaped like a half circle. If the oppnent reacts fast enough they can jump out of the way of the attack.
Briador's Shield:
The shield is a 5'9 green energy shield that makes him take less damage from all magic attacks in front of him but can be destroyed if his opponent focuses most of there magic into a magic attack.He only ever uses this for a fair phisical duel and he will never use it against characters who are only magic users even if he is badly hurt so he can have a fair fight.
Briador's Life:
This magic can heal some of his minor wounds by generating holy around himself .The magic is a form of holy magic.
Special Abilities:
Special abilties include defying gravity(performing impossible feats like jumping higher than the tallest buildings, running on walls,able to move faster than bullets and levitating)but the more damaged he is the harder it is to use them. This abillity is always in use in a fight.
Super fast reactions allowing him to parry attacks like bullets etc with his katana .If he is hurt it will become harder for him to parry bullets etc.
After a fight he can heal his wounds by using the planets source of life(he can control the planet to give some of its life to him).
Personality:
He usually dosent talk much and when he does speak he speaks in charismatic way that makes his allies respect him and his enimies fear him.He tends to fight alone in battle because he sees no need for what he calls useless teamates. He also tends to toy with who ever is his rival because he knows that he is more powerful.
History:
Created by the planet to destroy all living things so that the planet can live in peace.He was found as a baby in the ruins of a forgotten kingdom by members of the order of aluna who priticted that the planet would create a human to destroy mankind at the forgotten kingdom.They did not kill the baby instead they decided to raise the baby and use it as a weapon against there enimies.They called the baby Briador and raised him. Teaching him everything they know(history,katana training,magic training,martial arts training etc) but they lied about his birth instead saying that his father and mother were members of the order and got killed by there rival order of bau in a battle .
When Briador reached the age of 18 he was given Briador's Sin and sent to Bau's stronghold by himself but Briador did not care because this was his chance for revenge.
When Briador destroyed Bau's stronghold he saw bau's temple and walked towards it to destroy it. When he reached the temple the high priest of Bau came out of the temple and saw Briador. The priest shouted that Briador was being used and that he should be serving the planet. Briador killed him but instead of destroying the temple he read there books to see if the priest was lieing but instead found out the truth of how he was born and that he was being used. In his anger he destroyed the temple. He returned to the order of aluna stronghold were he destroyed it and destroyed there temple for being traitors to the planet. After that he went on a quest to find his own path .During that quest he studied at many different temples to find out a way to heal the planet. After he read most of the books at nearly all of the temples on the planet he learned that there was no way .He knowed that the only way to save it was to kill mankind but he did not want to kill mankind because he had freinds from the temples he had visited on his quest.After that he promised himself he would find out another way to save the planet. After awhile he wanted to forget the quest so he married the one he loved and they had a child.After a few years when he was out getting food his family were killed by bandits. When he returned to his home he found his family dead and when he found out the bandits did it he killed them even when they begged for mercy. He began to hate mankind . During past few thousand years he became a hero for saving kingdoms from invading armies. People think he does it out of kindness but what they dont know is that he is the one that starts the wars so everyone can suffer. Instead of killing mankind he enjoys there suffering more
Name:Briador
Age:5000(looks like a 25year old)
Gender:Male
Race:Human
Colour of skin:White
Hair colour:Black
Eye Colour:Brown
Height:5'9
Description –Briador has the face of a 25year old some women call him a handsom bishonen with eyes of someone who has seen much death and war . He has short black hair and a slightly narrow jaw.His body looks like that of someone who is fit shown by the fact he has a six pack . He hardly ever smiles only when he fights a rival. He wears a dark green shirt with dark green trench coat that is always open at the front.He also wears dark green jeans and dark green combat boots.
