Hello, Hello, once again. Well, I had begun to post my story on here a long while ago. However, that thread has been archived. So, I must remake it! I'll go over the details again.
I had originally meant to make this an independent story. However, making worlds, magic systems, and evil bad guys, proved to me much harder than I had anticipated it to be. So, I decided to base it in the world of FFVII, as that setting served my needs the best. Keep in mind, however, that since it's setting has changed, the story has been changed a bit itself. So it wouldn't seem like an independent story as you read it here.
I would also like to stress that I do not consider this a fanfic. I'm not using the chars from the game, except for plot devices, and plot devices only. (or as an easy excuse...you'll see what I mean.) These are MY characters and it's MY story; the only thing it shares with FFVII is the setting. That's it.
There isn't much of a prologue here, except to say that this story takes place a year after the events of Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children.
Shall we begin? And by the way: please comment on what you think of this story. I value all critiques. Thank You.
Chapter 1--A New Face
Zack had come to a conclusion: Being dead didn't deserve half the praise it got. In fact, he found it to be rather boring. Most of everyone he knew was still alive. They couldn't talk to him or see him, and could only do so under very special circumstances, and didn't happen often.
Of course, he could talk with others like him, except he considered making new friends with dead people was a sign of mental instability and overall just weird. Never mind that he was dead too. It just wasn't right.
He usually spent his time with Aeris, but she'd be gone doing......something. Exactly what, he wasn't sure. She'd tried to explain it to him before, but he just couldn't get it. Healing, planet, mind-talk, the usual stuff. But, she was gone. This left Zack with no one to talk to, and very little to do.
As he had nothing better to do, he usually hung out by his sword. It was on a cliff overlooking the ruined city of Midgar and the new town of Edge. The huge sword had been placed over the spot where Zack had died by his friend, Cloud. Despite the situation, Zack thought it was a very nice view from there. Today, he was doing nothing more than relaxing by his old sword and daydreaming.
Today, however, he was not alone. He eyed the person standing next to the half-buried sword, wondering who would come out to such a remote place.
To his surprise, it was a woman. She was tall, about 5' 8", in her early 20's and had long black hair that fell to her waist and was pulled back into a ponytail. A long strand of her hair framed one side of her face, coming down to her attractive jaw line. She wore a dark purple, sleeveless shirt and black jeans. A pair of black gloves ended before the first joint of the fingers, leaving her long, slender fingers uncovered. She was strong; there was no denying the power of that slender body. Her face could only be described as ideal; there was no other word for it, besides perfect.
But what captured Zack's gaze were her eyes. Her eyes were purple. He had never seen such an eye-color before, and it was entrancing. So caught up was he, that he almost didn't notice the two crossed longswords on her back that she carried comfortably.
Standing before him, was the most beautiful and powerful women he'd ever seen. Zack wished he were still alive. He let out a low whistle. He wouldn't have done that had he been alive, for this women looked like she could kill him with utmost ease. As he was already dead, she couldn't see or hear him. Death did have it's perks.
Zack couldn't help but wonder anew at why a person like this would be here. He also couldn't shake the feeling that he'd seen her somewhere before.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Crystal studied the huge sword before her. She knew the sword. It had been a long time since she last saw it. What was it doing here? Was it even Zack's?
She looked out towards the ruins and the city built around it. It'd been a long time since she'd been here, too. A lot had happened while she was gone. And now, she has no idea as to what's going on, and how it happened.
Now, she needed information. Information that only a few people she knew of would have. One she hadn't seen for a very long time. The other she didn't want to see. But you can't be picky when you're in a situation like this. She had no other choice.
She rested one hand on the wide hilt of the Buster sword, oblivious to the fact that it's deceased owner was watching her. With her thumb, she rubbed away the grit, revealing the inscription 'Zack'. So it was his.
She looked back towards the city. "So tell me, Zack," she said, turning her head to look straight into Zack's shocked eyes. "What happened at the reactor in Niblehiem?"
