Original [Discussion] Blood Conflict: Wrath of the Fey

[Saga]

Ok, discussion thread. If the story gets enough interest I'll make a seperate thread for information, but for now I'll just stick it all here. :3

C H A R A C T E R S

C R Y S T A I R

+ Queen Crystal Borealis
+ Princess Quartz Aurora Borealis
+ Princess Jade Borealis
+ Dweia Ni'Faolen Borealis
- Moss


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P R E C I P IA
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- Prince Conn Cucuhulain
- Prince Buinne Cucuhulain
+ Princess Fionuala Cucuhulain
+ Princess Etain Cucuhulain
- Champion Miach Diancecht
+ Champion Eán Kemoch
- Prince Iuchar Cucuhulain
+ Princess Élan Cucuhulain
+ Lady Hana
+ Lady Maeve Diancecht
+ Lady Sinde Kemoch
- Lord Elfrann Egest
- Lord Dryan Tarr
+ Lady Trayim Tarr
+ Caesir Morcan

T E R R I N​

- King Cyan Zestrin
- General Necca Flayn

U M B R A​

+ Queen Raven Tainn Wolfrick
- Prince Regent Sirus Wolfrick
- Crown Prince Kain Wolfrick
+ Princess Dawn Aurora Wolfrick
- Lyrian Viper
+ Lady Shaylah Yaatia
+ Tira Nova
+ Reryn Nova
+ Taylana Nova
+ Princess Ruby Borealis

Y A A T I A
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D E C E A S E D
C H A R A C T E R S

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- Champion Dainne Kemoch [Precipia]
- Champion Aesal Diancecht [Precipia]
- Champion Fiahcra Mamut [Precipia]
- Champion Tuas Kemoch [Precipia]
- King Ceithne Cucuhulain [Precipia]
+ Queen Eva Hydria [Precipia]

C H A P T E R S

[Prologue] Kids No More
[Chapter One] The Traitor Unmasked
[Chapter Two] The Queendom of Crystair
[Chapter Three] Some Desire, Others Admire
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[CassinoChips]

Yet, as peaceful as it was within the borders, the threat of war was still rising in the East, the land of Man – Terrin – and Eva was getting edgy for the safety of her children.

Is that Terrin as in Abyss of Chaos Terrin? Or just a coincidence?

The threat of war from the East increased and the Queen was once again blooming with child.

She must really like sex.

“You killed your King, violated his Queen and almost caused the death of a babe. I think you have plenty to explain.”

“Oh, yeah, that.”

.........Should I feel bad that that totally made me lol?

Good story so far, though I'd suggest a re-write. Very intriguing, and I didn't expect the blunt brutality of the murder scene. Write on.

 

[Saga]

This is the fourth re-write

And it's the same Terrin. Abyss of Chaos is set in the world of Zahastrehn like Blood Conflict is.

 

[Saga]

UPDATE!

Chapter Two: The Queen of Crystair and Chapter Three: Some Desire, Others Admire, up and ready for reading. :3

Feedback on characters etc is appreciated guys! ^^

 

[Ezio Auditore]

Sexy It's great so far Viktoria Keep up the good work a'ight?

 

[Serah]

AHMAGAD GIRL you've totally got me HOOKED. This story is AMAZING! The brutality of the King and Queen's murders was just WOW and the vampires and the story of how the Oracles came into being...you MUST write more. I can't WAIT for the next chapter!

 

[Rey]

Omg Vikki I love this story. Its so good and omg the Character names are so creative!. I love there names and the characters are interesting. The fighting is so xD I dont mind if its soooo lonnng. It makes it better. Keep up the good work Vikki. I look forward to next chappy.

 

[CassinoChips]

I agree with MLFY......... yeah, I really did just say that........ huh....... Anyway, yeah, you are very good with place/character names.

Quick question: Where did Moss come from? He just kinda popped outta thin air and was all of a sudden standing behind the throne when Orisis was asking for Marks. Unless I missed something?