Equipment:
He uses a long katana called Briador's Sin which is unbreakable. The katana was made by the holy order of aluna using the planets source of life to make a weapon that would help Briador against there enimies.The blade is as light as a feather and can cut through any substance. The Katana can only be used by Briador. The katana disapears when its not in his hand and reapears in his hand when he desiers so he has no need for other weapons.The katana's colour is silver with the hilt colourd dark silver which is ingraved with the sign of aluna.
Fighting Style :
Briador has masterd Tae Kwon Do and uses it in hand to hand combat.He masterd many sword styles so he tends to switch but most of the time he is very graceful with using the sword but will not hesitent to using a more agressive style if he need to.
Magic:
Briador's fource:
A magic that causes his enimies to get hit with so much fource that their flesh(metal etc)get cut. Only those who are trully powerful can withstand it.He normally lifts his hand towards his oppnent when using the attack. It normaly looks like wind is blowing when he is generating the attack.The attack looks like a green enery shaped like a half circle. If the oppnent reacts fast enough they can jump out of the way of the attack.
Briador's Shield:
The shield is a 5'9 green energy shield that makes him take less damage from all magic attacks in front of him but can be destroyed if his opponent focuses most of there magic into a magic attack.He only ever uses this for a fair phisical duel and he will never use it against characters who are only magic users even if he is badly hurt so he can have a fair fight.
Briador's Life:
This magic can heal some of his minor wounds by generating holy around himself .The magic is a form of holy magic.
Special Abilities:
Special abilties include defying gravity(performing impossible feats like jumping higher than the tallest buildings, running on walls,able to move faster than bullets and levitating)but the more damaged he is the harder it is to use them. This abillity is always in use in a fight.
Super fast reactions allowing him to parry attacks like bullets etc with his katana .If he is hurt it will become harder for him to parry bullets etc.
After a fight he can heal his wounds by using the planets source of life(he can control the planet to give some of its life to him).
Personality:
He usually dosent talk much and when he does speak he speaks in charismatic way that makes his allies respect him and his enimies fear him.He tends to fight alone in battle because he sees no need for what he calls useless teamates. He also tends to toy with who ever is his rival because he knows that he is more powerful.
History:
Created by the planet to destroy all living things so that the planet can live in peace.He was found as a baby in the ruins of a forgotten kingdom by members of the order of aluna who priticted that the planet would create a human to destroy mankind at the forgotten kingdom.They did not kill the baby instead they decided to raise the baby and use it as a weapon against there enimies.They called the baby Briador and raised him. Teaching him everything they know(history,katana training,magic training,martial arts training etc) but they lied about his birth instead saying that his father and mother were members of the order and got killed by there rival order of bau in a battle .
When Briador reached the age of 18 he was given Briador's Sin and sent to Bau's stronghold by himself but Briador did not care because this was his chance for revenge.
When Briador destroyed Bau's stronghold he saw bau's temple and walked towards it to destroy it. When he reached the temple the high priest of Bau came out of the temple and saw Briador. The priest shouted that Briador was being used and that he should be serving the planet. Briador killed him but instead of destroying the temple he read there books to see if the priest was lieing but instead found out the truth of how he was born and that he was being used. In his anger he destroyed the temple. He returned to the order of aluna stronghold were he destroyed it and destroyed there temple for being traitors to the planet. After that he went on a quest to find his own path .During that quest he studied at many different temples to find out a way to heal the planet. After he read most of the books at nearly all of the temples on the planet he learned that there was no way .He knowed that the only way to save it was to kill mankind but he did not want to kill mankind because he had freinds from the temples he had visited on his quest.After that he promised himself he would find out another way to save the planet. After awhile he wanted to forget the quest so he married the one he loved and they had a child.After a few years when he was out getting food his family were killed by bandits. When he returned to his home he found his family dead and when he found out the bandits did it he killed them even when they begged for mercy. He began to hate mankind . During past few thousand years he became a hero for saving kingdoms from invading armies. People think he does it out of kindness but what they dont know is that he is the one that starts the wars so everyone can suffer. Instead of killing mankind he enjoys there suffering more