I had originally meant to make this an independent story. However, making worlds, magic systems, and evil bad guys, proved to me much harder than I had anticipated it to be. So, I decided to base it in the world of FFVII, as that setting served my needs the best. Keep in mind, however, that since it's setting has changed, the story has been changed a bit itself. So it wouldn't seem like an independent story as you read it here.
I would also like to stress that I do not consider this a fanfic. I'm not using the chars from the game, except for plot devices, and plot devices only. (or as an easy excuse...you'll see what I mean.) These are MY characters and it's MY story; the only thing it shares with FFVII is the setting. That's it.
There isn't much of a prologue here, except to say that this story takes place a year after the events of Final Fantasy VII: Advent Children.
Shall we begin? And by the way: please comment on what you think of this story. I value all critiques. Thank You.
Chapter 1--A New Face
Zack had come to a conclusion: Being dead didn't deserve half the praise it got. In fact, he found it to be rather boring. Most of everyone he knew was still alive. They couldn't talk to him or see him, and could only do so under very special circumstances, and didn't happen often.
Of course, he could talk with others like him, except he considered making new friends with dead people was a sign of mental instability and overall just weird. Never mind that he was dead too. It just wasn't right.
He usually spent his time with Aeris, but she'd be gone doing......something. Exactly what, he wasn't sure. She'd tried to explain it to him before, but he just couldn't get it. Healing, planet, mind-talk, the usual stuff. But, she was gone. This left Zack with no one to talk to, and very little to do.
As he had nothing better to do, he usually hung out by his sword. It was on a cliff overlooking the ruined city of Midgar and the new town of Edge. The huge sword had been placed over the spot where Zack had died by his friend, Cloud. Despite the situation, Zack thought it was a very nice view from there. Today, he was doing nothing more than relaxing by his old sword and daydreaming.
Today, however, he was not alone. He eyed the person standing next to the half-buried sword, wondering who would come out to such a remote place.
To his surprise, it was a woman. She was tall, about 5' 8", in her early 20's and had long black hair that fell to her waist and was pulled back into a ponytail. A long strand of her hair framed one side of her face, coming down to her attractive jaw line. She wore a dark purple, sleeveless shirt and black jeans. A pair of black gloves ended before the first joint of the fingers, leaving her long, slender fingers uncovered. She was strong; there was no denying the power of that slender body. Her face could only be described as ideal; there was no other word for it, besides perfect.
But what captured Zack's gaze were her eyes. Her eyes were purple. He had never seen such an eye-color before, and it was entrancing. So caught up was he, that he almost didn't notice the two crossed longswords on her back that she carried comfortably.
Standing before him, was the most beautiful and powerful women he'd ever seen. Zack wished he were still alive. He let out a low whistle. He wouldn't have done that had he been alive, for this women looked like she could kill him with utmost ease. As he was already dead, she couldn't see or hear him. Death did have it's perks.
Zack couldn't help but wonder anew at why a person like this would be here. He also couldn't shake the feeling that he'd seen her somewhere before.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Crystal studied the huge sword before her. She knew the sword. It had been a long time since she last saw it. What was it doing here? Was it even Zack's?
She looked out towards the ruins and the city built around it. It'd been a long time since she'd been here, too. A lot had happened while she was gone. And now, she has no idea as to what's going on, and how it happened.
Now, she needed information. Information that only a few people she knew of would have. One she hadn't seen for a very long time. The other she didn't want to see. But you can't be picky when you're in a situation like this. She had no other choice.
She rested one hand on the wide hilt of the Buster sword, oblivious to the fact that it's deceased owner was watching her. With her thumb, she rubbed away the grit, revealing the inscription 'Zack'. So it was his.
She looked back towards the city. "So tell me, Zack," she said, turning her head to look straight into Zack's shocked eyes. "What happened at the reactor in Niblehiem?"
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